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Post by Tabby67 on Dec 30, 2006 13:58:09 GMT -5
Author's Note- This is my first ADMM poem. Came to me talking to my very good friend, Kaitlyn. her and a little mixture of NickleBack and Disturbed and you get this! Very angsty, I will warn you. Reviews would be lovely! Summery- Minerva after Albus' death. Life is a Hurricane It was torn to pieces They were like leaches
The wind and the rain She didn’t say good bye He wasn’t supposed to die
The Eye of the Storm She tells herself nothing’s wrong To try and keep them going strong
The Endless Calm She can’t stop crying She feels herself dying
The Scars are Forever His scent still lingers She can still feel his fingers Caressing her skin at night Knowing where to touch without a light.
He wasn’t supposed to die....
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Post by mcgonagallrocks on Dec 30, 2006 14:02:36 GMT -5
Great job missy *huggles*
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Post by angeldust on Dec 30, 2006 14:02:56 GMT -5
I liked it So terribly sad though I really loved stanza 'The Eye of the Storm She tells herself nothing’s wrong To try and keep them going strong' really liked the rhyme in that one and the last stanza had fabulous imergy.
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Post by childminerva on Dec 30, 2006 17:13:11 GMT -5
That was wonderful. I don't usually enjoy fanfiction poetry, but this was great, very angsty and full of emotion.
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Post by Tabby67 on Jan 7, 2007 2:08:44 GMT -5
Aww....Thanks you guys! I was so nervous about posting it, because I thought it rather sucked. But yay! it's liked!
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