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Post by Sensiblyquirky on Aug 15, 2004 15:56:01 GMT -5
You are good!! I shall review. I loved it!
Christy
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Post by Child of the Dawn on Aug 15, 2004 17:13:48 GMT -5
heheeh..thats so sweet! An allergy to kiwi! ;D
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Post by Inappropriate Goat on Aug 15, 2004 17:26:32 GMT -5
I enjoyed every word!!!!
MM
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Post by TabbyForever on Aug 15, 2004 17:33:17 GMT -5
Oh i like it....
now i don't LIKE kiwi but i'm not allergic to it!!!heheheh
Great story, i loved it...the attack of our mins hair!!!hehehehe
Tabs
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Post by Catwoman99 on Aug 15, 2004 17:34:57 GMT -5
Very nice response! Kiwi shampoo...i never would have come up with that one. I loved how sneaky Poppy was in letting Minerva's hair down. Bravo!!
-April :-)
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Post by Ginger Newts on Aug 15, 2004 20:10:42 GMT -5
Very nice.  I enjoyed the second person narration. I've only seen that done a few times, it's very risky...difficult to keep up with. You did a great job of it. I'm glad the allergy was something as simple as shampoo.  Good excuse for Albus to get his hands in her hair, I love those moments. |
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Post by Miss Q on Aug 16, 2004 0:35:21 GMT -5
A wonderful and funny story!
M
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Post by angeldust on Aug 16, 2004 10:25:21 GMT -5
wow brilliant responce i loved the 2nd person thing going on very cleaver! (See i did review!!!!! hehe i havn't said anyhting on this borad for a long time ) Kaitlyn |
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Post by Dewey on Aug 16, 2004 13:25:58 GMT -5
i loved it! good response to the challenge. HER HAIR! rotfl. i liked the perspective of the story; nice.
-Dewey
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Post by Jestana on Aug 16, 2004 15:34:43 GMT -5
Whee! I love it! I knew it was the shampoo! It had to be! Bravo!
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Post by HappyReader on Aug 16, 2004 23:50:30 GMT -5
I love this. *hugs fic* Gives me a WAFF. Well done!
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Post by ArabellaFiggs on Aug 18, 2004 18:46:19 GMT -5
He he he, great story. Loved every word. Go you.  |
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Post by Nerweniel on Aug 20, 2004 12:09:43 GMT -5
Adored every syllable! Great work, and so damn sweet ! Love, Liz |
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Post by tartantabbycat on Aug 20, 2004 23:37:38 GMT -5
KIWI! Simply genius! Very nicely done! Bravo, Griselda!
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SpellboundKate
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Post by SpellboundKate on Aug 26, 2004 9:32:18 GMT -5
Kiwi!! Oh, that's good! I loved it, so I hsall review. KaTe |
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Post by JKMcGonagall on Jun 8, 2005 1:11:53 GMT -5
I loved it. Especially Albus' line about loving her hair as long as she doesn't try to kill him with it.
Kay
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I enjoyed the second person narration. I've only seen that done a few times, it's very risky...difficult to keep up with. You did a great job of it.
Good excuse for Albus to get his hands in her hair, I love those moments.
