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She
Jul 30, 2005 20:20:09 GMT -5
Post by TabbyMin on Jul 30, 2005 20:20:09 GMT -5
I'm not sure if this will go any further. 'She' can be anyone who you like but she was originally made as Minerva.^^- tabby
She ran. Harder and faster through the flowing breeze. Her silken black hair flew behind her. The lake in the distance shimmered under the sun as the woman ran towards it. Her tears, wet and sorrowful, made their way down her soft face. She fell upon the dew-filled grass hard and with terrible pain. With her hands trembling, she took off her muddy boots. Her worn form sobbing, she shook violently with every nerve-racking cry. Her morning robes had long been discarded and now with only a white summer dress, she rose. Spreading her arms out from her, she tilted her head slightly higher. As the sun rose with her, she gently put one foot into the icy water and walked forwards as if on a railing above ground. Her soaked dress spread out from her when she was knee deep. When she touched the water with her hands the people gathering around the lake shouted out to her but no one came in. Her delicate hair fanned out from her like the white cloth that now clung to her once did. Her nose touched the water and her breath was taken but she kept going under. The last thing seen of her was her head going deeper and deeper until she disappeared all together. Like her thoughts and her memory, she drifted under and the blackness over took her.
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She
Aug 12, 2005 15:08:17 GMT -5
Post by snowcat on Aug 12, 2005 15:08:17 GMT -5
*sob* I have got goosebumps...
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She
Aug 12, 2005 19:41:37 GMT -5
Post by Jbird on Aug 12, 2005 19:41:37 GMT -5
Ophelia?
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She
Aug 13, 2005 14:25:36 GMT -5
Post by palanfanaiel on Aug 13, 2005 14:25:36 GMT -5
Wickedly angsty, I must say, and very lover-ly written... =) P
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Aug 18, 2005 21:44:41 GMT -5
Post by emeraldeyes on Aug 18, 2005 21:44:41 GMT -5
so sad, but well written..
**Kate**
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She
Aug 21, 2005 19:23:41 GMT -5
Post by tabbylvr77 on Aug 21, 2005 19:23:41 GMT -5
Very sad... *goes to wipe eyes*
Rae
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She
Jan 22, 2006 9:09:26 GMT -5
Post by zoeteproet on Jan 22, 2006 9:09:26 GMT -5
What the bloody hell happened! That was so sad!
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She
Feb 4, 2006 14:38:24 GMT -5
Post by ismaco on Feb 4, 2006 14:38:24 GMT -5
What the bloody hell happened! That was so sad! *sigh*... same here! Isabel
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She
Feb 4, 2006 19:53:01 GMT -5
Post by TabbyMin on Feb 4, 2006 19:53:01 GMT -5
Thank you all so much for the reviews! My muse has come back to me and I have written a new installment of sorts to this... story. If you are interested in HG/DM, Tiffany Fang on FF.net has this great unfinished story at the moment. have fun!! -tabby
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I’ve always been one for happy endings. But things haven’t turned out that way for me. The first death in my life was that of my parents. I was left orphaned and alone without anyone to love on the doorstep of my Aunt Petunia. Quirrel, though clearly innocent, grew to be Voldemort’s ally and my enemy. I killed him. When I was twelve, I destroyed a monster; a basilisk, in the dark, damp catacombs underneath Hogwarts and lived to tell the tale. I entered the gruesome tri-wizard tournament as the fourth contestant. Cedric Diggory came back in my arms; dead. In my fifth year at the school that became my home, Sirius Black, the friend and god-father I knew only for a few years, became my bad luck’s next victim. Albus Dumbledore, my mentor and one of the greatest wizards who ever lived, was killed by the traitor, Severus Snape. But the only one I never expected died last week. The grief of losing a loved one, a husband, just took too much out of her. I was the one who pulled her out of the freezing cold water. Her soaked white dress hugged her elegant features tightly dripping excess liquid on the ground. All around me I could see people screaming and sobbing but time seemed so lonesome and the sounds did not reach my ears. No sound at all, until, “My god she’s dead! Headmistress McGonagall is dead!”
0o0o0 guess who it is yet? that obvious huh? ^^
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She
Feb 4, 2006 20:08:49 GMT -5
Post by LadyJolly on Feb 4, 2006 20:08:49 GMT -5
Yes it's quite obvious to who it is. Harry Potter. Minerva is dead ...so sad. Harry lossing another person he cares about. depressing....but it's well writen. Good job
Lady Jolly
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