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Post by beMMADfabulous on Nov 5, 2006 17:59:53 GMT -5
FanFic 100 Prompt #:: 040- Sight- Albus watches Minerva eat a lemon drop. ;D
(Very, very short piece of fluff!)Rating:: TSweet Torture I look up from my work papers at my wife. She smiles sweetly, waiting patiently for me to complete my letter to the Ministry so that we may go on our evening walk together. "Would you like a lemon drop, Minerva?" I ask, offering her the candy dish. Although she does not often care for my lemon sweets, she decides to humor me this time by taking one. I attempt to return to my work, but I cannot help but watch her as she brings the candy to her lips. I pretend I do not notice as she slips the lemon drop into her mouth, her fingers lingering at her lips as she slowly licks off the excess sugar. My heart races; I cannot bear to watch her unknowingly torture me, but neither can I tear my eyes away from her seductive routine. She moves the candy in her mouth, swirling it on her tongue until it becomes smaller and smaller, almost ready to dissolve completely. Minerva looks up at me with a coy smile and devilish twinkle in her eyes. I now realize that she has been fully aware of her cruel torture. Yes, rest assured that I will return the favor to her tonight. THE END
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Post by mcgonagallrocks on Nov 5, 2006 18:06:25 GMT -5
OMG good job.
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Post by Ashlynn Minerva Rose on Nov 5, 2006 19:15:56 GMT -5
short, fluffy, && to the point. just how i like it. lol good job
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Post by osusprinks on Nov 6, 2006 11:56:07 GMT -5
I love this story! Excellent job. Torturing our men is just too much fun! lol Thanks for sharing!
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Post by nicolerose on Nov 6, 2006 23:08:28 GMT -5
nice. lol. i love it. but i think there should be more
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MrCoolio
First-year Student
Yes they are. =)
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Post by MrCoolio on Nov 7, 2006 16:45:52 GMT -5
ummm.... that was really good. I ♥ it.
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Post by childminerva on Nov 9, 2006 18:54:26 GMT -5
hehe...loved it! (This is helping my bad day grumpiness, btw.) I think you should follow this with a lemon...just a suggestion!
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Post by ismaco on Nov 21, 2006 22:51:05 GMT -5
Nice, sweet and fluffy. As Minerva Rose says... straight to the point. Liked it. Bravo!! Is'bel
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Post by ιady ταвz on Nov 21, 2006 23:01:25 GMT -5
it is sweet
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Post by StormAngel on Nov 22, 2006 2:48:58 GMT -5
weeeeeeeee..... Nice !!!
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Post by Drake on Jan 12, 2007 22:30:05 GMT -5
Alas! Fluff! ;D ;D ;D ;D Yey.
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