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Post by StormAngel on Apr 5, 2007 8:53:08 GMT -5
A/N: I'm really really sorry for this. I did this in school during my 2 hour free period when I had nothing to do at all
Sometimes
Sometimes, she thought that he would never to live to see the light. His work is dangerous, as is hers. Sometimes, he wished that she would be happy. How could one be happy when the war is near? Sometimes, she wished that he would be less cheerful. Is happiness through this dark war our leading light? Sometimes, he wished that such a burden has not been placed on Harry’s young shoulders. Burdens are meant to be shouldered, and taken with responsibility. Sometimes, she just wants to break down and cry. Yet, she can’t. Minerva McGonagall, the ice queen, can’t. Sometimes, he just wants to strode up to Voldemort and kill him. This cannot be done, for Voldemort lives in seclusion. Sometimes, she wants to just lie beside him and stay with him forever. Sometimes, he wishes for peace. Sometimes, Dreams do come true.
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Post by EloquentPhoenix on Apr 5, 2007 8:55:38 GMT -5
Aww. It was quite a powerful technique to use, I especially liked the last line. It was kind of bittersweet. And never ever ever apologise for writing good fluff.
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Post by minxphoenixtabs on Apr 7, 2007 4:19:20 GMT -5
nice. I agree with EloquentPhoenix, you should never apologise for writing good fluff.
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Post by hehacla on Aug 13, 2007 3:29:30 GMT -5
Aww very cute. It proud tears to my eyes. Happy tears really.
hehacla
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