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Post by StormAngel on Jan 31, 2007 6:43:50 GMT -5
Well, here's my first dramatic fic... I'm doing this for my ongoing english project. Please R/R and tell me if it's crap...
“Avada Kedavra!”
A flash of green light hit Albus Dumbledore. He flew backwards, hitting the stone wall with a loud thud. Everyone looked on in shock. Minerva glanced at the scene in shock. “Athair!” She cried as she ran down the steps of the Astronomy tower.
Everyone turned and look at the beautiful green eyed witch as she ran to the man’s side. Sobbing uncontrollably, she sat by her body, leaning against his cold body as she mourned his death. No one noticed that Severus Snape, Draco Malfoy and all the death eaters has slinked away as they looked at the Scottish witch in shock. Those who had known the truth of their relationship glance at her sympathetically.
“Come now, Min.” Xiomara Hooch placed a hand on the Transfigurations Mistress’s shoulders. Minerva seemed to collect herself for a moment, wiping the tears that had gathered and flowed down her cheeks, before standing up. She levitated the headmaster and walked towards the school, still firmly holding on to Xiomara’s hand.
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Post by minxphoenixtabs on Mar 12, 2007 22:32:53 GMT -5
Nice.... But are you ever going to update this thing?
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Post by prodigyviolin101 on Mar 17, 2007 16:15:15 GMT -5
Well done.
prodigy
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