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Post by TartanLioness on Jun 17, 2005 4:52:35 GMT -5
this was originally written for a friend of mine but I realized that it could be ADMM too... enjoy!
The Book of Life The book of my dreams is all filled out Likewise is the book of the times I've been hurt But blank are the pages of the book of my life Of real life where I'm never heard
Then I met you and everything changed, My Angel, who lifted me to the sky. Yes, then you came into my life Knowing when and when not to ask, 'why?'
The blank pages are now filled with words Descriptions of our shared days The end is simple, so very clear; The book of my life was written by you
I imagine this to be Minerva's POV...
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Post by rogueinker on Jun 17, 2005 9:59:04 GMT -5
Evoked just the right mood and tone I thought. Thank you for writing it.
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Post by QuillofMinerva on Jun 17, 2005 13:08:57 GMT -5
Awww I really liked the last few sentences.
Thanks for sharing it Cammie
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Post by palanfanaiel on Jun 18, 2005 3:35:20 GMT -5
Liked it vey much, especially the ending ;D
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Post by snowcat on Jun 21, 2005 4:19:26 GMT -5
That, Cammie is lovely I loved the ending. It was so sweet. Thanks for sharing. Love and hugs, Elisabet
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Post by Dewey on Jun 22, 2005 21:14:45 GMT -5
Eeeeeaak! I loved it! It was soooo prettiful! Thank you for writing it.
-Kathy
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Post by Herzele on Aug 24, 2005 4:20:45 GMT -5
I just realised I never let you know how much I love this !! It's so great ...
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Post by kate on Aug 29, 2005 10:15:25 GMT -5
This was so sweet. Thank you for writing and sharing it!
~*~ Kate
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Post by zoeteproet on Jan 18, 2006 12:39:37 GMT -5
The last sentence was so sweet! I love this poem. Love, Sarah xx
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