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Post by Nerweniel on Jul 27, 2004 12:38:29 GMT -5
A/N: Okay, a little poetry drabble... the Final Battle is over but Albus dies  He fell before the sunlight, before the light could glow, As victory came in sight, finally did he bow. Death was the path which he chose, after ending the war. And green eyes of a black rose were watching from afar. |
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Post by punurple on Jul 27, 2004 21:44:40 GMT -5
*sniffs*
And green eyes of a black rose
were watching from afar.
This is my fave line. I love it, even if it is short. Sometimes those are the best.
punpun
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Post by ArabellaFiggs on Jul 28, 2004 20:16:03 GMT -5
That was beutifel. Loved it.  |
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Post by Inappropriate Goat on Jul 29, 2004 4:46:49 GMT -5
It was soo sad... really hope that Albus doesn't die it in final battle... Well I have to go now... must get tissues... cant' think about Albus or Minervas death...
Good job it was well written
MM
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Post by KayleeTonksLupin on Sept 12, 2004 0:53:46 GMT -5
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Post by griseldalafey on Oct 12, 2004 7:07:56 GMT -5
That was sad, but very Albus... Poor Minerva.
I loved it, it is beautifully written
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Post by QuillofMinerva on Nov 28, 2004 17:12:42 GMT -5
sniffle sniffle sniffle sniffle
that was so beautiful, especially this line :
And green eyes of a black rose
were watching from afar.
I wish Albus hadnt died though
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