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Post by osusprinks on Jan 3, 2007 14:17:06 GMT -5
A/N: I'm not sure this worked out as well on paper as it did in my head, so if the format is annoying or confusing, let me know and I will work on it. Thanks for reading!
He has a twinkle in his eye whenever he smiles. She has a glare that can create ice, then melt it again with a single look. He maintains that I love his beard, even when I complain about its wildness and although I will never admit it, we both know he’s right. She loves my beard. He has a smile that warms me from the inside out. She lets her hair down when we’re alone, both figuratively and literally. He is the most intelligent man I’ve ever known. She is the smartest person I know. He makes me laugh. She laughs at my jokes, all of them. He shares everything with me. She is always there for me to depend on. He is everything to me. She is everything to me. He is the most powerful wizard of our age and I feel weak in his presence. She is the most beautiful woman in the world and I feel a fool in her presence. He is the most eligible bachelor of my lifetime. She is single, and yet I am still afraid to act. He is out of my league. She is too good and too young for me. He will always be my only love. She will always be my only love.
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Post by childminerva on Jan 3, 2007 14:21:36 GMT -5
*silent scream* This is so beautiful!!! I take back what I said about your "And" being my favorite, this one has replaced it. The formating looks great, I really like the way you did it. I like that you combined the two prompts in such a way. It was fluffy for a bit, but the angst at the end was great! (you know me  ) This one is definitely going in the best oneshot C2! |
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Post by beMMADfabulous on Jan 3, 2007 14:34:11 GMT -5
WOW!! That was amazing. You really inspired me... I must go write now!  |
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Post by Hogwarts Duo on Jan 3, 2007 15:01:42 GMT -5
I can only agree with what's already been said...beautiful, amazing, inspiring...just wonderful...to add another.  The style was unique and I liked it very much. I envisioned them standing together, facing each other and thinking these things mentally. Great job! |
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Post by EloquentPhoenix on Jan 3, 2007 15:13:40 GMT -5
Wow. Amazing, and the format is fine. It's wonderful, and sweet and funny. Quite sad, but still very aww. My favourite line is ---->>>
She lets her hair down when we’re alone, both figuratively and literally.
*Sigh* Wonderful. And at the pain of repeating myself: I don't know how you do it but keep doing it!
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Post by jayejaye on Jan 3, 2007 18:40:59 GMT -5
I've already said it, but I'll say it again anyway. That was Wonderful. I really liked the format...very original.
I was thinking perhaps you really were turning me into a fluff reader, then you throw in those last lines...sheer genius ;-D
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Post by furandfeathers on Jan 3, 2007 21:27:53 GMT -5
omg i love this!!! It's fantastic!
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Post by MinnieQuill on Jan 3, 2007 23:38:48 GMT -5
The format is FANTASTIC. As the the whole thing. |
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Post by expectopatronum08 on Jan 4, 2007 0:21:50 GMT -5
That was amaziing, girl! I love the way it was laid out and the style...I'm always looking for new styles in writing....this was very creative! It was a mix of many emotions and, just, wow.
I actually can't find the right words. (which means it was fabulous!)
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Post by StormAngeltoo busy to log in on Jan 4, 2007 7:39:53 GMT -5
omg omg omg. This is so totally beautiful. I love it and couldn't help but to agree with what everyone said
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Post by laundry basket on Jan 4, 2007 17:57:00 GMT -5
*squee* That was wonderful! *squee*
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Post by Drake on Jan 7, 2007 17:30:52 GMT -5
He maintains that I love his beard, even when I complain about its wildness and although I will never admit it, we both know he’s right. She loves my beard. Best thing EVA!!! |
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Post by The Anglophile on Apr 27, 2007 17:27:42 GMT -5
I love the bit about his beard. I don't know if you'd want to call it a poem, but it sort of reads like one because it flows so well. Love it.
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Post by StormAngel on May 6, 2007 9:15:44 GMT -5
wow. Great piece!!
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Post by kissofdeath on Jun 6, 2007 20:30:07 GMT -5
I love this! The way you made the format, the way the words flowed so nicely together. It's just perfect! You rock!
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Post by tartanmin on Jun 26, 2007 7:58:44 GMT -5
not confusing at all..
so sweet and beautiful
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Post by ιady ταвz on Jun 28, 2007 21:05:18 GMT -5
aww...my heart flutters! lovely!
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Post by McGonagallsGirl on Jul 3, 2007 21:55:00 GMT -5
mmmmm  |
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Post by silvertabby on Aug 15, 2007 10:13:52 GMT -5
oh, my God! i'm still crying. This is so beautifull... Whanna read more of your staff.
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Post by pinnacle on Aug 24, 2007 22:08:38 GMT -5
Ohhhh. It hurts. That's all I have to say about that.  Good one. |
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Good one.