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Post by minnielover on Jan 10, 2007 18:58:27 GMT -5
Not sure how good this is sorry.
I hate the fact that I love you and you don’t love me back, or even if you do you think you are too old for me. It’s stupid in the world that we live age should not be a factor. We live to be hundreds of years old if we are lucky, OK so maybe I exaggerate a little, so why shouldn’t I love someone sixty years my senior it’s not totally unheard of. My mother was forty years older than the second man she married but nobody cared so why should you think it matters to me?
I know I used to be your student but once again if you ruled everyone out on that basis you wouldn’t of been able to go out with many of the people you have supposedly been with so that is a none starter. Maybe that its that you don’t approve of romantic relations with your colleagues but then again Hooch and Snape have been seeing each other for a while now so you should see that that’s not really a problem.
So I can only conclude that we were only meant to be together for that one night. That it was a mistake, that you don’t feel for me what I feel for you although I do hope I’m wrong because;
Albus I’m having your baby.
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Post by childminerva on Jan 10, 2007 19:19:46 GMT -5
whoa! what a way to end it! Are you going to keep this as a oneshot? There are a few grammatical things, places where there should be some commas...but other than that this looks great.
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Post by ιady ταвz on Jan 10, 2007 19:23:19 GMT -5
this hit me like an anvil...powerful
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Post by minnielover on Jan 12, 2007 15:47:23 GMT -5
Thanks for the replies you guys, here is then next part. Sorry in advance for any grammatical errors I make.
Why Albus? Why was it just a one night stand? Why have I been left feeling like this? But most of all why am I having your baby? I can’t tell you about it, you might chose to stay with me out of pity and I don’t want that to happen, but there is only so much longer I can keep it a secret. We work together everyday at some point you are going to notice and ask me if it’s yours. How am I going to answer? Because if I tell the truth as I said before you will stay with me out of pity, but if I lie then you will think I am some kind of hussy but I’m not I’ve only been with you since I came here and that was almost four years ago now. So what am I going to do?
I have been to see poppy she says that there are concealment charms I can use and they are all very well but what happens when the time comes to have the child what then? Do I give her up for adoption? Do I leave to have him and then come back later when she is old enough to go to school there are plenty of wizard primary schools they could board at but then I would hardly know the child and what if there was no place for me left here then what would I do?
Oh Albus I am so confused tell me, what should I do?
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Post by dianahawthorne on Nov 4, 2007 14:56:17 GMT -5
NOTICE: This story has been moved to Drama and been taken over by me, dianahawthorne, and can also be read on ff.net under the penname stsgirlie. Thanks!
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