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Post by KayleeTonksLupin on Sept 7, 2004 10:51:48 GMT -5
She waits for him, Albus Tabby on a brick wall all day Waits for Dumbledore
He comes! See, he brings Sad tidings of an attack! No... The Potters are dead...
Harry lives! Boy-Who-Lived Tabby will never forsake her cub. Dear Harry...
Albus leaves. Tabby watches him go sadly. Love... she loves him. Always...
Tabby and Hagrid leave as well. Harry must stay with the mean Muggles.
Ten years. Albus and Tabby comfort each other. Love blossoms at Hogwarts.
Always, Albus, love. Forever, Tabby, my love. Always, forever.
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Post by ArabellaFiggs on Sept 11, 2004 14:59:40 GMT -5
Big smile thanks to you, sad but sweet at the same time. Great work.
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Post by KayleeTonksLupin on Sept 12, 2004 0:26:02 GMT -5
Why thank you! I needed that sort of praise from a friend as I am feeling a little depressed right now...
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Post by griseldalafey on Oct 12, 2004 7:14:45 GMT -5
Great poem. Haiku is so difficult, but you've managed it wonderfully.
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Lily
First-year Student
Haha... Dumbledore's gay...
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Post by Lily on May 21, 2005 2:17:17 GMT -5
Kaylee!!
What can I expect from you except for another great poem? Keep up the good work, girlie!!
[glow=red,2,300]All my love, ~*~Lily~*~[/glow]
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Post by angeldust on May 21, 2005 3:06:12 GMT -5
lovely poem i never could figure Haiku but i still like this anyway ;D
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Post by TartanLioness cant log in on May 22, 2005 11:19:44 GMT -5
Hiya, fave cousin of mine!! lol
Great poem, Kaylee, I love it. I don't understand what haiku *is* but lovely just the same!! ;D
Good job!!
Cammie xx
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Post by QuillofMinerva on May 22, 2005 13:56:33 GMT -5
Must admit that I am not to familiar with Haiku so if someone could answer that for me, I would be so grateful!
Clayre x
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Post by snowcat on May 22, 2005 15:17:33 GMT -5
The poem is wonderful. It is that simple
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Post by Drake on Jan 14, 2007 13:32:05 GMT -5
Simply loverly Haikus!
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Post by childminerva on Jan 14, 2007 16:16:37 GMT -5
I love haikus! And ADMM haikus are even better...great work!
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Post by laundry basket on Mar 21, 2007 12:34:41 GMT -5
I love Haiku's, and this one is great! Good job!
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