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Post by Apocalypticat on Dec 28, 2006 18:19:26 GMT -5
*Rushes in nervously* A little something from Fawkes's POV, on Albus. *Rushes out in terror*
Sapphire the sky o’er lush Lancashire green Untouched by human folly or war. Sapphire the eyes that by flight I saw Reflecting the sun that gave them their sheen. He was small, pale, too quiet, too lean; He was nothing I sought for, just found- But I downed and alighted the ground, And bound him to me, or so it did seem.
Now have that child a mane all of white And a voice like the thunder so bold. His soul is all Love and Mercy and Care, Wisdom and Knowledge and all Virtues there- But oft flame enters his stare, power old To still and awe me, and fill me with light. I hear the God scream inside him all night.
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Post by childminerva on Dec 28, 2006 19:32:38 GMT -5
oooh...very good, I like this POV and you've done a great job!
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Post by aphelion on Jan 4, 2007 22:25:10 GMT -5
Wow, I love this. The way you've placed the rhymes is wonderful and who knew birds thought such lovely lines? "His soul is all Love and Mercy and Care, Wisdom and Knowledge and all Virtues there- But oft flame enters his stare" *clutches chest* Beautiful. Bravo! aphelion
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