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Liz Guest	The Picture Feb 4, 2006 17:05:02 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by Liz on Feb 4, 2006 17:05:02 GMT -5 I am intrigued with this so far. I hope you update soon! It looks to be promising. Liz

Trulyamused Professor of Transfiguration 'What Dreams May Come-' Posts: 469	The Picture Feb 4, 2006 17:57:18 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Trulyamused on Feb 4, 2006 17:57:18 GMT -5 Wonderful start. I would love to read more. Truly
	When Love is-- 'Written in the Stars' 'Nothing can be altered, there is nothing to decide- No escape. No Change of Heart. Nor any place to hide--' ~Elton John~

prodigyviolin101 Getting career advice from McGonagall Violin jest moje ?ycie To zaopatruje ?rodki od rzeczywisto?ci, i jest droga (?rod Posts: 259	The Picture Feb 4, 2006 18:03:01 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by prodigyviolin101 on Feb 4, 2006 18:03:01 GMT -5 Very nice start, please update soon!
	Die- you can't do that to a cat. Since what can a cat do in an empty apartment? Climb the walls? Rub against the furniture? Nothing seems different here but nothing the same. Nothing has been moved,but there's more space. And at nightime no lamps are lit. Footsteps on the staircase, but they're new ones. The hand that puts fish on the saucer has changed too. -Wislawa Szymborska

littlemorgsi Guest	The Picture Feb 4, 2006 18:41:48 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by littlemorgsi on Feb 4, 2006 18:41:48 GMT -5 That was a great start. Please continue.

TabbyMin Having a butterbeer at the Three Broomsticks ADMM forever Posts: 70	The Picture Feb 4, 2006 19:59:50 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by TabbyMin on Feb 4, 2006 19:59:50 GMT -5 I love the daughter idea, with the picture. It's so... PLOT BUNNY!!!-ish. You have a very unique picture of the trio. Is the daughter still living? Please write more. I can't wait! -tabby
	ADMM will live on!

LadyJolly Head Girl To be Forgotten is worser than Death Posts: 318	The Picture Feb 4, 2006 20:00:39 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by LadyJolly on Feb 4, 2006 20:00:39 GMT -5 Awesome start and now I'm hooked so more please ;D Soon! Lady Jolly
	To Love is to Recive a glimpse of Heaven

gingerkitten Prefect Posts: 143	The Picture Feb 5, 2006 10:16:48 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by gingerkitten on Feb 5, 2006 10:16:48 GMT -5 PLEASE, PLEASE KEEP GONIG!!
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Jessabelle Professor of Transfiguration Minerva McGonagall ~ A Fierce Lioness Posts: 670	The Picture Feb 5, 2006 14:36:03 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Jessabelle on Feb 5, 2006 14:36:03 GMT -5 You are a very descriptive writer and I like picture you've painted in my mind's eye! Please update again soon! - Jess
	They used to call me Snow White, but then I drifted. - Mae West

zoeteproet
Celebrating graduation at the Leaving Feast

I hope Albus isn't jealous...

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Post by zoeteproet on Feb 6, 2006 14:08:37 GMT -5

Great story ! I've already reviewed this on ff.net, but I thought I would give another review here to make sure other people read your story and ofcourse so you will write another chapter!
Can't wait to see were you take this story!
Love,
Sarah xx

To be stupid, selfish, and have good health are three requirements for happiness, though if stupidity is lacking, all is lost.

Isabelle Celebrating graduation at the Leaving Feast >>>Storm Warning<<< Posts: 427	The Picture Feb 6, 2006 14:33:02 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Isabelle on Feb 6, 2006 14:33:02 GMT -5 I wasn't signed on when I reviewed your forst chapter, but I am now. This is very interesting. I am curious as what Minerva will tell them. I like her threat about detention for as long as she is living! Made me smile. Liz
	"In three words I can sum up everything I've learned about life: it goes on." ~/~ Robert Frost ~\~

littlemorgsi Guest	The Picture Feb 6, 2006 18:38:27 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by littlemorgsi on Feb 6, 2006 18:38:27 GMT -5 Well done. I am also curious about what Minerva is going to tell them.

zoeteproet
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I hope Albus isn't jealous...

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Post by zoeteproet on Feb 10, 2006 14:35:45 GMT -5

Yeah! You updated!
This is so bad for Minerva, I feel so sorry for her, I so hoped her daughter was still alive.
The ending made me curious, why did Minerva reacted so strange?
Update soon.
Great job Tanja! (and Lies

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Love,
Sarah xx

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To be stupid, selfish, and have good health are three requirements for happiness, though if stupidity is lacking, all is lost.

littlemorgsi Guest	The Picture Feb 10, 2006 20:25:49 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by littlemorgsi on Feb 10, 2006 20:25:49 GMT -5 That was sad. It would be horrible to watch your child die. I cried for months just when my dog died. Anyway, keep up the good work.

prodigyviolin101 Getting career advice from McGonagall Violin jest moje ?ycie To zaopatruje ?rodki od rzeczywisto?ci, i jest droga (?rod Posts: 259	The Picture Feb 11, 2006 10:44:33 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by prodigyviolin101 on Feb 11, 2006 10:44:33 GMT -5 I absolutely love it! Please update soon.
	Die- you can't do that to a cat. Since what can a cat do in an empty apartment? Climb the walls? Rub against the furniture? Nothing seems different here but nothing the same. Nothing has been moved,but there's more space. And at nightime no lamps are lit. Footsteps on the staircase, but they're new ones. The hand that puts fish on the saucer has changed too. -Wislawa Szymborska

Jessabelle Professor of Transfiguration Minerva McGonagall ~ A Fierce Lioness Posts: 670	The Picture Feb 11, 2006 21:28:23 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Jessabelle on Feb 11, 2006 21:28:23 GMT -5 Good update! Please post again soon. - Jess
	They used to call me Snow White, but then I drifted. - Mae West

Alesia Professor of Transfiguration Albus, get your hand off my bum before Severus gets jealous! Posts: 704	The Picture Feb 11, 2006 23:59:04 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Alesia on Feb 11, 2006 23:59:04 GMT -5 Ohh, don't tell me they aren't together any more. Minerva spoke in the past tense. Did the death of their daugther break them up?
	"Dumbledore would have been happier than anybody to think that there was a little more love in the world" - Minerva McGonagall

prodigyviolin101 Getting career advice from McGonagall Violin jest moje ?ycie To zaopatruje ?rodki od rzeczywisto?ci, i jest droga (?rod Posts: 259	The Picture Feb 12, 2006 17:06:35 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by prodigyviolin101 on Feb 12, 2006 17:06:35 GMT -5 Your right Alesia, I never noticed that before oh, i hope they didn't break up.
	Die- you can't do that to a cat. Since what can a cat do in an empty apartment? Climb the walls? Rub against the furniture? Nothing seems different here but nothing the same. Nothing has been moved,but there's more space. And at nightime no lamps are lit. Footsteps on the staircase, but they're new ones. The hand that puts fish on the saucer has changed too. -Wislawa Szymborska

ismaco
Professor of Transfiguration

"That potion... was no health drink..."

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Post by ismaco on Feb 14, 2006 0:12:37 GMT -5

I'm not very fond of drama, but I read this and I was hooked immediately! I can't wait to read more (actually I'm a little afraid to tell the truth) It's really dramatic to loose a child, now... if they broke up, your story would be a tragedy

(and remember... this is only a drama section

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Could you please consider a "happy" ending?

Love,
Isabel

"It was important, Dumbledore said, to fight, and fight again, and keep fighting, for only then could evil be kept at bay, though never quite eradicated..."
HBP

"But what ARE dementoids?" asked Uncle Vernon furiously... OotP

"What do you think?" asked Dumbledore. He might have been asking Harry's opinion on whether it was a good site for a picnic. HBP

prodigyviolin101 Getting career advice from McGonagall Violin jest moje ?ycie To zaopatruje ?rodki od rzeczywisto?ci, i jest droga (?rod Posts: 259	The Picture Feb 21, 2006 17:00:46 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by prodigyviolin101 on Feb 21, 2006 17:00:46 GMT -5 whaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa! that is so sad, but a wonderful story!!
	Die- you can't do that to a cat. Since what can a cat do in an empty apartment? Climb the walls? Rub against the furniture? Nothing seems different here but nothing the same. Nothing has been moved,but there's more space. And at nightime no lamps are lit. Footsteps on the staircase, but they're new ones. The hand that puts fish on the saucer has changed too. -Wislawa Szymborska

Trulyamused Professor of Transfiguration 'What Dreams May Come-' Posts: 469	The Picture Feb 21, 2006 17:09:11 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Trulyamused on Feb 21, 2006 17:09:11 GMT -5 Wonderfully sad. Good work. Truly
	When Love is-- 'Written in the Stars' 'Nothing can be altered, there is nothing to decide- No escape. No Change of Heart. Nor any place to hide--' ~Elton John~

LadyJolly Head Girl To be Forgotten is worser than Death Posts: 318	The Picture Mar 4, 2006 14:44:28 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by LadyJolly on Mar 4, 2006 14:44:28 GMT -5 awww that's the end? so sad yet a really good story! Good Job! Lady Jolly
	To Love is to Recive a glimpse of Heaven

Ginger Newts Guest	The Picture Mar 13, 2006 11:59:13 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by Ginger Newts on Mar 13, 2006 11:59:13 GMT -5 That was so incredibly sad! Very well written, just so sad...if I wasn't at work I think I'd be crying.

blackstar Having a butterbeer at the Three Broomsticks Posts: 58	The Picture Mar 13, 2006 16:09:40 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by blackstar on Mar 13, 2006 16:09:40 GMT -5 ahhhhhhhhh so sad. You can't let it end there. Pleas writh more pleas Well done

zoeteproet Celebrating graduation at the Leaving Feast I hope Albus isn't jealous... Posts: 402	The Picture Mar 15, 2006 16:06:15 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by zoeteproet on Mar 15, 2006 16:06:15 GMT -5 Why? Why did they broke up! starts to cry even more It's my birthday today and I've just read this, it's so sad. Wonderful but sad! stops writing review and continues crying
	To be stupid, selfish, and have good health are three requirements for happiness, though if stupidity is lacking, all is lost.

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