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Post by palanfanaiel on Jun 18, 2005 3:50:09 GMT -5
Title: Lost Love Summary: Sometimes it's a struggle between doing what is right and what your heart desires. Rating: 13+
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Depressed I must confess, of late I struggle with Gryffindorness Deprived of my bravery, the white knight has departed in protest Roughly dooming my heart, dooming my soul to embers of black In the midst of passion I fear your love for me you lack
Distressed through the dead of night, your eyes haunt my light Daring thoughts into action, urging powerful attractions Darkly denying the true truth, denying the brink of emptiness In the shade of my safe shadow I break down and confess
Dominated by natural instinct, I withdraw in your presence Desire mocking my retreat, genuineness lost in defeat Sadly rejecting my fantasy, rejecting a possible dream You and I, our unspoken love will be a lost requiem
* A/N: I felt I should try some poetry, and this is what came out of it. I wrote it from Albus's POV... Hugs Pal
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Post by TartanLioness on Jun 18, 2005 5:05:02 GMT -5
oh very beautiful, my dear!
I love it!
Hugs, Cammie!!
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Post by Lady Jolly on Jun 18, 2005 11:18:39 GMT -5
That's soo good I love it and it's sad and I like the rhyming heheh Keep writing !! Lady Jolly
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Post by snowcat on Jun 23, 2005 9:17:22 GMT -5
I agree with cammie, it is beutiful. And sery sad. I love it !!!
Elisabet
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