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Sept 4, 2004 15:59:59 GMT -5
Post by TabbyForever on Sept 4, 2004 15:59:59 GMT -5
Yay...as ever i look forward to updates and i really can't get enough of these stories at the mo!!!! Well done another excellent chapter!!! Tabs
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Sept 5, 2004 10:01:23 GMT -5
Post by Catwoman99 on Sept 5, 2004 10:01:23 GMT -5
I loved the letter from Albus' mother. That was very sweet. This story is wonderful. You're doing great!
-April :-)
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Sept 5, 2004 12:24:23 GMT -5
Post by griseldalafey on Sept 5, 2004 12:24:23 GMT -5
*big, weird, deep, goofy, happy sigh...* That was soooo cute. I missed a few chapters (how how how?) and now I had one long read. It's such a wonderful story. Although her mother is really horrible. But Albus' mum on the other hand is an absolute darling. Very, very good story, I can't wait to read the next part.
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Sept 5, 2004 19:41:20 GMT -5
Post by Lady Lavendar on Sept 5, 2004 19:41:20 GMT -5
I love this story! Please update it soon! ;D ;D
LL
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Sept 5, 2004 20:32:10 GMT -5
Post by Sensiblyquirky on Sept 5, 2004 20:32:10 GMT -5
Last Chapter (thanks so much to all who reviewed)
Chapter 7
Albus was looking over his bedroom one final time before heading downstairs to meet Minerva. She had gone for a walk around the grounds, and he had taken that time to turn his bedroom into a romantic oasis. Candles were floating in the air giving off the only light source in the room, besides the fireplace. Roses were strewn all over the floor, and the bed. On the night table beside of his bed were some strawberries and whipped cream, just in case. Albus only hoped that Minerva would be willing to go along with his plans, especially since he had refused her advances earlier in the week. Minerva walked through the backdoor of the house to find Albus waiting for her downstairs. As she came closer to him in order to greet him she noticed that his eyes, usually a brilliant sky blue were now dark and intense. “Are you cold, my love,” Albus asked as he helped her to remove her winter cloak. “A little, but not too much,” she responded turning to give him a kiss on his cheek, but Albus caught her lips with his instead. Minerva knew something was different, they had shared passionate kisses before but this one was far more intense. As Albus leaned back, therefore breaking the kiss, Minerva suddenly knew what he had planned for the evening and in anticipation Albus witnessed her own eyes darken with desire. No word passed between them as Albus led Minerva by the hand to his bedroom. Once inside he turned to her and in a voice not barely above a whisper he asked, “Do you want,” but Minerva said, “Yes,” before he could finish his question. Minerva’s heart was racing as he slowly began to undress her, placing tantalizing kisses where new skin was exposed. Still wearing her undergarments Albus carried Minerva to the bed, and then undressed himself down to his boxers. Kissing her hungrily Albus removed Minerva’s bra. Instead of immediately touching her breasts Albus reached for a strawberry and dipped it in the whip cream. Minerva opened her mouth slightly, thinking he would feed her, but she gasped as she felt the strawberry make contact with each of her nipples in turn. She closed her eyes and moaned deep in her throat as Albus began to slowly remove the whip cream with his mouth. When finished with her breasts he left a trail of wet kisses down to her panties, and then skipping over the center of her desire he nipped at her inner thighs. At this point Minerva’s breathing was labored, her hands were clutching and unclutching the bed sheets, and she was moaning out his name. Moving back up her quickly to place a simple kiss on her lips, Albus moved her panties to the side and entered her with one then two fingers. “Faster, Albus…faster…” Minerva pleaded with him to increase the pace of his movements. Doing as directed it was mere moments before Minerva experienced her first of what would be many orgasms that night. But Albus had no intentions of letting her rest, and so he slowly removed the only article of clothing she was still wearing. Minerva opened her eyes as Albus threw the last of her clothing to the floor, and she started to sit up in an effort to be closer to him. Albus gently pushed her back down on the bed, “I’m not done with you yet, love.” Minerva’s breath caught in her throat as she contemplated what he would do next. Moving down to her feet Albus began to massage her legs, then, after turning her over, he moved to her back and arms letting his fingertips graze the sides of her breasts. His hands were everywhere, and Minerva had never felt so hot before. She couldn’t contain the gasp in her throat as she felt his hardened desire push up against her hip. She reached for him, but he moved away. “Albus,” she started to pout. “The night is still young, love, and this is all about you,” was his only response as he turned her over to kiss her swollen lips. This time Albus allowed his mouth and tongue to send Minerva over the edge. “Albus, please…I need you,” she pleaded about to crazy with her need to feel him inside of her, and she scooted further down the bed hoping he would stop teasing her. Albus could no longer deny himself the same need; standing to remove his boxers Albus guided Minerva back up the bed before he covered her body with his. Several hours later Albus lay awake quietly stroking Minerva’s hair as she lay sleeping beside of him. Their bodies were still tangled, but he was able to move just enough to watch her without waking her up. Not that he feared he would, she was very exhausted and he smiled in spite of himself. Albus knew he would never forget the way his name sounded on her precious lips as she screamed it in release the first time they had made love together. Looking over the room he noticed the fire had gone out, only a few candles were still lit, and all of the whipped cream was gone. He couldn’t help but blush as he thought back to how Minerva had made sure not an inch was left in the bowl or on him for that matter. Gazing back down at the woman in his arms he slowly succumbed to sleep.
When Minerva awoke the next morning she smiled softly at the man still asleep beside of her. Moving her head to look at the clock she noticed it was noon. ‘Noon! I never sleep till noon. When were we supposed to be back?’ “Albus, darling, we need to get up…” Minerva said trying to wake him up. He didn’t budge. She moved so as to lean over him, and when her nose was practically touching his, his eyes flew open and before she could say a word she found herself being pinned beneath his weight on the bed. “Albus, its noon, when were we supposed to be back at the school?” This got his attention, lifting his head up from her neck he looked to the clock, “Two hours ago.” “What will happen when they see us coming back late, together? Minerva asked as Albus moved to sit up in bed beside of her. “Well, why don’t we floo into my office, and then if anyone sees you say you were discussing the spring term with me.” “Your brilliant,” she answered in return leaning up to kiss him. When she pulled out of the kiss Minerva got out of bed, taking the sheet with her and headed for the bathroom. “I need a shower; I’ll be out as soon as I can.” Blowing him a kiss she disappeared behind the bathroom door. Albus surveyed the living room as he waited for Minerva to come downstairs; it looked a lot better he thought. They had spent the last few days bringing things down from the attic, and making it look like a home once more. “Will we come back here,” Minerva asked from the top of the stairs before levitating her bags down to in front of the fireplace. “Would you like to?” “Yes, summers, or holidays, or even weekends if we could get away,” she answered him. “I’d like to, too. Alright are we ready to go back?” Nodding that she was all set the couple left the house with one backward glance. After landing in his office Albus took Minerva’s left hand within his own, and reached inside of his pocket producing a solid gold band. “Albus,” Minerva asked questionably. “My love, we have already decided that our relationship should be a secret and that marriage, at the moment in time does not seem wise, but I would like you to wear this ring as a symbol of my love for you. When it goes on your finger it will become invisible so that no one else can see it. Will you wear it,” Albus asked looking into her eyes. Without hesitation Minerva answered him, “Of course I’ll wear it!” Smiling he said, “Good. Now there is an inscription on the inside, care to read it?” Handing her the ring Minerva read aloud what she saw on the inside: Love alters not with his brief hours and weeks, AD/MM 1987
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Sept 5, 2004 20:42:01 GMT -5
Post by TartanPhoenix on Sept 5, 2004 20:42:01 GMT -5
Oh my goodness. That was fabulous!! I couldn't blame them; I'd have slept in too. Another one of your great stories.
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Sept 5, 2004 21:38:32 GMT -5
Post by Jestana on Sept 5, 2004 21:38:32 GMT -5
Oh, bravo! I love the ending! Very nicely done!
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Sept 5, 2004 21:57:06 GMT -5
Post by Catwoman99 on Sept 5, 2004 21:57:06 GMT -5
That was wonderful. ;-) I think they deserved to sleep in after such a night! I love the invisible ring idea! Wish I'd thought of it! Congrats on another great fic! -April :-)
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Sept 5, 2004 22:30:01 GMT -5
Post by ginger newts on Sept 5, 2004 22:30:01 GMT -5
A wonderful ending to a wonderful story! I love the bit about the ring. *sigh* Another perfect romance.
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Sept 5, 2004 23:07:50 GMT -5
Post by Miss Q on Sept 5, 2004 23:07:50 GMT -5
Such a wonderful end to this wonderful story! Thank you!!!!
M
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Sept 6, 2004 2:34:53 GMT -5
Post by TabbyForever on Sept 6, 2004 2:34:53 GMT -5
I'm agreeing with that...it really is another great chapter and certainly a justified ending to a reat story!!! Well done...i know you had problems trying to end this but i think this chapter is a perfect ending. Tabs
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Sept 6, 2004 4:11:05 GMT -5
Post by griseldalafey on Sept 6, 2004 4:11:05 GMT -5
Lovely ending. of course they've slept in *grin* Such a beautiful quote too. Thank you for writing such a wonderful story
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Sept 6, 2004 10:32:38 GMT -5
Post by Nerweniel on Sept 6, 2004 10:32:38 GMT -5
*melts*... oh dear, another absolutely brilliant story, and indeed, they just neeeeeded to sleep in after THAT night, hehehehe ! Love, Liz
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Sept 7, 2004 7:07:59 GMT -5
Post by griseldalafey on Sept 7, 2004 7:07:59 GMT -5
I think the story is so great and I'm now planning on review more. I love it. Keep going.
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Sept 7, 2004 12:23:33 GMT -5
Post by angharad on Sept 7, 2004 12:23:33 GMT -5
Sweet, tangy, and with a dollop of Shakespeare. Thanks for the lovely feast!
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Sept 11, 2004 14:58:20 GMT -5
Post by ArabellaFiggs on Sept 11, 2004 14:58:20 GMT -5
Wow, great story. You have done a wonderful job.
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Nov 6, 2004 22:01:38 GMT -5
Post by Tabby Bee on Nov 6, 2004 22:01:38 GMT -5
*pouting* Awww, it ended? Darn, I didn't want it to end *still pouting* Ah well, all stories need an ending sometime. Great work!
-TB
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Feb 14, 2007 19:22:20 GMT -5
Post by elivania on Feb 14, 2007 19:22:20 GMT -5
Marvelous!
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Feb 14, 2007 21:08:00 GMT -5
Post by McGonagallsGirl on Feb 14, 2007 21:08:00 GMT -5
Yes to everything that's been stated.
Amazing!
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Feb 15, 2007 17:19:29 GMT -5
Post by PiER on Feb 15, 2007 17:19:29 GMT -5
My favourite line : “Darling, have you started cooking breakfast yet or do you want me to?” It just made me chuckle... Brilliant!
PiER
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Oct 26, 2007 11:33:03 GMT -5
Post by gryffindorprincess on Oct 26, 2007 11:33:03 GMT -5
I love it can't wait to read more.
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Mar 10, 2008 21:44:02 GMT -5
Post by harmonydumbledore on Mar 10, 2008 21:44:02 GMT -5
That was great. I loved it!
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Nov 25, 2015 5:57:16 GMT -5
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Post by Mandy McGonagall-Dumbledore on Nov 25, 2015 5:57:16 GMT -5
Awwww!! I LOVE IT!!
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