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Post by Ashlynn Minerva Rose on Nov 21, 2006 22:24:57 GMT -5
Okay, so I'm trying to finish chap. 5 for my story Heart of Gold. So far, I have told what Minerva is wearing, Albus' reaction, and that's it. I can't seem to figure out the rest of the chapter or how to have them make a grand entrance, or whatever. Please throw out some ideas for me. I could really use some help (&& no, I don't mean mentally, although that could use some help as well).  |
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Post by ιady ταвz on Nov 22, 2006 23:10:40 GMT -5
oh i liek that story and waiting for update...let's see, vakentime's dance i believe is where we left off...so then, they dance all the slow songs, etc...oh wait...they didnt enter the great hall yet i assume?
ok so they enter and um.....everyone is stunned at them together...ahhh brain cramp, cant think of a good one yet...so lame
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Post by Ashlynn Minerva Rose on Nov 23, 2006 20:04:26 GMT -5
no thank u i just wasn't sure if they should be early or be late or on time or the reaction, etc. so thank u!!! oh && thanks i'm glad u like it!!!  |
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Post by ιady ταвz on Nov 23, 2006 20:09:59 GMT -5
oh ure welcome..i love it..im glad i could be of help even though it sucked
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Post by Ashlynn Minerva Rose on Nov 24, 2006 14:38:57 GMT -5
ur advise didn't suck!!! && thank u again |
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Post by ιady ταвz on Nov 24, 2006 17:36:58 GMT -5
ure welcome  ... im glad it didnt suck |
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