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Post by JKMcGonagall on May 17, 2006 23:45:10 GMT -5
Yes, Albus to the rescue of the fair maiden, Minerva. It seems that Tom Riddle has reared his ugly head. Booooo! Hissssssss!
I can't imagine how Miggins thinks he can raise an army that way. He would have to wait until all the kids are grown before he could even do anything. I can't see him waiting all those years.
Update soon, please.
Kay
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Post by Herzele on May 18, 2006 3:36:41 GMT -5
Wonderful update !!
I'm so glad Albus managed to rescue Minerva !! Thank god ... Hopefully they can get away from there soon ...
Poor Gisella ... That must've been so horrible ... I just hope Miggins doesn't succeed ... And I hope he'll be out of the way before he can do something like that again ...
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Post by tanja on May 18, 2006 8:30:04 GMT -5
wow, this was thrilling. So much action, and not only good one, poor girl. I´m glad Min is save again, and I´m very curious about what is going to happen.
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Post by zoeteproet on May 18, 2006 14:37:55 GMT -5
Yup, have to agree with Tanja. You got me hooked. This chapter was very intense and the conversation between Albus and Min at the end was wonderful. I hope they can save the other girls, 'cause I feel really sorry for Gisella and Yanka.
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Post by lemonygingersnaps on May 22, 2006 18:49:04 GMT -5
Hmmmmmmmmmmmmm Interesting spinning of the web - Tom Riddle and Muggins...
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Post by lemonygingersnaps on May 28, 2006 22:31:29 GMT -5
Nice Lemon Jaya - I love your writing!
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Post by tanja on May 29, 2006 11:39:40 GMT -5
I bet Min isn´t freezing any more
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Post by Trulyamused on May 29, 2006 12:01:29 GMT -5
Wow. Great stuff. I hope Albus gave the kids a pg version. Keep it up . . . um . . . Keep it coming . . . oh boy. Just give us more soon. Truly
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Post by Herzele on May 29, 2006 16:48:03 GMT -5
As always, another wonderful update !! Loved it ! I'm so glad they got away from there relatively unharmed ... And of course, the lemon was splendid ! I wouldn't mind more of that ...
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Post by TartanPhoenix on May 29, 2006 21:01:12 GMT -5
Another wonderful bit of tang as always. That is definitely one bit of information best left out of the explanation. Hope to see another update soon.
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Post by Orion's Guard on May 29, 2006 23:06:35 GMT -5
I've been reading, really. I thought this was sweet, and I'd be lying if I said I haven't been looking forward to reading this scene for quite some time. I'd be interested in knowing exactly what they're telling the kids of all this. Thanks!
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Post by mcgonagallrules on Jun 5, 2006 16:10:11 GMT -5
I missed the update and just saw it! I am really enjoying this story.
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Post by Herzele on Jun 8, 2006 1:21:41 GMT -5
Awwwww ... That last part was absolutely adorable ! I loved it ! Wonderful update as always !! I'm so glad Ian is starting to get closer to them again ... And Albus' boxer shorts were just so typically him ...
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Post by lemonygingersnaps on Jun 8, 2006 8:50:57 GMT -5
I absolutly adore this story - I need more soon! :-)
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Post by TartanPhoenix on Jun 8, 2006 15:51:09 GMT -5
This was another wonderful chapter. Even though we know it all turns out well in the end the flashback really yanked at my heartstrings. You could really feel Albus' struggle as Minerva left.
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Post by Trulyamused on Jun 8, 2006 18:53:08 GMT -5
Jaya,
Excellent. Love the 'Tabby prints' boxers. Too funny.
Looking forward to more.
Truly
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Post by Orion's Guard on Jun 12, 2006 17:57:03 GMT -5
I missed this one. I imagine the flashbacks won't be going on for much longer, but I'm still interested in what they're doing in the past.
And I liked the first line of the first one, such a small line and such a great amount of information. Nice work.
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Post by mcgonagallrules on Jun 13, 2006 0:44:52 GMT -5
Wonderful update! Orange paw prints! HAHAHA! Love it! Glad to see that Ian is starting to see the truth. More soon please.
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Post by tanja on Jun 14, 2006 4:59:40 GMT -5
so sweet I´m glad the kids warm up
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Post by alison on Jun 14, 2006 20:32:12 GMT -5
I love this story! You've really drawn me in (I just read this instead of revising for exams...oh well). The depth of emotion in the characters is wonderful--you place them in problematic situations and develop emotional responses that are realistic. Thanks for sharing, and please continue.
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Post by Alesia on Jun 15, 2006 20:38:05 GMT -5
I haven't been around much to review but just wanted to let you know I am still reading and very much interested in what is not in store for Albus and Minerva. I trust you have more drama in store for us.
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chell
Gryffindor Seeker
Whenever one door closes, another one opens
Posts: 41
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Post by chell on Jun 15, 2006 21:09:10 GMT -5
I haven't reviewed in a while, so I just wanted to say that I'm still greatly enjoying this story and I can't wait for another update. I agree with everything everyone else has said thus far - - am loving the storytelling and that the kids are finally coming around
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Post by lemonygingersnaps on Jun 20, 2006 23:29:48 GMT -5
This is such a great story - I am not sure how I missed reviewing it. I canm not wait to find out more!
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Post by lemonygingersnaps on Jul 1, 2006 20:46:53 GMT -5
Aww - Evil Cliffie!!! But great story as usual! :-)
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Post by Trulyamused on Jul 1, 2006 23:20:19 GMT -5
This should get interesting.
Don't keep us waiting too long. Please.
Truly
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Post by Herzele on Jul 2, 2006 8:42:53 GMT -5
That's really an evil cliffhanger .. But a wonderful update as always ! Can't wait to read more !
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Post by Orion's Guard on Jul 9, 2006 11:38:01 GMT -5
I don't know where I was for this one, but I'm sorry I missed it. I feel like he should have told her specifically that he wanted to hold off, even though he did mention that he wanted to court her properly. I also like the personal time between the two of them without the kids. I understand that the bulk of the story has to do with the children, but private time is nice too. Thanks!
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Post by tanja on Jul 9, 2006 12:21:14 GMT -5
that´s so cruel to stop here. I wonder what´s going to happen...please update soon
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chell
Gryffindor Seeker
Whenever one door closes, another one opens
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Post by chell on Jul 9, 2006 13:31:47 GMT -5
Oh, that's such an evil place to stop!! Hopefully Albus will set her straight. ~Chell
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Post by lemonygingersnaps on Jul 10, 2006 16:04:09 GMT -5
I just reread this again and this cliffie is killing me! I hope Albus finds Minerva, and they have a serious lemony snog session to make Minerva realise that he loves her , and that he does not need the potion! :-)
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