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Post by silvertabby on Dec 4, 2007 14:40:03 GMT -5
Minerva McGonagall was white as marble.
'You stay here.' she said.
'You know what that was, Prof.?
The Transfiguration prof. nodded shakly.
'Oh, yes, I do...'
She said stroading past them out of the room.
'Brr...That doesn't look nice...if prof McGonagall looked this distressed...well..' whispered parvati
'What do you think it it is, though?' asked Ginny.
'No idea, but it realy gives me the creeps.'
The door opened.
'Minerva...' said Snape looking at her with his horrible smirk.
'Severus.' she said stiffly.
'To what do I aue this pleasure?' asked Snape mockingly.
His black eyes fixed her green ones, they were blazing. Heis eyey searched onwards, down in the green liquer, down, through her eyes to her iner been...to her mind...
'What the hell do you think you're doing?' asked Prof. McGonagall through greeted teeth.
He stared at her. He was a very acomplished legilimence-this was not possible-
'Not easy to get to your mind, is it, prof. McGonagall?' asked Snape amused. 'We will see...'
TBC. What do you think?
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Post by mmadcrazyfan on Dec 4, 2007 17:11:23 GMT -5
ahh!
you have me hooked, more please!
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Post by silvertabby on Dec 9, 2007 10:09:01 GMT -5
she shook her head.
'Indeed.'
'What made you come pay me a visit, Prof?' asked Snape.
'I know what your doing. It won't work,. snape.' said prof Mcgonagall. She was pale but determined. 'The school is against you.'
'And yet it acnoledges me as headmaster. You can't do anything, Minerva.'
'It is against all laws...it's insaine, and...not nececesary. Listen, if you open a grave you will have all forces against you! Hogwarts magic is very antient and strong...added tho the urge of nature and of death and all the 12 antient branches of magic...you don't want this, severus, I asure you.'
He looked at her. She was very pale and looked quite desperate.
'You don't want Dumbledore's grave opened, but you won't stop me. You know why? Because you don't have the-'
' I have the curage. oh yes I do! And I would never let you-'
'The curage-you do, I never said different. But you don't have the power. Nobody does'
TBC
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Post by gryffindorprincess on Dec 10, 2007 10:35:07 GMT -5
This is really good. I feel so bad for Minerva please update soon.
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Post by silvertabby on Dec 14, 2007 10:10:32 GMT -5
'So... I never thought even you could stoop that low...I was wrong.' she said coldly.
'I'm following orders' said snape after a while.
She regarded him spitefully.
'You're just a coward.'
Snape jumped up. And grabbed her forearm.
'Coward, did you call me, Mcgonagall?'
She looked in his black eyes. His face pale made him look like a dead man.
'You coward. You fight children and disarmed wounded men. You don't dare duel me. I'm not wounded and I'm no child. You're a mear coward. Not even evil...just couardly' she spoak slowly.
'I won't fight you. There are better ways...I don't wan't you to die so easily. Go to bed, Minerva. See you tomorow'
TBC
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Post by mmadcrazyfan on Dec 14, 2007 16:28:02 GMT -5
eurgh! i hate this michael jackson version of snape! ewwwww creepeerrrr!!!
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Post by whiteheart on Dec 21, 2007 9:30:21 GMT -5
how brilliant you are !
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Post by silvertabby on Dec 23, 2007 12:57:04 GMT -5
Ginny weasly peared out in the corridor.
'I can't see anything.' she said to parvati.
Parvati motioned her back in and looked out the old gothic window.
'Ginny!'
'What?'
'There's somebody out there. Look, it's s siluete in the dark.'
'Who do you think it is?' whispered Ginny.
'I...I don't know but something tells me it's not on our side ...and it's heading-'
'to Dumbledore's grave' said the girls in unison.
'But why-?'
'Do you think they'll try to open it?'
'who would open a grave?' asked Parvati blankly.
'The question is not who, but why.' rang McGonagall's voice from the doorway.
'almost done...' said the black siluete to itself.
'May you burn in hell, M' Lord.'
The high pitched voice was obviously cursing him, as he turned, he saw minerva mcgonagall.
'Minerva.' he said half mockingly half taken aback.
'tom' she said curtly.
Lord Voldemort looked her up and down...
'What?'
'Let me say you look ravashingly gorgeous, minerva'
TBC
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Post by jrs on Dec 24, 2007 17:26:24 GMT -5
OOHH getting really good... ;-) More!! (I would write more to the tune of jingle bells but that would be annoying...)
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Post by AshleyMcGonagall on Dec 24, 2007 21:51:30 GMT -5
MORE MORE!!!
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Post by mmadcrazyfan on Dec 25, 2007 18:05:24 GMT -5
MOREMOREMOREMOREEE!!
*please?!*
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Post by silvertabby on Jan 2, 2008 16:20:44 GMT -5
She sniffed.
'We're not all imortal, are we? But I don't think I'd like a waxy face...'
He smiled, a horrible smile .
'So, why have you come, my dear professor? Do you honestly think you can deviate me from my purpose... Why, my dear I thought you more clever...'
She looked in to his red slit like eyes. He resembled a snake, but she could still see underneeth that, shettered, yes, but his soul was still there. Her blood curdled as she thought...she remembered... It was her fault, it was she who hd driven him like this...if only...and Dumbledore would still be alive...and the world...
It was lack of love, as Dumbledorehad said, that made people bad. Tom riddle grew up with no family... but he id once love, very few knew, he had loved, 4 years older, Grifindor, Dumbledore's favorite...He had loved her. And she had told him she hated him...just bluntly...it was then that the death eaters were born, new friends...who would never let him doun, because this time he wouldn't trust them.
'Tom...' she knew she had to say it...she felt her lips burn as the words, she should have said decades ago rang in the freezing air.
'I'm sorry'
TBC
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Post by silvertabby on Jan 6, 2008 15:00:38 GMT -5
The red slits fixed her for a few moments. The Dark lord was taken aback, of all things she could have said...he hadn't expected ...this...
'to late for that, Minerva. I no longer care' said the cold voice.
and The Dark lord proceeded opening his thumb, her green eyes glazing his every move, like a promise of curse, like a shadow of a human form.
'Don't.'
He turned to face her.
'begg me' he said after a second.
Her eyes burned.
'Please' se whispered, her voice almost drowned by the wind.
'I didn't hear it'
'Please, Tom...'
'My lord' he corected.'
'Say it, Minerva'
No, that was too much. She wouldn't call him her lord, he wouldn't let hem to be her lord.
'Never.'
He turned back and started creeking the tumb open... The sownd of the iron handle cracking against the marble...like the voice of death wissling through the years...
And she stood there... looking at his long white fingers tuch the white marble of the thumb.
She dreaded what she would see any second now, whe he would open the thumb.
And there was the body, as though asleep, so real...yet pale, yet dead.
Voldemorts laugh echoed on the grounds. McGonagall struggled to stiffle a gasp, her hand on her mouth.
And in his hand...was the wand, he pulled it out and rised it to eye level.
'The elder wand' he whispered oblivious of pprof McGonagall's presence.
he didn't bother to close the thumb.
'Go to bed minerva, you shell not dye tonight...Goodbye'
She stood there, thunder struck
TBC
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Post by mmadcrazyfan on Jan 6, 2008 17:21:03 GMT -5
getting really good!!
please update soon!
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Post by silvertabby on Jan 9, 2008 12:11:59 GMT -5
The wind was brushing against her face and was making her dressing gown fly behind her as she almost ran back to the school. Her face was very pale and her eyes were half shadowed by her hair.
Back in her rooms she dropped on the sofa and covered her face in her hands. She was useless. she couldn't do anything...she had stood there and watched the dark lord open Dumbledore's thumb and take his wand from his dead hands.
'Professor?'
She hadn't noticed but the two girls were still there. Clutching at each other...but there. She straithened herself. they didn't need to know her fears, on top of their own. She couldn't let them see her down.
'What happened?'
The elder witch stood up and walked to the window without answering. Ginny and Parvati folowed her. with out saying a word she motioned to the white marble thumb in the distance.
The girls' eyes widened.
'What? So someone tried to break into it...'
'But why would_?'
'Who-?
'The dark lord' spoak McGonagall, her voice echowing in the quiet night.
TBC
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Post by McGonagallsGirl on Jan 14, 2008 0:23:18 GMT -5
interesting story. Perhaps a spell check, though, before you post the next? Other than the misspellings, excellent.  |
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Post by silvertabby on Jan 16, 2008 16:22:49 GMT -5
The Dark lord, now posessor of the legendary elder wand. Invincible...or wasn't he? And she had been there when had taken it!
But what is he doing now? The witch thought, watching over the silent grounds from her bedroom window. Thoughts swirrled in her head...one more terrible than the other...
And then the worst- He is coming here!
TBC
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Post by silvertabby on Jan 22, 2008 16:31:07 GMT -5
'Go back to your common room- no, i'll go with you' she said moving away from the window.
'Now.'
The girls did as they were told. The dark lord at Hogwarts! But the two girls knew only half her fears, half of the bitter through.
She lead them to the griffindor tower. Then she came back down the stairs. Why did the silly silly boy have to deny her knoleage of his plans to find those- things. It was crucial for her and for hogwarts that she knew which were still left...where would voldemort search first. He knew that in the end he would come to hogwarts...because harry would come to hogwarts.
Bang! BANG!
She went running in the direction of the noise, dreading what she would see, but the noise was soon acompanied by barks. It was Amicus Carrow.
TBC
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Post by nappyfreak on Mar 18, 2008 16:25:11 GMT -5
Post more. It's really great!
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Post by Desdemona on May 1, 2008 12:48:35 GMT -5
I wanna read more pleasey pleasey please!
this story is teh awsomeness.
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Post by silvertabby on May 4, 2008 5:28:22 GMT -5
'Can I help you, prof Carrow?' she asked looking at the ridiculous men banging on the hard stone door like an idiot.
'I can't -get-through-this-damed -door!'
'Well that is obvious. But...Why don't you ...open the 'damed' door, professor?'
Carrw stopped banging and turned to her.
'It won't open.'he said spitefully masaging his hand.' Get me Flitwick! Go, woman!
It was obvious prof McGonagall did not take kindly at being adressed with'woman' and she continued in a tone of icy politeness.
'But didn't prof Flitwick let your sister in earlyer tonight. why doesn't she open the door for you so that you wouldn't have to wake up the whole castle?'
'She ain't answering, you old slut! You open it. Now!'
'certenly if you wish it.' she said moving to stand infront of the door with unbelieveble dignity, that left the man speach less and a little ofended.
'Eh, cvome on'
The raven asked the question, and she answered it, like any other capablke theacher would she added when he questioned her.
And so they entered the raven claw tower...
TBC
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