Abi
First-year Student
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Post by Abi on Aug 30, 2004 4:15:56 GMT -5
Hey, I'm Abi, I'm new to this site. This is just a poem about sweets and AD/MM.  Ah, joy the sherbet lemon Most bitter of all confections The sour yellow sugar sprinkling Eats it with his eyes a twinkling And I watch him, pursed lips Primly steepled fingertips I’m offered but I must decline Sweets are no favourite of mine “Now Albus, what had you to say?” I ask without further delay He looks at me through half moon specks And my face in the glass reflects “My dear Minerva, take a seat Are you sure that you wont have a sweet?” I nod my head he starts to blush My insides slowly turn to mush |
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Post by Nerweniel on Aug 30, 2004 6:20:04 GMT -5
Aaaaaaaw... It's such a cute little funny poem, and yet it is really shippy too! Congrats, and welcome to the site ;D!
Love,
Liz
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Post by KayleeTonksLupin on Sept 2, 2004 23:32:26 GMT -5
Such a cute poem...luv it...want more shippy poem-ness. Pleeeeeeaaaaaassssse? Please? Loved it...me want more... ;D Tonks: Sweetie, you don't need to beg. I'm sure there will be more poems out there!  Me: Aw, Mum!  Remus: Your mother's right, Kaylee.  Me: Dad...  Remus: Enough...now scoot. Go to Auntie Rolanda and play Quidditch with her. Me: Okay Dad. (goes off to find Auntie Rolanda and runs into Uncle Severus) Snape: What do you want, Lupin?  Me: Just to find Auntie Ro, Uncle Severus!  Snape: Madam Hooch is on the Quidditch pitch. Run off and bother her! And quit calling me Uncle Severus! Me: Fine, Uncle Severus.  |
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Post by ginger newts on Sept 3, 2004 9:56:49 GMT -5
So cute, yay fluffy poetry! You brought a much needed smile to my face this morning. Welcome and please continue to share your loverly poems with us. |
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Post by ArabellaFiggs on Sept 4, 2004 7:10:02 GMT -5
Aaah, that was funny and lovely.
Hope you will write more poems.
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Post by KayleeTonksLupin on Sept 12, 2004 0:46:17 GMT -5
Aw, lookies, me reviewing again! Love this poem again! More?
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Post by griseldalafey on Oct 12, 2004 7:10:06 GMT -5
That's cute... *grin* Minerva made me giggle. She actually likes his sweet-addiction, although she pretents not to. Well done!
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Post by QuillofMinerva on Nov 28, 2004 17:14:24 GMT -5
aww that was such a great fluffy poem it had a lovely free flowing quality to it and was really enjoyable |
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Post by Drake on Jan 6, 2007 14:17:01 GMT -5
AW! FLUFF! YAY!
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Post by childminerva on Jan 6, 2007 15:29:01 GMT -5
omg!!! That is so amazing...love this poem!
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