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Post by Dewey on Aug 11, 2004 14:08:38 GMT -5
Blahdahdy dah dah. I wrote this at my friend's house one day. I thought it fit the bestest ship ever.
FAREWELL
By: Dewey. aka. Strawberry Blonde Chick
I've tried once, I've tried again
to drop you a hint,
to leave you a line.
I begeth you, please,
but only time shall tell
if a sign is enough
or if this is our farewell.
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Post by griseldalafey on Aug 11, 2004 16:40:43 GMT -5
Sad, but well done. I liked the rythem. (did I spell that right?)
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Post by Nerweniel on Aug 22, 2004 9:12:07 GMT -5
I love this poem... it's very touching, and I cannot get the last two lines out of my head... simply beautiful.
Love,
Liz
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Post by KayleeTonksLupin on Sept 12, 2004 0:47:26 GMT -5
Me likies, but...who is saying it? Minny or Albus?
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Post by ArabellaFiggs on Sept 12, 2004 10:26:33 GMT -5
Ah, so sweet. Very well done you.
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Post by QuillofMinerva on Nov 28, 2004 17:06:18 GMT -5
awww that is a lovely poem
from who's POV is it from?
i reckon Albus...but i could be wrong
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Post by Ron on Dec 7, 2004 9:43:05 GMT -5
I think that poem is very nice. You're my daughter's friend she talked to when we were in the library, aren't you? She was instant messaging you, or whatever you call it...
Ron
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Post by snowcat on Jun 4, 2005 5:33:41 GMT -5
awww....
who's pov is it?
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Post by TartanLioness on Jun 9, 2005 3:31:50 GMT -5
i reckon Albus...but i could be wrong I think it's Min but I could be wrong too... ;D Loved the poem!! Cammie!! |
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Post by angeldust on Jun 9, 2005 9:52:09 GMT -5
awww  so sad but very beautiful! Loved the rhymeing |
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so sad but very beautiful! Loved the rhymeing