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Post by griseldalafey on Mar 21, 2005 16:19:53 GMT -5
What does she she in that idiot??? Gary, obviously.
I'm still eagerly awaiting the updates
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Post by DumbledoresKitten on Mar 22, 2005 11:37:51 GMT -5
Aaah! Albus is so miserable at the idea of Min being with someone else. *runs over and give Albus a hug* . . . i was so rooting for the whole escaped lunatic that happened to be stocking Min . . . please, want more, cat
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Post by angeldust on Apr 4, 2005 11:48:18 GMT -5
Chapter 5 Albus Dumbledore collapsed violently onto the sofa when he returned home. She had looked so beautiful today, the way her cheeks had turned that dashing shade of pink, the way she strutted down that corridor so full, so in control. It was enough to turn his whole stomach into jelly and make his legs collapse. He soon found himself daydreaming about her again. That was one of the great things about Albus Dumbledore he could tune into dream world when ever he wanted and would always remember what he saw. He watched intently as the young woman bent closer to him, her delicate lips touching his so softly before the three words he longed to hear rolled of her tongue. “I love you.” She breathed against his lips, it sounded so natural so right. He watched as hands he recognised all to well as his came up and pushed the emerald cloak off her shoulders. He wanted so much to see her this time, to see her naked would be glorious. He watched his rough hands rub her shoulders; he stopped suddenly when the creamy skin became cold and rough under his touch. He waited for his dream self to position his body in the right place to see over Minerva’s shoulder. And that’s when he noticed it a long pink scar running across the skin just underneath her shoulder. He was about to bend down and examine it more closely when Fawkes crashed through the window and disturbed him. “Bloody bird…!” Albus hissed under his breath before pulling himself up and staggering sleepily into his bedroom to get ready for another could be date with Minerva McGonagall. “Good evening Albus.” Minerva greeted him with a slight smile; Albus guessed she had been waiting for quite some time. “Minerva.” He answered quite coldly, he had promised himself that tonight he would not flirt with her, he would not try to attract her attention he would stay as silent as possible. “So here we are again,” Minerva whispered softly seemingly more to herself then Albus. “The press will say we’re in love if we’re not careful.” Albus’ head shot up at this, his eyes instantly falling into Minerva’s. “So that’s what gets your attention.” She whispered again, her thin lips breaking into a rare smile. “Have I done something wrong Albus, you’ve only been here a few seconds yet you seem quite distant.” |Albus had a hard time thinking of what to say next the words Minerva, Gary, me and love popped into his head several times before he came up with an answer. “It’s nothing Minerva; I just received some bad news yesterday.” It was partly true he had met Gary yesterday. “From a lover?” Minerva asked quite boldly, causing Albus’ head to shot up right again. Albus just shook his head and returned his eyes to the menu. About a woman I want as a lover he found himself thinking, he wanted so much to say that out load to her but he couldn’t. He rearranged his menu so he could watch her over the tip of it with out her noticing. She looked divine, he wounded if she looked this beautiful whenever she went out to dinner or if it was just for him. He ordered for both of them and felt a hit of panic in his stomach, the waiter had took the menus he had nothing to distract himself with now. “Durga told me you were asking questions about Gary.” Minerva suddenly blurted out, he could tell she wanted to get this part of the conversation out quickly so they could return to normal. “Oh...” Albus muttered guiltily, it was so hard to control his emotions around this woman. “Is there a reason do you know Gary?” Minerva asked resting her bony elbow on the table and leaning against her hand. “No… I had heard a rumour that’s all.” “What kind of rumour?” Minerva asked, she was very persistent. “Just that you and Gray are together… are you?” Albus asked feeling a small bit of hope float around his body maybe Gary had manipulated the minister it seemed far fetched but it was possible. “Yes…” She answered after a short while, maybe Albus found himself thinking it was just that hope still floating around his body but maybe it wasn’t, that yes had definitely not sounded like a woman in love. “You don’t sound totally convinced…” Albus found himself gasping out he had never felt such a hope in him before he found himself preying to Merlin that he was in luck something he hadn’t done for many years. “Albus… if I tell you this you must promise it won’t leave this conversation…” Albus nodded violently he wanted to hear this so much. “Gary was my mother’s choice she wants to me to get married and have children, I know both her and Father want me to be happy but they want to see me safe. They think I will be safer with a man in life. Mother brought many suitors to see me and Gary was by far my favourite, we dated he even proposed to me in front of my mother and father where he knew I wouldn’t say no. But I… I don’t want to be with him anymore, he’s just so… so… different. He was odd in the first place I guessed that’s why I liked him because he was different but now… I’m stuck with him.” Albus felt like jumping on the table and singing, she wasn’t in love with Gary. She didn’t want to marry him! He quickly stopped the urge; she had just told him something very personal and didn’t want to ruin the sudden bond. “Can’t you just leave?” Albus asked, he didn’t understand why such a powerful woman felt so encaged by a simple man. “You don’t understand Albus; he’s in my house all time. I’ve tried leaving him but every time I do he finds me and… he knows things about me I wish no others to hear.” She muttered burying her head in her hands. “Please Albus; I’ve said too much can we change the conversation.” Albus couldn’t believe what he was seeing the powerful woman he had seen so many times was almost in tears. He felt his heart twist and snap at the sight of her, he felt himself sink deeper until he was at the same level of despair as she was. “Minerva, come home with me tonight.” Albus muttered, scolding himself for being so forward. He watched as Minerva looked up at him in shock. “I’ll sleep on the sofa,” He continued. “Just stay tonight, just one night away from him and you will feel better.” “He knows I’m here!” She whispered. “Then come with me now, the house elf’s will still be awake I’m sure they would be delighted to make us a meal.” “I can’t…” She muttered. Albus quickly stood up and noticed how Minerva flinched as he got closer… had she been expecting him to strike her? He held his hand out to her. “Minerva please, for my comfort if nothing else.” Albus could tell she was persuaded, he quickly grabbed her hand and pulled her up and out of the restaurant unaware of the pair of eyes that were still watching them intently Hey guys I'm really sorry if this has loads of grammer mistakes in as i've been trying to get a hold of my deta reader for two weeks now but he seems to have vanished So i posted it anyway with out it being deta read hope its not to bad
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Post by KayleeTonksLupin on Apr 4, 2005 12:30:23 GMT -5
Awesome story so far, Kaitlyn, keep it up! Sorry I hadn't run across this before!
Hugs from your friend,
Kaylee
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Post by Hogwarts Duo on Apr 4, 2005 15:33:09 GMT -5
Woo Hoo! You have just made me one happy woman! I was soooo glad to see an update from you...and one in which Albus takes Minerva home....YIPPPPPPEEEEE!! Even if he does end up sleeping on the couch ya gotta start somewhere lol.
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Post by Lady Lavendar on Apr 4, 2005 18:04:36 GMT -5
Stupid stupid Gary!! Did i miss something or is he abusive? All I know about him is he's a stalker and that's bad! Please update soon! LL
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Post by tayryn on Apr 4, 2005 19:23:08 GMT -5
go, Albus!!
am glad he's taking her away from that git!!
this was a lovely chapter! looking forwrad to more!
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Post by Karlynne on Apr 4, 2005 22:05:07 GMT -5
I hope Minerva gets away from Gary quickly. Whatever knowledge he has about her couldn't be as awful as life with him would. I'm looking forward to the next update. Karlie
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Post by Kandice on Apr 4, 2005 22:08:19 GMT -5
What an opportunity for Albus and I hope this break will help Minerva make a permanent one with Gary. Kandie
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Post by Stoneygem on Apr 5, 2005 13:00:17 GMT -5
Weeell....seems as if things are going to be set in motion. Hope the evening at Albus' place is getting a little more interesting (in a positive way, of course ) than originally intended... I really like this....give us more please, and get rid of that Gary-thing...
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Post by ginger newts on Apr 5, 2005 15:04:36 GMT -5
Ooh, so things with Gary aren't so well, whew. I hope she ends up staying with Albus longer than one night and he can help her out...of course he will. Update soon!
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Post by Jaya on Apr 5, 2005 17:25:37 GMT -5
Smack Gary! Please! He deserves it! Love the chapter Jaya
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Post by angeldust on Apr 17, 2005 9:51:37 GMT -5
Chapter 6
Albus sat quietly on the sofa in his living quarters, he had brought Minerva back to the castle and instantly he had noticed a sudden change in her. She was much more relaxed as if she had just returned home after a long journey. They had shared a beautiful dinner that the house elves had happily made for them.
The conversation had been easy and relaxed but Albus had definitely noticed that if the conversation swerved around to something where Minerva would have to talk about her past she would quickly change the topic. After dinner and a full fifteen minutes of arguing Albus had managed to convince Minerva to sleep in his bed, while he slept on the sofa.
The thought of Minerva in her nightwear and his bed were amazing, he hoped that when he came back from his hearing tomorrow he might still be able to smell her on his sheets.
He was snapped from his fantasies when the door to his bedroom clicked open. She stood there seemingly framed in a glow of beauty. She had transfigured her robes into a modest nightgown luckily Albus’ eyesight wasn’t as bad as most people thought it was.
Her shoulders were pale and nicely rounded; her bare arms were slim and crossed across her trim waist easily. The curve of her breast was much more visible and just the thought of what he would see if she was wearing less made his mouth dry. Her calves were visible and Albus felt the sudden urge to run his hands up them just to see if they were as smooth as they looked. She had very long legs. He wanted to say something to ask if she was alright but nothing came out of his mouth but a simple gasp for air.
“Albus…” She whispered as she crossed the room and sat down next to him, the hairs on Albus’ arms stood up on when her hand brushed against them.
“You’ve been so good to me, I don’t know many people who would take me in like this and not ask for anything in return.” Albus felt his breath stick in his throat as Minerva’s hand slid down his arm and came to rest on his hand.
“Thank you.” She whispered before leaning into him and placing a small kiss on his lips. The moment Minerva’s lips touched his, Albus felt something strange stir in him. He didn’t want her lips to leave his he thought as Minerva pulled back slowly, he wanted to keep that sensation forever. As fast as lightening and before Albus could even comprehend what he was doing his hands were on her face and his lips slammed against hers. Her lips were so soft Albus thought as he poured his soul into that simple kiss. He watched as Minerva stumbled away from him when the kiss was broke, she looked at him her eyes filled with an emotion he didn’t understand.
“I thought… I thought you were different! I thought you cared.” She sobbed before quickly turning her back to him and dashing towards the fire, before he could say anything she was gone. “So she does have that scar on her back.” Albus whispered to himself before burying his head in his hands.
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Post by Lady Lavendar on Apr 17, 2005 11:13:13 GMT -5
How stupid can you get? He just ruined it! This story is so good! PLease update soon! LL
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Post by Hogwarts Duo on Apr 17, 2005 11:18:27 GMT -5
Smacks Albus upside the head....how silly can ya get? Sheesh! Hope he is able to explain himself and that Minerva will find it in her heart to forgive him!
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Post by Karlynne on Apr 17, 2005 12:58:52 GMT -5
Men! I swear they haven't an ounce of intelligence sometimes. Albus had better make it all better. Karlie
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Post by DumbledoresKitten on Apr 17, 2005 13:15:22 GMT -5
Men!!! What the hell was albus thinking?!
*smacks albus up-side the head with a herring*
Okay he better make it up to her and it better be good.
Love this story, please update soon cat
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Gryffindor Seeker
L' amour est un oisseau rebelle que nul ne peut aprivoiser.
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Post by Adrasteia on Apr 17, 2005 13:23:40 GMT -5
*looks for something to smack Albus with* I have to agree: Men! How can Albus be so stupid! This was really a good chapter and I hope you'll update soon.
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Post by griseldalafey on Apr 17, 2005 13:27:16 GMT -5
*feels a little bit sorry for Albus and hands him a helmet*
Still, you're an idiot. Loveable, but an idiot. Now go after her.
Wonderful story. I love the twist you've taken
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Post by angeldust on Apr 24, 2005 7:04:13 GMT -5
(waves) A big thank you to everyone who is reading and reviewing this ;D I'm sorry the chapter is quite small i've got exams coming up so i didn't really have much time and im probably not going to be able to post much till they are over
Chapter 7
Albus walked sulkily down the long corridors of the ministry of magic his hearing was about to start and Minerva was no where to be seen. He was about to knock on the door of her office again when voices inside disturbed him. Opening the door slowly Albus was greeted by an unwelcome site. Gary stood directly in front of Minerva his arms were placed either side of her with his hands resting against the desk. His body was pinning her to the desk. “Was it worth it?” Gary sneered at her. “I don’t know what you’re talking about!” Minerva snapped back angrily. “Don’t play thick! I know you went back to his house last night and I know you slept with him! Was it worth it whore? Was that touch of fame enough for you?” “Don’t be ridiculous!” Minerva gulped pressing herself further against the desk. “I saw you leave the restaurant with him! His hands were all over you touching you feeling you… disgusting!” “Yes I went home with him we talked totally about work then I left.” “Then how come when you went back home you were in nightwear?” Gary growled his lip curling in anger. “How do you…” Minerva started her face paling. “Do you really think I’m just going to stand by and watch as some old man steps into my territory? Your mine Minerva and it’s about time you realised that!” “I didn’t sleep with him…” Minerva whispered softly in her defence as she looked at the floor. “I was planning to stay at Hogwarts but I changed my mind.” “WHY?” Albus watched as Minerva turned her head away from Gary and stared directly at him. Her bright eyes once again filled with that emotion he had seen the night before. “I just didn’t want to.” She whispered still staring intently at Albus. Albus turned suddenly when he heard a noise behind him looking around he came face to face with the minister of magic. “Good morning Albus!” The minister greeted him with a large smile before knocking on Minerva’s office door and entering. Albus followed, hopefully Gary would be in the same position and the minister might be able to guess something was wrong. Albus felt his stomach churn at the site before him. Gary had Minerva pushed tightly against him, their lips pushed together in a passionate kiss. Albus couldn’t help but notice though how stiff Minerva was for a kiss that should have been genuine. “Oh my, I’m very sorry.” The minister muttered his cheeks flushing. “Oh dear it would appear we’ve been caught Minerva!” Gary sighed, a fake sweetness in his voice. “I will see you later Minerva.” He whispered under his voice before strolling out of the office.
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Post by Karlynne on Apr 24, 2005 9:25:13 GMT -5
Oh I am so frustrated! If only Albus hadn't kissed her then Minerva might not have to defend herself to Gary. I really don't like Gary. Karlie
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Post by griseldalafey on Apr 24, 2005 11:40:47 GMT -5
What a jer. Albus better makes peace with her soon.
Lovely chapter and good luck with your exams! *crosses fingers*
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Post by Adrasteia on Apr 24, 2005 12:45:48 GMT -5
Good luck with your exams! I hope that Albus makes it up to Minerva and soon! *Now I'm looking for something to smack Gary with * I'm already looking forward to the next wonderful chapter.
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Post by Hogwarts Duo on Apr 24, 2005 19:49:45 GMT -5
Grrrr, I really want Albus to put Gary in his place and then drop to his knees and beg for Minerva's forgiveness! This is a wonderful story! And good luck with exams!
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Post by Jaya on Apr 24, 2005 19:54:18 GMT -5
HEX HIM, ALBUS! HEX HIM!!!!!!!! Minerva is smarter than this... please tell me she is smarter than this!!!! You are certainly stirring the emotions. Keep going! Jaya
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Post by Kandice on Apr 25, 2005 20:57:08 GMT -5
Well my ire has certainly woken up. I want to throttle Gary! Where is the formidable McGonagall temper? Kandie
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Post by tayryn on Apr 25, 2005 21:37:35 GMT -5
oh, Minerva so needs to smack the snot out of Gary, or at least knee the SOB in the nuts!
and then, Albus needs to hex him into obilvion.
while yes, it was a short update... it was a good update!!
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Post by Lady Lavendar on Apr 26, 2005 17:43:23 GMT -5
Can I bet the crap out of Gary? He's so mean! Albus should have done something!! Please update soon! LL
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Post by angeldust on May 15, 2005 7:36:11 GMT -5
Chapter 8
Albus sat nervously in the chair in the middle courtroom 8; Minerva stood to his left and a few feet away Lucius Malfoy and one the Aurors that had found Albus sat together whispering. Minerva had not talked to him once yet and by the look on her face Albus could tell she probably wasn’t going to either.
“Minerva… I’m.” he stammered pulling up all his courage to just look at her. “Don’t say your sorry professor,” Minerva butted in “I know your not. As soon as this case is over we can go our separate ways, I’m sorry we couldn’t just be friends.” She snapped the last sentence icily and stood up straight as the members of the wizengamot entered. They all walked quite stiffly into the room they stank of power and wealth something that Albus found revolting. Their faces were pictures of boredom they were all quite sure how the outcome of this trial was going to end. He watched as Minerva bowed her head in respect for her higher authority.
“Interrogators: Durga Dendrites minister of magic, Cid Girsborunge head of the department of magical law enforcement and Jennifer Green Head of the Aurors association.” The loud voice spoke clearly.
“Witness for the accused; Alastor Moody.” A small mutter broke out through the walls of the courtroom at the mention of the crazed mans name. “Right now Mr. Malfoy who is currently filling as Ceartas for the Aurora Michael Kaleen will be the first to present his case.” Albus watched with great dislike as Malfoy stood up and presented his case. He used words like vile and despicable quite a many times and Albus could tell instantly that the whole story had been rewritten. Putting his long finger tips together and resting his head upon them Albus prepared for what was to be a very long afternoon.
Finally Malfoy finished his warped story of what had happened and Minerva was called to stand before the wizengamot. She looked so beautiful; she walked with a power and grace that defied everyone in the wizengamot. She was fighting for him, she was arguing for his freedom just the thought of that made electric jump down his spine. “Albus Dumbledore is a well respected citizen of the wizarding world some even consider him to be the greatest wizard of our time. Yet even a great wizard such as himself can not be in the right place all the time. We all make mistakes and Professor Dumbledore just happens to be caught in the middle of one. I have evidence and a witness to prove that Professor Dumbledore had nothing to do with the illegal, unregistered magic that happened that night at Derwatt rock.” Her speech was forceful and her stance as sharp as her glare. He loved her, why had it taken so long for him to realise this.
“Albus Dumbledore as you know is famous and often has the press creeping around him. Minister, do you not have days where you wish to get away from work and the press to just have a friendly drink and conversation with out being spied upon?” She was playing upon personally feelings Albus found himself thinking very cleaver, very cleaver indeed.
“Professor Dumbledore was doing exactly this; I have a letter that even shows it
Alastor
My friend has it truly been almost two months since we last had a full conversation? I apologise for my rudeness. Please meet me at Derwatt rock on the 13th at 6 o’clock where we can walk to the pub in the nearest town. This way hopefully we won’t be followed by the daily prophet who seems to have taken a liking to me at the moment.
Albus.” It was a total lie and Albus couldn’t help but feel guilty that the wizengamot were just absorbing lies to protect him. “I wish to call Alastor Moody in to prove my case.” And prove her case he did. Every word of it had been rehearsed every word he said was fluent and believable. But Albus couldn’t help the guilt that was eating at him, for his freedom and his brothers he had made two people he cared about lie to the people who tried to keep justice in the wizarding world. He was a liar and now thanks to him Minerva and Alastor were too.
“That is all for today the Aurors will be able to present their argument tomorrow and our decision will then be made.” Albus watched as the wizengamot left their stations the stink of power returning as they walked out. As soon as they were gone he watched as Minerva gathered her notes with out a word to him and left. He loved her. A woman eighty fears his junior it was a relationship even he might find himself frowning upon. Yet he wanted it, he wanted to be by her side to be able to take her into his arms at any moment. He wanted to give her is heart and take hers. Gary… the way he had talked to her earlier in the day was appalling and he was going to make the fool pay for the all the sleepless nights and hurt he had caused the woman he loved.
(A big thanks to everyone who is still reading this, there's not much left to go now!)
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Post by Krystal on May 16, 2005 9:42:14 GMT -5
I'm glad Albus at least has the balls to want to take care of Gary but I think he can get past the lie he, Minerva, and Alastor are involved in. Krys
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