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Post by Jaya on Jul 10, 2005 20:11:29 GMT -5
I wrote most of this for my dear friend, Karlie... She's gone now... and there are no happy endings... so I'm removing the story
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Post by Kandice on Jul 10, 2005 20:50:05 GMT -5
Well I've been waiting forever for this. And of course, I think the added bonus of a lemon or two is great. (and yes, I'll be counting them!) I wasn't sure I liked that they aren't together but I'll hold out until the end. This isn't going to be an Albus with lots of other people story right? I am a little concerned about Minerva's pregnancy too but its only the first chapter so I'll wait. I just don't want her with a jerk or anyone else but Albus for that matter. Kandie
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Post by Sensiblyquirky on Jul 10, 2005 21:01:48 GMT -5
oh dear you have me hooked! Naturally I want Albus and Minerva together, but I shall try and be patient. Tell that hurricane he can in no way mess with updates for an AD/MM story.  Christy |
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Post by ginger newts on Jul 10, 2005 21:33:19 GMT -5
You're finally posting, yay. I don't like the sounds of that engagement, but I hope everything will turn out well. Don't keep us waiting too long...especially for the lemony chapters. |
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Post by TartanPhoenix on Jul 10, 2005 22:05:21 GMT -5
I'm sure that Phoebe is just lovely, but Minerva is the only one for Albus. It is only the first chapter after all. There's still plenty of time for her to take a new job in France or I hear Spain is very nice. Please don't make us wait too long for an update.  |
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Post by Kerin on Jul 10, 2005 23:03:35 GMT -5
I'm intrigued. It doesn't take a lot to hook me but there is so much that I need to discover with this story. How did Minerva get pregnant. Well, not how but you know...And what happens to Phoebe. I think she sounds lovely so I don't want the proverbial truck to run her over. I will understand if she gets amnesia and decides she doesn't love Albus. Its the only way I can see someone not loving him. :-)
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Post by Kacie on Jul 10, 2005 23:45:47 GMT -5
I will gladly stand in front of you and protect you from the ravages of Dennis so you can continue this story. I'm pretty brave since I'm hundreds of miles away, aren't I? I liked the beginning of this. I admit I have more questions than answers but you write well and I know you won't stop in the middle and leave us hanging. :-)
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Post by Lady Lavendar on Jul 11, 2005 0:49:03 GMT -5
Wow! That was a good start! I wonder where this is going. Well hope you update soon!!
LL
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Post by mugglemin on Jul 11, 2005 1:53:23 GMT -5
Oooh what a good start! Let's have some more please...
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Post by Jestana on Jul 11, 2005 1:55:07 GMT -5
Certainly an interesting start. *grin* I'm very eager to read the rest. Thanks to Tay for the linkie from her journal. *giggle*
Jestana
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Post by Hogwarts Duo on Jul 11, 2005 5:55:18 GMT -5
This looks like the beginning of a fascinating story and you've definitely nabbed my attention. And the promise of multiple lemons doesn't hurt either. Can't wait for more! |
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Post by Alesia on Jul 11, 2005 9:10:51 GMT -5
This is a great start. I, like everyone, else am intrigued as to what is going to happen. Since Phoebe is present when Minerva knows she is pregnant then it couldn't have been Albus the "one time" was with, so it looks like you have lots of plot twists and turns in store for us.
I don't know where in FLA you are but I talked to my folks yesterday - Tampa and Orlando are basically okay, so I hope you are too.
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Post by angeldust on Jul 11, 2005 12:37:32 GMT -5
yay long fic and lemons!!!!!!!! ;D
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Post by tabbylvr77 who is lazy on Jul 11, 2005 15:28:03 GMT -5
Oooh, you snagged me!! I am very curious as to find out about this fiancee Albus has.. hmmmm, she seems nice enough, but no one steals Albus away from our dear Min! I hope not anyway.. lol.
GREAT START!!
Rae
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Post by Herzele on Jul 11, 2005 16:21:25 GMT -5
Great start !! I'm hooked ... What happened  Who's the father of Min's baby ? Questions over questions ... I hope you update soon to answer some of them ... ;D |
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Post by tayryn on Jul 11, 2005 17:11:29 GMT -5
Certainly an interesting start. *grin* I'm very eager to read the rest. Thanks to Tay for the linkie from her journal. *giggle* Jestana well you know... when a story is this good... it needs to be shared... and needs to be told to as many people as possible!! Jaya is a fabulous writer... and this story is a great one... as per her usual!! i won't be cruel and tease by saying i know what happens and how it all ends... ;o) wait a tick... i just did. |
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Post by Karmin on Jul 11, 2005 22:30:42 GMT -5
I am loving this story already and am assuming its time for an update. Wait! Let me put on my pitiful face so you'll feel like updating soon.  |
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Post by Kegan on Jul 12, 2005 0:32:23 GMT -5
I really like this one. I hope you update soon and before HBP comes out because I won't be able to keep up with anything posted until I've finished reading book 6.
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Post by Jaya on Jul 12, 2005 17:50:35 GMT -5
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Post by TartanPhoenix on Jul 12, 2005 18:06:38 GMT -5
Cold feet, yes have cold feet Phoebe. That is a nice humane way to get rid of her. She seems nice, but she's just not Minerva. I can't wait for tonight.
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Post by Dewey on Jul 12, 2005 21:24:31 GMT -5
I can hardly wait for the next update. Phoebe seems nice enough...
-Kathy
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Post by Lady Lavendar on Jul 13, 2005 0:33:44 GMT -5
Wow!! This is getting very good!! Hope to see another update soon!!
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Post by mugglemin on Jul 13, 2005 2:15:24 GMT -5
NEXT!!!!!!!!!!!!! C'mon, c'mon, c'mon! Let's have one of your fabulous lemons. You know you do them so well...definately addictive, this one!
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Post by Herzele on Jul 13, 2005 3:25:55 GMT -5
Wonderful and exciting !! I can't wait to read more ...
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Post by Karmin on Jul 13, 2005 4:32:37 GMT -5
I don't know what to think. I really liked Phoebe and its kind of sad she died but then I want Minerva and Albus together too.
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Post by Hogwarts Duo on Jul 13, 2005 6:18:27 GMT -5
Ooooohhh! This is getting so good. I hope you've got another update for us sometime today. I really wanna hear more about that dream Minerva was having so don't hold out on us. ^_^
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Post by Alesia on Jul 13, 2005 7:16:09 GMT -5
Jaya - this is really excellent!
Obviously Phoebe isn't really dead if she is talking to Minerva in the present. And it wasn't a drunken night that Minerva took advantage of Albus that got them together. Humm very nice twists.
So what (or rather WHO) was that a tawny blue eyed owl outside Minerva's room that just woke her up, I wonder?
Please update soon.
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Post by angeldust on Jul 13, 2005 9:47:19 GMT -5
wow!! Addictive! I was a bit confused until i realised that Phoebe isn't really dead  So many twists yay |
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Who's the father of Min's baby ? Questions over questions ... I hope you update soon to answer some of them ... ;D
So many twists yay