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Post by angharad on Sept 28, 2004 16:01:57 GMT -5
Fabulous! Though you *are* a bit of a tease...  The story-within-a-story is a nice twist!  |
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Post by Sensiblyquirky on Sept 28, 2004 16:15:36 GMT -5
aren't you a tease? sigh...great response! A very interesting way to write it!
Christy
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Post by ginger newts on Sept 28, 2004 16:25:36 GMT -5
Very original, I loved it! Although I'm sad that it wasn't a real kiss... *starts thinking her response is going to be the odd one out* |
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Post by TartanPhoenix on Sept 28, 2004 18:24:51 GMT -5
That was just cruel!! I loved the story within a story idea. Great response.
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Post by Jestana on Sept 28, 2004 20:36:30 GMT -5
*pout* How do I compete with that? *giggle* Wonderful job. I love it!
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Post by Miss Q on Sept 28, 2004 23:26:32 GMT -5
ooh... wonderful... and funny with the story-in-story....
loved the line " TEXT " and the fact that he went oon proving his point!! ;D
M(iss Q)
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Post by Miss Q on Sept 28, 2004 23:27:27 GMT -5
the line was “Then forgive me for saying so my dear, but you have been courted by the wrong men”, Albus stated.
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Post by ArabellaFiggs on Sept 29, 2004 6:30:53 GMT -5
he he, very funny response girl. Really loved it. How do you all came up with this idea's  I want that to. |
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Post by TabbyForever on Sept 29, 2004 7:17:15 GMT -5
How do you go about starting to think about an idea like that!!!!
Hehehe great responce, loved it!!!!
Well done!!
Tabs
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Post by Inappropriate Goat on Sept 29, 2004 12:45:51 GMT -5
That was a great story... the best I have read so far. I am casting my vote for you.
MM
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Post by Catwoman99 on Sept 30, 2004 0:18:51 GMT -5
;D That was a great response! I loved the idea of a story within a story. Very original and different. Go you!
-April :-)
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Post by Kit on Sept 30, 2004 17:21:38 GMT -5
Great Response! I also like the Idea of having a story within a story! Well done. |
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Post by max on Sept 30, 2004 20:18:50 GMT -5
Wonderful story ... but (to stay close to my repuation): Where's the lemon?
Max
giggling
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Post by Nerweniel on Oct 2, 2004 11:00:36 GMT -5
I am so ashamed I didn't read & review this earlier! This was so good, so original too, with the story within a story... *applauds*... even without a lemon (*wink* at Max... you've got a serious addiction there, young lady... and I have to stop calling people who are my senior "young lady"  ! Congrats!!! Love, Lies |
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Post by max on Oct 2, 2004 15:28:16 GMT -5
Griselda, dear,
how could you be so indiscrete about Albus and Minerva? Myrtle reading their story - buuh!
But it's indeed a story worth reading ...
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Post by AthenaDumbledore on Oct 29, 2004 16:34:07 GMT -5
Whiiiiiiiiiiii, I love this. It might be a little late read this, but I haven't been here for quite a while. You certainly are the best of round six...
And, I agree with Max... where's the lemon???
Just kidding, it's wonderful, no need to show us anything more. Fabulous work!
Sara
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The story-within-a-story is a nice twist! 
! Congrats!!!