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Post by minervasong on Jul 25, 2008 20:33:28 GMT -5
Just a poem I decided to write one day.... ;D Please read & review! =] Title: Minerva's Song Rating: PG Summary: What could possibly be Minerva's song? Pairing: Guess who. =] Ron & Tonks! Nope. Albus & Minerva!! Minerva’s Song
Say the words, and I’ll be with you forever As our arms entwine around one another Love does not in some way have a need to be rational Yet the words must be spoken before one is gullible Three simple words can cause much unneeded strife That may continue on throughout the next life But please remember that you are far from being alone For this statement still may leak during a simple sojourn The question is now, by me or by you, who knows who will crack first The truth at least from me is near escaping, and ready to burst. You are the lion, and I am the swan For when I see you, these words are my song.© 2008 July, Minervasong/Skrewtkeeper
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Post by jkamd18 on Sept 18, 2008 15:35:41 GMT -5
Yeeeeeeesssssss very good!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by micha on Sept 19, 2008 10:05:01 GMT -5
Yes, very nice, especially this: "The question is now, by me or by you, who knows who will crack first"
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Post by Katheryn Mae on Sept 25, 2008 17:55:57 GMT -5
Can I use this song in one of my 100 prompts challenges?
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Post by minervasong on Dec 21, 2008 14:28:48 GMT -5
Oh wow! This received interest, and I just let it go.... Such is the life of a wandering author! Thank you three for reviewing it, and yes, Tabby[hearts], you may as long as you credit me. I'm Skrewtkeeper on fanfiction... ;D And so, here is the long-awaited response (yes, Albus wrote one too! I apologize for any error this may have--- I wrote it quite a while ago...--- if anyone cares to know, the number of syllables matches the syllables in "Minerva's Song". I like to make things special.) Love Flouts All
You rule the class in a strong yet subtle way Once you draw near me, I forget what to say. Your beauty is magnified by such great counts every night, Though you excuse my compliments as a trick of the light. Love flouts all; how can I explain this to you? The thought of stating such love between us two Causes me to abandon my Gryffindor bravery And instead I gaze at you longingly and Waverley Your smile seizes, with force, my breath and induces my heart to ache As long as I knew I had you and your love, I’d never forsake. I am the lion, and you are the swan When I see you, my poem lies forgotten.© 2008 July, Minervasong/Skrewtkeeper
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