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Post by LadyJolly on Jul 21, 2005 11:39:48 GMT -5
I must say that was a touching scene with Cat know who her father was right away. She's quite intellegent. Albus ever so faithful to his wife...now if only his wife was Minerva but I think Minerva is a bit out of her mind thing she should marry Daniel. He seems like a very violent person when not submitted to so I guess in other words he might be a wife beater. Great update I hope you'll post more soon I really really really (I could go on and on)....really....really like to read the next update!!!!!!!
Lady Jolly
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Post by Krystal on Jul 21, 2005 11:55:24 GMT -5
I find it implausible that Minerva would ever consider Daniel worthy of marriage after what he has done. She can't be that stupid. I'm dying here because Phoebe is going to be so hurt. I hope she doesn't leave Albus though although I could see it happening.
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Post by ginger newts on Jul 21, 2005 12:23:02 GMT -5
Aw, Cat knew her daddy. That was such a sweet meeting. I can't believe she would even consider marrying Daniel after that though. Hurry and post part 4, I want to see how Phoebe reacts and how/when they all become a family.
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Post by TartanPhoenix on Jul 21, 2005 12:46:46 GMT -5
That's not even funny! SHe can't actually be thinking of marrying that son of a flying monkey!! I did like how Cat just jumped in Albus' lap and called him Papa. It made me just go AWWW. Can't wait for the next update.
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Post by Alesia on Jul 21, 2005 15:07:52 GMT -5
You can tell Minerva is really scared about what Albus is going to tell Phoebe. There is no way she would consider marring the scumbag otherwise. She will come to senses I am sure. I am also sure Daniel isn't done making trouble.
Albus is a bit naive about Phoebe isn't he? She is going to lose it. Especially since she can't have children of her own. Could get very ugly quickly.
Cat is just a gem. They always say baby's know their parents.
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Post by Herzele on Jul 21, 2005 16:23:31 GMT -5
Wonderful update !!!!!!!!
That scene with Cat and Albus was soooooooooooooo cute ...
But Minerva can't seriously consider a marriage to someone other than Albus - and especially not that **** Daniel ...
Can't wait to read the next update !!!
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Post by Jaya on Jul 21, 2005 18:58:55 GMT -5
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Post by Lady Jolly on Jul 21, 2005 19:13:51 GMT -5
MAN NOOO WHY DID YOU STOP THERE?!?!?!?!?!?!? Please update soon my goodness i don't want to wait!! Gee how is Phoebe going to react to this news what is going to happen tooo man question and needs some answers oh man please do update soon. LIke really soon
Lady Jolly *sitting at the edge of my seat waiting for more* Dang it I'm so hooked eheheh
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Post by Sensiblyquirky on Jul 21, 2005 19:30:57 GMT -5
i want them together so bad! looking forward to more!
CC
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Post by Krystal on Jul 21, 2005 19:45:04 GMT -5
Oh hurry and fix things and make everything all better for everyone! Poor Phoebe is so upset and the other two are under stress too. I know you'll work your magic and make everything better so I'll just wait and cross my fingers. Krys
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Post by Jaya on Jul 21, 2005 19:55:03 GMT -5
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Post by Lady Jolly on Jul 21, 2005 20:06:06 GMT -5
NO!!! Don't ignore those sparks!!!! heheheh man that's...I'm really glad you didn't leave this at your last chapter because I yeah I'm glad you posted more  Now if only you would post even some more chapters soon anyways good job on this story it's really good Lady Jolly |
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Post by Krystal on Jul 21, 2005 20:08:53 GMT -5
Well I do feel a little better and I hope she doesn't divorce him. That's no way for Albus and Minerva to begin a relationship. I can't wait for the next update.
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Post by ginger newts on Jul 21, 2005 20:46:02 GMT -5
Yikes, what a reaction. I'm very much interested in those sparks, but they seem to be in such an impossible situation. Can't wait to find out how you resolve it.
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Post by Kandice on Jul 21, 2005 21:28:44 GMT -5
This is such a good story. I'm trying to figure out if Phoebe has really forgiven them or what. She seems much more willing to work things out than I would be but then I don't have her maturity. Kandie
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Post by JKMcGonagall on Jul 21, 2005 22:00:23 GMT -5
Wow, talk about a mixed up relationship here. I can't see how they are going to work it all out. I really hate to see anything happen between Phoebe and Albus, because I really like Phoebe, and I know she is hurt right now. However, divorce isn't the answer, I don't think. I just don't know how you are going to reconcile this situation. But...I know you will.
Update again soon.
Kay
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Post by Alesia on Jul 21, 2005 22:50:49 GMT -5
Two fabulous chapters! I am not surprised at Phoebe's reaction. You wrote the scenes of the two confrontations extremely well. I am glad Albus is remaining loyal to her but oh what a complicated web you have woven for them. Especially with those sparks between Albus and Minerva.
This story is progressing along just beautifully.
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Post by QuillofMinerva on Jul 22, 2005 1:15:02 GMT -5
oh my oh my! You wrote Phoebe's reaction very well and I felt Minerva conducted herself with dignigty, it must have been hard for her to stand there and hear Albus say how much he loves Phoebe. I have no idea how you are going to get out of this web you have weaved but I can't wait to find out  I like Phoebe but I also want Albus and Minerva to be a couple and be a family with Cat. Those sparks mean something so Albus don't go into denial because he will only end up hurting everyone concerned again. Clayre x |
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Post by Lady Lavendar on Jul 22, 2005 2:48:37 GMT -5
Wow!! What a powerful update!! I loved Phoebe's reaction to the news. Well hope to see another update soon!
LL
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Post by Herzele on Jul 22, 2005 4:03:13 GMT -5
Wow !!
I so hope that Albus and Min will come together somehow, but right now I can't imagine how you're going to make happen ...
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Post by Hogwarts Duo on Jul 22, 2005 7:29:40 GMT -5
It is a terrible situation the trio finds themselves in. Phoebe feels betrayed and rightfully angry - not that we cared for her treatment of Minerva :-) Minerva has had such a burden on her shoulders and to have to hear Albus confessing his love for Phoebe is heartwrenching. And Albus is caught in the middle between them - by his own doing.
Minerva is such a true friend to the both of them - we do hope she gets her happy ending!
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Post by BlazeFourPaws on Jul 22, 2005 12:09:17 GMT -5
Poor Phoebe. How horrible this must be for her however I want her killed off. Yes I'm evil but I think she and Daniel should do something dumb and die together. Then Albus and Min will be together and all will be good in the land of wonka. Little Cat is shaping out to be a brilliant little Dumbledore. How wonderful this story is.
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Post by Jaya on Jul 22, 2005 18:37:50 GMT -5
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Post by Jaya on Jul 22, 2005 18:46:04 GMT -5
You know...
I've been a very bad writer...
I have made any mention at all of my WONDERFUL beta, tay! So I'm going to take this opportunity to do so... (especially in light of the previous post having a sentence without a period...)
So BLESS YOU! tay!!! You are THE BESTEST!!!!
Jaya ;D
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Post by LadyJolly on Jul 22, 2005 18:50:36 GMT -5
That's really nice. It's good to hear that Minerva and phoebe are friends again. But I still like Albus with Minerva but I don't if that may happen. So please post more soon please I'm still hooked Lady Jolly |
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Post by Lady Lavendar on Jul 22, 2005 19:40:23 GMT -5
Aww how sweet! I could actually picture this chapter in my mind! It's great that Phoebe and Minerva are frineds again!
LL
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Post by ginger newts on Jul 22, 2005 20:10:06 GMT -5
I'm so torn. I'm glad Phoebe and Minerva made up, but I don't want the four of them to be a family. Perhaps the next update or two will solve my dilemma...
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Post by JKMcGonagall on Jul 22, 2005 20:20:24 GMT -5
This was a very sweet chapter. I could just see Albus and Cat at the toy store window. I bet he can't deny her anything. Glad Min and Phoebe are still friends.
Update soon.
Kay
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Post by Sensiblyquirky on Jul 22, 2005 21:54:17 GMT -5
ok so when we get back to the present let's find Phoebe in bed with another man, so she and Albus can split! I just can't do the whole all four of us are one big happy family, but I adore Cat!!
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Post by QuillofMinerva on Jul 23, 2005 2:30:44 GMT -5
Oh I am so torn right now! I am glad that Minerva and Phoebe have made up but Phoebe is in the way and it must be so hard for Minerva to see Albus all loved up with his wife, very painful.
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Now if only you would post even some more chapters 
