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Post by maddalicious on Feb 23, 2008 2:24:16 GMT -5
Okay guys, here's the first part. I look forward to your coments and suggestions....be as tough as you like, I heart constructive criticism!! ;D
Minerva woke up, the offending smell of blood, sweat, and burnt flesh invaded her nostrils. She lifted her still groggy head up from the cold cement floor, and nervously took in her surroundings. She was enclosed in a small room, no bigger than a broom closet, the walls were bare, aside from the random splatters of blood, and the concrete floor was littered with torn out hair and cat fur. In a panic, she reached for her wand and found nothing. She tried to stand up, but collapsed back to the hard floor in agony; her left leg had been broken. She let out a cry of pain, and that’s when the doors opened. Standing in the doorway, silhouetted by the piercing light from beyond the room, was the hunched over figure of a man. Alone and defenceless, Minerva hobbled into the far corner and looked up at the intruder, “hello again professor, it’s been a long time”.
(End of part one)
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Post by dianahawthorne on Feb 23, 2008 15:22:16 GMT -5
Ooh, very interesting! Please update soon!
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Post by mmadforever on Feb 24, 2008 15:16:39 GMT -5
can't wait to see what happens next!
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Post by TheGryffindorSeeker on Feb 24, 2008 18:23:05 GMT -5
ooo update lol
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Post by silvertabby on Feb 26, 2008 15:33:11 GMT -5
update ! i can't wait to see what happens
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Post by bethj4013 on Mar 6, 2008 16:12:07 GMT -5
I know I want to read more
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Post by maddalicious on Apr 16, 2008 2:22:19 GMT -5
With a ragged breath, Minerva slowly turned her head towards her captor, but his face was not yet visible for it was still ensconced in the shadows, “The Dark Lord will reward me for bringing him this trophy”. Minerva tried to respond, but could not seem to find her voice, “what’s the matter professor, cat got your tongue?” In a flash he was beside her, he grabbed her by her torn robes and roughly dragged her to her feet, and, pushing her violently against the wall, hissed in a low voice, “We know your secret professor….how does it feel to be Albus Dumbledore’s whore?” His rotting breath overtaking her senses, Minerva tried to deny it, but still could not control her voice. Slamming her head against the cold brick wall, she felt the blood gush from her skull and nose, “I asked you a question, now answer damn it!... how does it feel?”
All of a sudden a perverse shriek echoed down the corridor, sending an unsettling chill down Minerva’s spine, “MCGONAGALL!” she screeched “We have McGonagall! Oh how Master will be pleased. I shall be showered in praise when I present her to the Lord!”
“You?!?! Bellatrix, you will not take this one from me, I was the one who found her; I have earned my prize, and shall take my due credit!”
Laughing manically, Bellatrix answered, “I will take as I please Goyle! The Dark Lord trusts me, and you are already on a tight rope as it is…or have you forgotten”
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Post by maddalicious on Apr 16, 2008 2:22:52 GMT -5
Nick-Nack-Paddy-Wack-hizzzzz-ouse!!
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Post by maddalicious on Apr 16, 2008 2:23:04 GMT -5
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Post by harmonydumbledore on Apr 16, 2008 15:42:10 GMT -5
please keep it up. I hopr Minerva gets out alright!!
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Post by mmadforever on Apr 16, 2008 16:37:50 GMT -5
can't wait to read the nex part and poor min....
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Post by silvertabby on Apr 17, 2008 12:37:10 GMT -5
oh my gosh! this is so very great. I love it
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Post by minervammcg on Oct 26, 2008 21:05:27 GMT -5
Woot!!!!! Keep up the AWESOME work. I need to know more.
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Post by tabby19 on Oct 26, 2008 22:30:16 GMT -5
ohh please update soon!!  I cant wait to see where you are going with this!! i love it so far! ;D |
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Post by aptasi on Oct 31, 2008 20:33:47 GMT -5
Write more!!!
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Post by mercifulheavens on Nov 21, 2008 2:03:26 GMT -5
Yes...please continue it...it is very good
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Post by maddalicious on Jul 20, 2009 20:13:51 GMT -5
In a sudden flash of fury, Goyle grabbed Bellatrix by the robes and thrust his wand into her cheek, causing her to wince in pain, drawing his face close to hers, he hissed out the words, “No, I haven’t forgotten” , and dropped her to the ground.
Bellatrix slowly slithered up the cold brick wall, an eerie laugh escaping her shrivelled lips, “and since your memory is still intact, I will be taking MY prisoner to the dark lord” she sang in her hauntingly shrill voice as she advanced towards Minerva at a break neck speed.
Backed into a corner, Minerva could think of only one way of possible escape. Mustering up all of her strength, Minerva tried to transform into her animagus self, but it just wasn’t enough, and she collapsed back to the floor in a heap.
“Oh my! What’s this my dear professor, well it would seem that cats don’t always land on their feet!” Bellatrix cackled and then knocked a blow straight to her mouth, the sickening crack of broken jaw echoed throughout the tiny cell.
“Y-you bitch!” Minerva choked out through the thickening blood that was now pooling in the back of her throat.
“Tisk-tisk professor, you are being a very bad kitty – and bad kitty’s deserve to be punished CRUCIO!!
Minerva ceased in the corner, the blood now pouring out of her mangled mouth. Once the Cruciatus curse had run its course, Bellatrix grabbed the broken McGonagall and dragged her down the cold, dusty corridor.
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Post by maddalicious on Jul 20, 2009 20:17:58 GMT -5
Oh man! Has it been a while. I whole heartedly appoligize for the extreme lateness of this postizzle. I hope to keep up to date from now on  hope you guys enjoy!! And suggestion or ideas would be AWSEOME!! ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D |
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Post by harmonydumbledore on Jul 22, 2009 9:30:13 GMT -5
AAGGGGGHHHH! Minerva!! NOOOOO!!!
Please update quickly!
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Post by zaza on Jul 22, 2009 13:51:30 GMT -5
Minerva!! please update soon *bows* |
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Post by sweetlittleblooob on Aug 4, 2009 10:38:49 GMT -5
What had happened? And where is Albus!!!?
please update
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Post by Twisted Peppermint on Aug 5, 2009 1:21:55 GMT -5
UPDATE!!!
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Post by ginevrahermione on Jan 13, 2010 2:16:10 GMT -5
Oh my goodness, please don't let her die. Imagine how horrible that would be - crucio and being dragged = massive carpet burns!
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Post by horcruxhorror on Jan 31, 2010 0:30:52 GMT -5
were is albus?  ?? he needs to come to her rescue!!!!!!!!! |
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Post by Rosemary Dumbledore McGonagall on Jan 31, 2010 12:51:45 GMT -5
OMG! Where's Albus? Hope Min makes it out all right!
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Post by ~ Rosaliee ~ on Dec 22, 2010 4:35:58 GMT -5
Please more!!!
This very goood!!!
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Post by sonataeternal on Dec 25, 2010 13:57:26 GMT -5
oh my gosh this is so good. Poor min, update so she can be saved!
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Post by maddalicious on Oct 30, 2015 20:26:38 GMT -5
Barley conscious, Minerva was aware of nothing but cold and darkness as she was moved along the passageway. Willing herself to latch onto her awareness. Minerva began to count her steps, memorize the sounds of the boots clicking on the stone – yes it sounds like stone – floors as she was forcibly tugged and yanked by the un-gentle hands of Bellatrix Lestrange. If she could only make herself focus, regain some semblance of lucid thought, then she was sure she would be able to think of a plan of action.
They had just taken a left turn – somehow the air surrounding her seemed to be getting thinner, making it harder for her sore lungs to draw breath; the chill in the corridor now seeping into her soul. Suddenly they came to a stop. Minerva forced herself to open her eyes; through the hazy blur of water and trickling blood, she was able to make out the figure of a large, black, wooden door. Minerva knew precisely what lay beyond it.
Three knocks, “My Lord, I have brought the prisoner.”
The door opened. Minerva was roughly pushed through into an even darker room.
She was so weak, so physically and mentally exhausted, she wanted nothing more than to fall to the ground in a heap and lay there, unmoving, to accept her fate and be done with it all, but she forced herself to stay standing. Her mind beginning to feel more clear, Minerva squared her shoulders, stealing herself for what was to come, and looked up into the snake like eyes of her captor.
“Professor McGonagall. I had hoped this day would come.” He circled around her in one fluid movement, his high pitched, hissing voice painful to Minerva’s ears, making her stomach lurch and recoil. He was so close; she could feel his breath on her skin, sickening and hot against the side of her face.
“Thank you Bella, you have served me well – you may leave our guest to me now.”
“Thank you my Lord,” and with a bow of her head Bellatrix left the room, closing the heavy wooden door behind her.
The silence grew thick, hanging in the air. Voldemort turned away, moving around to stand in front of Minerva, a twisted smile playing across his face.
“When I heard I had Minerva McGonagall in my possession, I dared not let myself believe it, until now”
Silence.
“How did my servants manage this, Minerva? How is it that the great and all powerful Albus Dumbledore let this happen?”
Silence. Voldemort craned his neck, moving his face closer to Minerva’s.
“He is a weak old man. I am powerful, I am strong, I possess skills that Dumbledore can only imagine. Now, I posses you. The woman closest to him. The woman he trusts more than anyone in the world – the woman who is going to kill him”
Minerva’s head snapped up, meeting the cold hard eyes of Voldemort.
“I would sooner die than –“
“Crucio!”
Minerva was lifted into the air – overwhelming pain coursing through every nerve of her body. She tried to gasp for air, but her weak lungs were unable to draw any breath, just when she thought she would lose consciousness yet again, she was released from the curse; relief flooding her body. She lay on the floor, unmoving.
“How dare you speak to me – how dare you address me in this manner. Filthy muggle lover”
The sound of fast moving bare feet on stone met her ears seconds before she was yanked up to stand before him.
“Not to fret Professor. You will be cleaned up, good as new, and returned to Hogwarts and your precious Saint Dumbledore, and by this time tomorrow, he will be dead.”
Pointing his wand straight at her chest, Voldemort hissed, “Imperio.”
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Post by Hufflepuff99 on Nov 9, 2015 22:49:24 GMT -5
Can you update? For me? Pwease?
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I cant wait to see where you are going with this!! i love it so far! ;D
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