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Post by kissofdeath on Jan 1, 2008 16:57:09 GMT -5
kinda confused here but other than that, pretty good story!
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Post by tartanmin on Jan 8, 2008 9:09:54 GMT -5
kinda confused here but other than that, pretty good story! totally agree with you |
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Post by harmonydumbledore on Mar 20, 2008 14:03:02 GMT -5
What!? What's going on. Oh you are evil! It's so goood and you keep giving us cliffys!? You are driving me nuts!!! AND ITS A SHORT TRIP!!!
Anyway...I love the story, good work!
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Post by iheartdinozzo on Apr 5, 2008 3:12:30 GMT -5
please continue!!!!
Tip- with the grammar(and spelling)- copy and paste into word document and hit spell check.(i'm new to admm that's why you've never seen me before.)
Awesome story:)
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mjan
First-year Student
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Post by mjan on May 8, 2008 5:07:04 GMT -5
aw go on
I hate clifs
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Post by iheartdinozzo on May 10, 2008 1:45:59 GMT -5
yeah cliffies are evil =]
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Post by mmadcrazyfan on May 12, 2008 16:21:29 GMT -5
I haven't reviews this in, like, a thousand updates.
Forgive me, dear.
You have thickened the plot fairly well, I love this story!
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Post by harmonydumbledore on Mar 30, 2009 18:58:06 GMT -5
THis needs to be freaking updated!? Leaving a story like this is cruel!
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Post by Katheryn Mae on Mar 30, 2009 19:15:17 GMT -5
I know I read this before but forgot to review 'cause I was really tired and busy. But please *begs* update! I really gotta know what is up with her and Albus!
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Post by McGonagallsGirl on Mar 30, 2009 20:23:11 GMT -5
So... lots of typos. A quick spell check could correct that. And, maybe it's because of the typos, but it feels a little haphazard. But, of course, the premise is nice and I think the structure is very unique. Good luck  |
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Post by mercifulheavens on Mar 30, 2009 20:42:11 GMT -5
It must be continued! Yes, the spelling, grammar and all that made it a bit hard to read...but you cannot leave Minerva lying at the bottom of the steps!!!
Please update for the sake of my sanity!
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Post by Twisted Peppermint on Mar 31, 2009 15:49:35 GMT -5
a little hard to read (grammer and spelling-wise) but if you finish the story all will be forgiven!
please please please updaaatttteee! i can't stand cliffhangers!
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Post by angielica618 on May 2, 2009 4:22:12 GMT -5
please update..!it's a greatstory..!ü
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Post by phantomgirl on May 3, 2009 13:13:03 GMT -5
Please, Please please.....update this fic !!!
It's Great!!!!
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Post by shinydirt on Jun 23, 2009 15:18:53 GMT -5
omg!!!!
i LOVE YOUR FIC!!!!!
PLEEEEEEEEEESE UPDATE!!!!
YOUR DIRVEING ME CRAZY!!!!!!!
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Post by horcruxhorror on Oct 25, 2009 16:52:45 GMT -5
tiny chapters r killer plus EVIL cliffhangers
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Post by silvertabby on Nov 4, 2009 11:08:07 GMT -5
'How are we going to get her up?'
'She can't be too heavy, can she?' Ron wondered in undertone, and hermione accidentally stepped on his arse. Harry rolled his eyes.
'Oh, Goodness? Is she allright?' Molly asked Madam pompfrey and Prof. Sprout tried to slap McGonagall and said. 'She doesn't look good...' pearing down into her face.
'What?' Dumbledore asked.' Was it something I said?'
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Post by harmonydumbledore on Nov 6, 2009 14:52:10 GMT -5
Albus you idiot pick her up and tell her you love her!
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Post by horcruxhorror on Nov 7, 2009 12:54:38 GMT -5
is min pregnant? and wats this about a mission? was she raped? so many unanswered questions!!!1
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Post by horcruxhorror on Nov 8, 2009 9:11:47 GMT -5
we need to know!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by Rosemary Dumbledore McGonagall on Nov 22, 2009 13:01:45 GMT -5
GOD! So many evil cliffies and short updates! IT'S KILLING ME! PLEASE UPDATE!
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Post by silvertabby on Nov 22, 2009 14:20:13 GMT -5
'What DID you say,exactly, albus?' molly asked professor dumbledore.
'I asked her if she's you know-pregnant. And how come at her age.'
Madam pompfrey and flitwick shook their heads in clear dissapointment. Ron mimicked puking. Prof sprout brought her hands to her head.Hary stared at dumbledore not understanding and mrs Weasly broke into laughter.
'Albus, old friend, you know nothing about women.' slughorn said.
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Post by horcruxhorror on Nov 22, 2009 14:23:11 GMT -5
oh please add more!!!!!
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Post by silvertabby on Nov 22, 2009 14:33:39 GMT -5
'Let's carry professor McGonagall to a bed.' hermione said as the croud on the stairs began to clear.
'But whose bed?' Ron asked
'Well, all beds are taken...i don't know'mrs weasley said.' Are you up to sharing yours hermione?
'What? Sure.' hermione answered slightly intimidated. 'It's allright.'
'Great, honey' mrs weasley said.
'Let's carry her up, boys. And, Albus, with all due respect, try to keep your mouth closed when you don't have anything inteligent to say.'
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Post by horcruxhorror on Nov 23, 2009 5:44:06 GMT -5
lol not bad!!!!  |
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Post by Rosemary Dumbledore McGonagall on Nov 23, 2009 15:28:12 GMT -5
I'm confused! But I enjoy it! Please update soon!
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Post by bestwishes4Maggie! on May 11, 2010 17:16:02 GMT -5
Is this to be continued because it is splendid?!
PLEASE CONTINUE!!!!
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Post by silvertabby on May 12, 2010 12:23:31 GMT -5
'So if McGonagal gets your bed, where are you going to sleep, Hermione?' harry asked, eyeing his friend quizicly.
Hermione glanced back to her long lost bed and sighed.
'You're not going to sleep with her are you?' ron asked, apparently he had not grapped the second meaning of what he said, but Harry and hermione did. the girl went scarlet and harry said.
'Gees,' Ron'
Ron's mouth worked into an O and blood rushed into his already red ears.
he said quickly
'I didn't mean- I just ment-'
'We got what you ment!' The other two chorused.
'We could...' Ron's eyes sparked up.
'Yea', harry said'You could come share with Ron, he'd be happy to share with you, Hermione!' the boy told her sheapishly. Hermione giggled, but to ron's surprise she didn't refuze(?!). Ron's face grew into a greatfull grin.
Then hermione said:
'So then you could share with ginny, harry'
Ron's grin died.
It appeared on harry' That's right, that is if she wants to'
Hermione laughed
'Course she does, Harry'
Miscif on it's way, the kids departed in very high spirits.
And guess who came to see their teacher. Let us just say that elderly weren't left out of the fun, either...That's what i always say, no age criteria.
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Post by mmadfabulous on May 13, 2010 0:16:29 GMT -5
really confused it doesn't make sense no offense it suddenly wasn't about Mcgonagall  |
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Post by bestwishes4Maggie! on May 18, 2010 18:48:37 GMT -5
PLEASE CONTINUE SOON!!!
LOVE IT SO MUCH
-SPELLBOUND
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