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Post by TartanLioness on Jun 30, 2005 1:33:45 GMT -5
This war took all we had Took the lives of those we love It took too much, just a tad And our friends fly to above
But that I could handle As long as you were here You have been my candle My warmth to dry my tear
But you too are gone How shall I survive? With the coming of this new dawn Where my body is alive
My soul is dead, It died with you I’m looking at the day ahead Is this wind the one that blew?
Things changed so fast One minute to the other Yesterday is in the past And memories flood, one after another
You’re gone now, forever I never thought you would die See your smile again I shall never For all there’s left is Goodbye
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Post by snowcat on Jun 30, 2005 4:41:22 GMT -5
Oh....This is a masterpeacie, Cammie. it is perfection itself, it is so good I can't deskribe it by words. As I told you...you are a wonderful poet.
Love, Elisabet xx
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Post by Herzele on Jun 30, 2005 6:00:41 GMT -5
Love it, love it, love it !! It's so sad, but so wonderfully written !!
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Post by palanfanaiel on Jul 1, 2005 4:40:43 GMT -5
Wauw! This was sooo perfectness.. I loved it...
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Post by doctormadwoman on Jul 17, 2005 17:30:49 GMT -5
It's just....wow....BEAUTIFUL....oh, WHY is it always the most endeared??!!!
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Post by Lady Lavendar on Jul 18, 2005 0:10:48 GMT -5
This was so great!! I loved it so much! Thank you for writing a beautiful piece.
LL
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