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Post by LadyJolly on Jul 26, 2005 20:18:48 GMT -5
I hope their talk will work out a few problems so that Cat will have both parents together hopefully. I'm looking forward to the next update Lady Jolly
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Post by Jaya on Jul 26, 2005 21:13:37 GMT -5
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Post by Sensiblyquirky on Jul 26, 2005 21:27:31 GMT -5
I thought that scene was done so well. Hopefully Minerva can let the guilt go, and they'll end of at Albus' at least a wee bit earlier than planned. Great job.
Christy
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Post by Krystal on Jul 26, 2005 21:37:04 GMT -5
Minerva brought up so many valid points but I hope she can work through them and that Albus is patient. Another wonderful update. Krys
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Post by TartanPhoenix on Jul 26, 2005 21:38:46 GMT -5
Great update. Minerva needs to let go of the guilt.
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Post by Kandice on Jul 26, 2005 21:44:00 GMT -5
I know I'm prejudiced but I am a big believer in the one year rule. Albus seems to have resolved any conflicting emotions he may have had and is ready to move on but I'm glad Minerva needs to think things through and deal with some of that guilt. It was a hard read but in the end it was satisfying.
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Post by Hogwarts Duo on Jul 26, 2005 22:07:45 GMT -5
Another wonderful update. I'm glad to see that the road to happiness isn't going to be a smooth ride for our dear Albus and Minerva. I think after what's happened to them they need to start off slowly and work through the past to get to their future.
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Post by Alesia on Jul 26, 2005 22:13:06 GMT -5
I loved the waves of emotions displayed in both Albus and Minerva. I am sure Albus is trying to deal with his loss by doing what Phoebe told him. I wouldn't be surprised if he is not as ready to move on as he thinks he is. I know that Minerva will take a while to come to terms with the guilt she is feeling. Hopefully in that time Albus will deal with his own.
This story is still completely wonderful.
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Post by Kimberly on Jul 26, 2005 23:12:51 GMT -5
This is such a good story. I find myself crying when I read it but I'm not miserable. I look forward to every update.
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Post by LadyJolly on Jul 26, 2005 23:24:36 GMT -5
Whoa this scene was just absolutely writen wonderfully. So emotion and I'm glad Albus is able to get Minerva to not feel guilty. Cat does deserve a family and there's Chemestry between Albus and Minerva but it's just so hard after a event such as loosing Phoebe could not really bring them together. But it's a good thing Minerva may choose to spend the rest of the summer with ALbus Hope you'll update more soon. Lady Jolly
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Post by JKMcGonagall on Jul 26, 2005 23:54:45 GMT -5
Sounds like Cat has Albus wrapped around her little finger. He really loves that little one. Here's hoping that he loves her mummy enough to get it through to Minerva that he needs her and that they need to be a family.
Love the updates, keep them coming.
Kay
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Post by QuillofMinerva on Jul 27, 2005 1:52:56 GMT -5
I love this story!
I am glad to see that Albus has finally sorted out his feelings and I like how Minerva brings up all the valid points, I would bring up if in that situation. I know she feels guilt and thats understandable but I do hope she can conquer it and move on in her life.
Sooooooo looking forward to the next chapter
Clayre x
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Post by Nerweniel on Jul 27, 2005 4:37:05 GMT -5
Oh I adore this fic ;D! Especially this chapter was so well-written and well-built-up... I can understand Minerva still feels guilty, but I do hope they will manage to work on it . Love, Lies
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Post by ginger newts on Jul 27, 2005 18:12:02 GMT -5
You're doing an excellent job of capturing their emotions and making this plot believable. I can't imagine what a difficult situation this is for them, but taking things slowly seems like a good plan. Can't wait to read what comes next.
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Post by Jaya on Jul 27, 2005 18:19:12 GMT -5
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Post by Stoneygem on Jul 27, 2005 19:13:35 GMT -5
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Post by tayryn on Jul 27, 2005 19:15:01 GMT -5
wheee!!!
Albus is waiting for her in bed! i'd like it if he was waiting for me in bed! *g* come on... we know i have a thing for older men... and Albus certainly qualifies.
our Cat is smart little girl!! and i know i've told you this hundreds of times before... but i do so love how you write kids in your stories!
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Post by Hogwarts Duo on Jul 27, 2005 20:29:16 GMT -5
Cat is such and adorable and bright little girl. She just makes my heart sing with her simplistic answers to the tough questions and answers she shared with Albus.
And I can't tell you how happy I was to read of Albus telling Cat how much he loved Minerva, different yet with all his heart. I feel much better for Minerva and can't wait to see what happens when she takes his hand and slips into bed. Wheeeee!
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Post by ginger newts on Jul 27, 2005 20:37:06 GMT -5
Aw, that was a very sweet chapter. They seem like such a happy family now. I loved that last sentence, can't wait to see a bit more of Albus and Minerva as a married couple.
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Post by Sensiblyquirky on Jul 27, 2005 20:47:51 GMT -5
I really love your portrayl of Cat. I loved the scene between her and Albus, and yay on the little bit at the end. Christy
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Post by Alesia on Jul 27, 2005 21:16:09 GMT -5
I love the scene with Cat. It is great.
Is it my imagination or there some trepidation on Minerva's part? Are they really as happy as we think?
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Post by Krystal on Jul 27, 2005 21:21:20 GMT -5
This was another wonderful update. I love the way you make us love the characters. I do note a bit of a Nobel prize winning Eisteinish quality to Cat :-) but I know how hard it is to write children and you are probably exposed to the brighter examples. I can't wait to see what happens next. Krys
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Post by Jaya on Jul 27, 2005 21:24:53 GMT -5
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Post by Krystal on Jul 27, 2005 21:34:23 GMT -5
okay I think you are purposely posting right after I review but don't worry, I will gladly jump through hoops to get more of the story! ;D
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Post by Mellypoo622 on Jul 27, 2005 22:06:52 GMT -5
Woa! I came to see if this story had been updated and found like 3 or 4 updates! *is happy* Each update was amazing! Aww I'm so glad they worked everything out! Can't wait to see what else happened between past and present
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Post by Kandice on Jul 28, 2005 0:45:11 GMT -5
Oh just ignore Krys. She's just beginning to realize the demon is probably below par! :-) I like Cat's intelligence. I'm glad they decided to marry. Do we get to witness the wedding night or any of the honeymoon at all? *gets on knees*
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Post by QuillofMinerva on Jul 28, 2005 1:59:02 GMT -5
Yayeeeee two updates to read when I rolled out of bed this morning, now that is what I call a good start to the morning. I am hoping we get to read about the wedding night and the honeymoon Clayre x
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Post by Hogwarts Duo on Jul 28, 2005 5:53:04 GMT -5
YAY! They're finally married to each other and obviously very happy and in love. And like Kandie...any wedding night or honeymoon deatils you wish to share would be MOST appreciated!
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Post by Alesia on Jul 28, 2005 7:02:22 GMT -5
Ahhh, I do so love getting up to this story. It is just wonderful. Hurrah, they are married, but like the rest of this crowd, I loved to get some honeymoon details.
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Post by ginger newts on Jul 28, 2005 11:07:34 GMT -5
That was a lovely happy update. I'm so glad to see things finally working out for them. I agree with the others, I hope the next chapter includes the wedding night.
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