Keep Going -- Challenge 28

Orion's Guard
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Keep Going -- Challenge 28 Apr 30, 2005 22:46:57 GMT -5

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Post by Orion's Guard on Apr 30, 2005 22:46:57 GMT -5

He always loved her stomach most.

In her young days, it was smooth and pale. After their first child she tried to hide her stretch marks. After the fourth she gave up.

He always spent more time there than anywhere else, running his fingertips across it lightly, massaging more sensually. Nipping and sucking, dipping his tongue where he could. No, he liked the light grazes most.

Tonight he stared in reverence. She lay bare below him, yet he fully clothed. The moon still reflected off of her skin, it always had. Not too much had changed with time.

“Keep going.”

Last Edit: May 1, 2005 14:30:36 GMT -5 by Nerweniel

Karlynne Celebrating graduation at the Leaving Feast Preparing for N.E.W.T.s I Get By With A Little Help From My Friends Posts: 446	Keep Going -- Challenge 28 May 1, 2005 1:04:43 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Karlynne on May 1, 2005 1:04:43 GMT -5 There wasn't a wasted word in the bunch. I enjoyed it. Karlie
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angeldust Professor of Transfiguration 'Sucks' is that elfish for wonderful? Posts: 868	Keep Going -- Challenge 28 May 1, 2005 2:54:14 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by angeldust on May 1, 2005 2:54:14 GMT -5 beautiful! ;D

ginger newts Deputy Headmistress What Might Have Been: Harry and his Mum Posts: 1,137	Keep Going -- Challenge 28 May 1, 2005 11:17:24 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by ginger newts on May 1, 2005 11:17:24 GMT -5 Very sweet, you definitely managed to fit in a lot in 100 words.
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QuillofMinerva Professor of Transfiguration Albus' Crumpet Sailing the AD/MM ship proudly! Posts: 1,092	Keep Going -- Challenge 28 May 1, 2005 11:39:36 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by QuillofMinerva on May 1, 2005 11:39:36 GMT -5 Awww that was great ;D Liked it very much
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Catwoman99 Headmistress Posts: 737	Keep Going -- Challenge 28 May 1, 2005 12:59:10 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Catwoman99 on May 1, 2005 12:59:10 GMT -5 Bravo! I definitely can sympathize about the stretch marks. Lovely response! - April :-)

Isabelle Celebrating graduation at the Leaving Feast >>>Storm Warning<<< Posts: 427	Keep Going -- Challenge 28 May 1, 2005 15:47:37 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Isabelle on May 1, 2005 15:47:37 GMT -5 I liked this. It seems just so...natural. Kind of hard to explain, but I liked it! Liz
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Stoneygem Prefect Ship Me! Posts: 114	Keep Going -- Challenge 28 May 1, 2005 15:56:25 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Stoneygem on May 1, 2005 15:56:25 GMT -5 very beautifully done...wonderful, how Albus loves her despite all the imperfections she thinks she has....lovely, how he worships her body, despite age, childbirth and whatnot... just wonderful...

TheGryffindorSeeker Professor of Transfiguration Lemolicious! =] Posts: 879	Keep Going -- Challenge 28 May 1, 2005 16:21:11 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by TheGryffindorSeeker on May 1, 2005 16:21:11 GMT -5 Wow! that was wounderful, Great Responce

Hogwarts Duo Professor of Transfiguration Love alters not with his brief hours and weeks but bears it out even to the edge of doom. Sonnet 116 Posts: 1,104	Keep Going -- Challenge 28 May 1, 2005 20:12:22 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Hogwarts Duo on May 1, 2005 20:12:22 GMT -5 That was so beautiful and you manged to say tons more in 100 words than just those 100 words...if that makes sense! A wonderful response to the challenge!
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Sensiblyquirky Professor of Transfiguration Fanfiction Goddess "Am I hideous Jane? Very Sir, you always were you know."~Jane Eyre Posts: 930	Keep Going -- Challenge 28 May 1, 2005 22:29:27 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Sensiblyquirky on May 1, 2005 22:29:27 GMT -5 I really liked this one, especially how he still loved her stomach after the births of her children. Very nice. Christy
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mugglemin Member of Dumbledore's Army Posts: 206	Keep Going -- Challenge 28 May 2, 2005 4:57:57 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by mugglemin on May 2, 2005 4:57:57 GMT -5 Yep, loved this one too...

tayryn Celebrating graduation at the Leaving Feast "Love is an irresistible desire to be irresistibly desired." ~Robert Frost Posts: 438	Keep Going -- Challenge 28 May 2, 2005 20:50:32 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by tayryn on May 2, 2005 20:50:32 GMT -5 beautiful... just beautiful!!
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Krystal Member of Dumbledore's Army I've Been to Paradise But I've Never Been to Me Posts: 218	Keep Going -- Challenge 28 May 3, 2005 2:30:35 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Krystal on May 3, 2005 2:30:35 GMT -5 I keep checking for stretch marks and so far so good but I hope to find an Albus that will appreciate me whether or not I get them. Krys
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Herzele Professor of Transfiguration Posts: 629	Keep Going -- Challenge 28 May 3, 2005 5:37:27 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Herzele on May 3, 2005 5:37:27 GMT -5 Wonderful !

griseldalafey Guest	Keep Going -- Challenge 28 May 3, 2005 12:54:09 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by griseldalafey on May 3, 2005 12:54:09 GMT -5 Very beautiful and touching

Post by Orion's Guard on Apr 30, 2005 22:46:57 GMT -5

Post by Karlynne on May 1, 2005 1:04:43 GMT -5

Post by angeldust on May 1, 2005 2:54:14 GMT -5

Post by ginger newts on May 1, 2005 11:17:24 GMT -5

Post by QuillofMinerva on May 1, 2005 11:39:36 GMT -5

Post by Catwoman99 on May 1, 2005 12:59:10 GMT -5

Post by Isabelle on May 1, 2005 15:47:37 GMT -5

Post by Stoneygem on May 1, 2005 15:56:25 GMT -5

Post by TheGryffindorSeeker on May 1, 2005 16:21:11 GMT -5

Post by Hogwarts Duo on May 1, 2005 20:12:22 GMT -5

Post by Sensiblyquirky on May 1, 2005 22:29:27 GMT -5

Post by mugglemin on May 2, 2005 4:57:57 GMT -5

Post by tayryn on May 2, 2005 20:50:32 GMT -5

Post by Krystal on May 3, 2005 2:30:35 GMT -5

Post by Herzele on May 3, 2005 5:37:27 GMT -5

Post by griseldalafey on May 3, 2005 12:54:09 GMT -5