AD/MM Villanelle

[Nerweniel]

Sometimes I believe your eyes must be blue-
you know? Aren’t they blue like the skies?
Rather I believe that I’ll always love you.

And this say I, who once promised never to
let a man guide my laughs and my cries-
sometimes I believe your eyes must be blue.

I say please don’t love me- but oh please do-
and just- please- see what deep in my heart lies.
Rather I believe that I’ll always love you.

Literally blind for just once- and still I knew-
no "because" in my heart- no truths, only “why”s-
sometimes I believe your eyes must be blue.

And sometimes I believe that it just can’t be true
that all love I feel and all warmth are just lies.
Rather I believe that I’ll always love you.

I would like to hug you, just don’t know how to,
too long I have lived caged until my demise
Sometimes I believe your eyes must be blue-
rather I believe that I’ll always love you.

[griseldalafey]

Now if only Albus read this. Beautiful poem, very Minerva.

[Dewey]

This is such a beautiful poem. Great job, Lies. I absolutely adore it. . . . ahhhhh, blue.

-Kathy

[KayleeTonksLupin]

Ooh! Very good villanelle! Did ma grand-mere learn the structure from me? As always, extremely good and very AD/MM.

-Kaylee

[snowcat]

very Tabby and very AD/MM....
thank you for sharing
and I like blue.

[kate]

This is so sweet....love it so much!
Thank you for writing and sharing it!

~*~ Kate