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Post by Orion's Guard on Sept 12, 2005 20:58:43 GMT -5
Ahhhhh! Too short!!! I shall sit here until tomorrow night and wait for the next chpater.
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Post by Alesia on Sept 12, 2005 21:01:52 GMT -5
yep, scorned & betrayed women are the most dangerous of animals, leave him to Millicent. Albus has other things to do, like FIND MIN NOW!!!!!!
BTW, I love how you are handling this story.
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Post by Miss Q on Sept 12, 2005 22:53:59 GMT -5
Oh my..... These two last chapters are wonderful! But to leave us hangin' like that... please don't wait to long with the update!
M
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Post by JKMcGonagall on Sept 12, 2005 23:22:12 GMT -5
Hmmmmm, things are getting hotter. If Albus doesn't kill him, I'll bet on Millicent doing it. Can't say as I would blame them. If it were up to me, I'd say, let's bury him up to his neck in a Texas red ant bed. That ought to get results, fast. If I were Niles right now, I would be afraid, very afraid, for my life.
Update soon, please.
Kay
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Post by Herzele on Sept 12, 2005 23:54:01 GMT -5
Oh oh ... I so hope they're gonna find Min soon !!! And that everything's okay with her and the baby ... And yes, leave that Niles to Millicent - she'll teach him ....  |
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Post by Kandice on Sept 13, 2005 1:59:50 GMT -5
That was a surprising turn of events. I thoroughly dislike Niles.
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Post by QuillofMinerva on Sept 13, 2005 2:20:50 GMT -5
Even more twists and turns than your other stories, I am seriously going to fall off my chair one of these days.
The last two chaps have been great. I won't be around for the next few days so by the time I have returned, there should be quite a few updates. Yayeeeee for me.
Clayre x
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Post by ginger newts on Sept 13, 2005 19:27:57 GMT -5
Oh my! That was quite a bit of excitement. I'm a bit disappointed that Albus wasn't the one who got to hit Niles, though good for Millie.
I'll be on the edge of my seat waiting for tonight's chapter.
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Post by TartanPhoenix on Sept 13, 2005 19:30:32 GMT -5
Ohh, Niles is in trouble!! I agree with GingerNewts, but perhaps Albus will get an oppurtunity later. Can't wait for tonight when I get from class and get to read a new chapter.
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Post by Jaya on Sept 13, 2005 20:37:31 GMT -5
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Post by LadyJolly on Sept 13, 2005 20:57:10 GMT -5
poor albus it must be really hard!! I glad that the woman is well sort of feeding Minerva. But I do wonder what are her motives to doing such a thing and why haven't they got anything out of that .......Mr. Davis?! Hope more is on the way good chapter
Lady Jolly
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Post by JKMcGonagall on Sept 13, 2005 22:20:32 GMT -5
Thank goodness for small favors. At least Min is getting some food to eat. Mr. Niles would be talking a lot, and very quickly too, if he were just buried up to his neck in a Texas Red Ant Bed in the middle of a very hot day. What can I say, I'm from Texas.
Please update soon. I will be waiting on the edge of my chair.
Kay
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Post by Miss Q on Sept 13, 2005 23:11:59 GMT -5
Another update, yay! I liked this chapter, but can not help but feel sad for some of the characters... Poor Albus. And Poppy! I do hope that it won't take to long before they find Minerva!
Please don't wait to long with the update!
M
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Post by Herzele on Sept 14, 2005 0:05:59 GMT -5
Great update !!! I just feel so sorry for Albus and Min ....
Hopefully Albus really has a plan and they'll find out where Min is soon ....
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Post by Kandice on Sept 14, 2005 14:22:08 GMT -5
I'm glad Minerva is getting some care at least but I hope Alastor and Albus give Nigel and Mrs. Grindelwald what for.
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Post by ginger newts on Sept 14, 2005 18:40:21 GMT -5
How scary for Minerva! I hope they find out where she is soon.
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Post by Jaya on Sept 14, 2005 19:50:00 GMT -5
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Post by TartanPhoenix on Sept 14, 2005 19:56:49 GMT -5
Ok, what's up with the glow, not that I'm complaining. I'm not saying what she did was right, but I can understand his mother's reaction. It was extreme, but grief is a strong motivator.
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Post by Sensiblyquirky on Sept 14, 2005 20:02:08 GMT -5
I'm glad Albus could get to Minerva, but quite a few things are missing and I can't wait to find them out.
Christy
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Post by Kandice on Sept 14, 2005 21:07:13 GMT -5
Albus is a better person that I am. I would have had to kick a body or two even after death. I'm grateful Minerva is okay, I think.
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Post by Alesia on Sept 14, 2005 22:06:59 GMT -5
I love the twist of both the possible bounce of the killing curse from Minerva onto Grindalwald's mother & nasty Niles but also the hinted possibility that Minerva blocked the AK curse once before to save Albus when it came from Grindalwald himself. Does the tabby have nine lives? Or is it just related to when she is protecting those she loves? Interesting, very interesting. The glow obviously means something as well. I love it when stories make you think. Thanks for again doing something original. I had started to worry you had taken the same 'torture Min, lose baby, saved by Albus' revenge route. I should have known better. You are Jaya, after all!!! ;D The fact you choose to have a woman as the captor and then to do what was realistic (from a sociologically perspective) and have her NOT torture Min (at least physically) was inspired. You cleverly dropped hints about what may or may not have happened the night Grindalwald was killed all the way through. I am going to go back and reread to see what else you have hidden for us. Again, excellent. Thank you for your great work. |
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Post by Herzele on Sept 15, 2005 4:19:57 GMT -5
Wow !!! Brilliant update !!
I'm so glad that they were able to rescue Min ... And now I'm really interested in that killing curse question .... Did it bounce off Min ? And if yes, why ?
Can't wait for the next update !!
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Post by ginger newts on Sept 15, 2005 14:01:16 GMT -5
Wow, now I'm even more curious. All this talk of glowing and killing curses gone awry...can't wait to find out what's going on! I'm so glad everyone is okay and I hope there's some fluff in the next chapter after the debriefing. |
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Post by Wetembers on Sept 15, 2005 14:10:47 GMT -5
I've missed a lot but I loved catching up. I am thinking its the baby that's rebounding the curse because Minerva had already conceived when Albus fought Grindelwald. I'm probably wrong but it makes me feel good guessing.
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Post by Jaya on Sept 15, 2005 20:51:52 GMT -5
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Post by JKMcGonagall on Sept 15, 2005 22:20:12 GMT -5
That strange glow is so interesting. I can't wait to find out what it is exactly. I am glad Min is back and that she and little Dumbles are ok. Please, update soon, but then I know that you will. You always do. Thanks for a great, and very original, story.
Kay
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Post by Kandice on Sept 16, 2005 0:27:33 GMT -5
I love how everything just falls into place when you write. I have more questions but I have no doubts they will be answered.
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Post by Herzele on Sept 16, 2005 8:42:04 GMT -5
Wow !! I'm so glad they both are okay ...
And I really want to know more about that glow and the killing curse that may have bounced off ....
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Post by LadyJolly on Sept 16, 2005 9:00:48 GMT -5
It's good to know that both the baby or was it babies and Minerva are okay but I'd like to read more ;D Love your story
Lady Jolly
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Post by ginger newts on Sept 16, 2005 11:44:34 GMT -5
I'm still very curious about what happened, but I'm glad everyone is safe. I'll be waiting impatiently for more.
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