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Post by Nerweniel on Nov 21, 2004 14:20:24 GMT -5
Should I pass away tomorrow, should my body become cold, as the sunrise in the early hours above the trees unfolds, should my life come to an ending, should I leave you on this earth hug my body, kiss my last word and live life for what it’s worth.
Should I pass away tomorrow, should my body become cold, should my heart simply stop beating my heart which you still enfold, should my life fade into nothing, then please listen to my plea; should I fall onto the grass then please don’t cry over me.
A/N I realize it's sad, and yet it's a celebration, for I just finished my NaNoWriMo... 50000 words in 21 days!!!! Squee!!
Love,
Liz
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Post by angeldust on Nov 21, 2004 14:25:03 GMT -5
this is really beautiful yet really sad, i can really imagin one of them saying this to the other
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Post by KayleeTonksLupin on Nov 21, 2004 14:28:59 GMT -5
Oh God...how AWESOME!!!!!!!!! I LOVE it, it's so sad and so beautiful, totally in agreement with Kaitlyn here...
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Post by ArabellaFiggs on Nov 21, 2004 14:44:39 GMT -5
Awh, very well written. It's beautifel but sad indeed. I loved it.
Joop
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Post by griseldalafey on Nov 21, 2004 16:13:03 GMT -5
Sad and yet not sad, very *very* beautiful poem.
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Post by Dewey on Nov 21, 2004 16:54:52 GMT -5
Awww, that's really sad yet beautiful and tastefully written. Thank you, you made my day!
Your friend, Kathy.
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Post by QuillofMinerva on Nov 28, 2004 17:23:47 GMT -5
this is a beautiful poem
full of emotion and its beautiful
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Post by tanja on Aug 29, 2005 14:09:26 GMT -5
How beautiful that poem was can´t be expressed...just lovely sad
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Post by TartanLioness on Sept 4, 2005 14:15:45 GMT -5
*gasp* I've never told you how much I *adore* this poem??? What is wrong with me??!!!! I LOVE it!!! I have it written into my notebook so I can read it whenever I want! Oooh! *headdesk* Bad Cammie! Note to self: remember to tell people when you adore their work!
Love, Cammie
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Post by zoeteproet on Jan 17, 2006 11:41:26 GMT -5
I love your poem! It was so beautiful and sad. I don't understand how people come up with such a great things! Great job, Lies!
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Post by prodigyviolin101 on Jan 22, 2006 10:02:15 GMT -5
You really do have a way with words.
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