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Post by JKMcGonagall on Sept 4, 2005 23:36:20 GMT -5
Great update. I really liked this chapter. My favorite line was when Min told Albus
"Albus...please don't take this wrong, but...I hope our child doesn't take after his uncle."
I can understand why. I really like Aberforth's nickname for Min, "Tabkins" is really cute and different from "Tabby" that Albus calls her. I've never read it in any other fic.
As usual, update soon with another chapter, please.
Kay
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Post by TartanPhoenix on Sept 5, 2005 0:25:26 GMT -5
You gotta love Aberforth. Tabkins was perfect; I agree with JKMcGonagall, very orginal. This story just keeps getting better and better.
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Post by QuillofMinerva on Sept 5, 2005 1:38:18 GMT -5
Aberforth is a great character, I always enjoy writing him as well.
I enjoyed this chapter and I hope all goes well from now on though I have a feeling, this is the calm before the storm.
Clayre x
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Post by Sola on Sept 5, 2005 5:51:33 GMT -5
Great chapter! I like the recent livingstyle of Albus and Minerva. Only bedroom and kitchen w/o much need for clothes ;D
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Post by Herzele on Sept 5, 2005 7:16:24 GMT -5
*lol* Wonderful funny update !! I think it was probably better for Albus and Aberforth that Albus decided against telling Min about the goat - comparison ... ;D
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Post by Wetembers on Sept 5, 2005 14:09:10 GMT -5
I find this story fascinating and I'm thrilled that it was highly recommended. I can't wait for more. I'm wondering what role this baby will play as there must be a reason for such a show of power when he/she was conceived.
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Post by ginger newts on Sept 5, 2005 14:31:21 GMT -5
Lovely chapter. I'm glad the fall didn't hurt Minerva too badly. I like the way you write Aberforth. Post again soon.
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Post by LadyJolly on Sept 5, 2005 19:30:23 GMT -5
Nice! I love this story so far it's quite enjoyable. hope you'll post more soon
Lady Jolly
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Post by Jaya on Sept 5, 2005 20:33:43 GMT -5
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Post by Kandice on Sept 5, 2005 20:48:09 GMT -5
Is that it? You stopped there? *sigh* I'll just sit twiddling my thumbs waiting for the next update and what I hope is a continuation just where you left off. :-)
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Post by tayryn on Sept 5, 2005 20:52:26 GMT -5
tbc...
she always... always forgets the tbc...
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Post by JKMcGonagall on Sept 5, 2005 22:41:44 GMT -5
Very nice update. Keep going, quickly please.
Kay
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Post by Miss Q on Sept 5, 2005 23:00:52 GMT -5
Another great chapter! And this was so sweet and so sad! But I do hope that they will put the sadness behind them and move forward!
M
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Post by QuillofMinerva on Sept 6, 2005 2:55:27 GMT -5
A wedding....I always love them so I am looking forward to reading about it.
What a place to stop though!
Looking forward to the next one
Clayre x
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Post by Herzele on Sept 6, 2005 3:51:03 GMT -5
Great update !! But I have to agree - that was a cruel place to stop !! Please update soon - hopefully the continuation of what they were doing ...
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Post by Wetembers on Sept 6, 2005 11:05:12 GMT -5
I think you stopped there on purpose. I'm beginning to recognize your style but it was a lovely update all the same. It's good to see Minerva's health is improving.
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Post by ginger newts on Sept 6, 2005 18:34:38 GMT -5
What a terrible place to stop! But it was a lovely chapter, I like all the sweet fluffiness, though I sense more drama to come. Can't wait for more.
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Post by Jaya on Sept 6, 2005 20:27:14 GMT -5
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Post by Kandice on Sept 6, 2005 20:45:13 GMT -5
I am so glad Albus is going to look for answers and I hope he is okay while doing it. Minerva isn't having twins is she? Four months isn't that far along but my memory is fading...
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Post by JKMcGonagall on Sept 6, 2005 22:13:36 GMT -5
Yes, time for some answers. I hope Albus and Min stay safe when he starts looking for them. It would also be nice if Poppy could bring Min some new robes. The old ones can only strech so far, I'm sure.
Nice update, now do it again soon, please...(hands folded looking at the screen hopefully).
Kay
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Post by Alesia on Sept 6, 2005 23:11:46 GMT -5
I knew Albus couldn't wait much longer. It is going to be interesting to see what Millicent says and if this is really her or some unknown force behind the hunting of Albus and Minerva.
Oh and Jaya, if you ever decide to write a series of lemons linked by little bits of plot, be sure to let me know. Yours are always a great read.
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Post by Miss Q on Sept 6, 2005 23:15:09 GMT -5
Yet again you make me happy with your wonderful story! Thank you!!!!
M
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Post by QuillofMinerva on Sept 7, 2005 1:52:26 GMT -5
Hmmmm me thinks Minerva might be having twins! I didnt show for ages but then my bump sprung from nowhere!
I am glad Albus is going to try and find out what is going on, they need to get it sorted for all their sakes.
Looking forward to the next chapter!
Clayre x
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Post by Herzele on Sept 7, 2005 2:16:07 GMT -5
Hopefully Albus can find out soon what's happening ... And hopefully he'll be okay ...
And I agree with Clayre : I, too, think, that Min might be having twins ....
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Post by Wetembers on Sept 7, 2005 2:26:38 GMT -5
I was slow to show when I was pregnant but I believe its only one baby. I'm banking on the baby not being your average kid due to the magical outburst when it was conceived or maybe Minerva is eating a lot now! Great update and I can't wait to see what happens with the ministry.
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Post by ginger newts on Sept 7, 2005 12:02:00 GMT -5
I'm jumping on the twins bandwagon. I could smell that foreshadowing a mile away. Great update though. Wonder what will happen when Albus tries to force the issue with the Minister. I hope it doesn't get too ugly.
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Post by Jaya on Sept 7, 2005 20:40:19 GMT -5
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Post by ginger newts on Sept 7, 2005 21:00:37 GMT -5
I like the way this is unfolding slowly and the interactions between all the various characters, but two days is such a long time to wait! We shall all be good and refrain from bothering your boss, but only if we get a really long update with a lemon next time, teehee. Lovely chapter.
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Post by tayryn on Sept 7, 2005 21:02:37 GMT -5
smartass! *g*
have i mentioned how much i am enjoying reading this just for the sake of reading, and not as a beta! tis wonderful!! as all your stories are!! {yes, i am completely biased!}
and... *rubs hands in knowing anticipation*... i so cannot wait until the next post...
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Post by Herzele on Sept 7, 2005 21:19:49 GMT -5
Wonderful update !! I, too cannot wait until the next post - even if I don't know what's going to happen ... ;D This story keeps getting better and better !!
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