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Post by Sensiblyquirky on Feb 10, 2006 19:49:28 GMT -5
Nice job on this story. I like to see the occasional one where Minerva isn't the confident strong woman, it adds another dimension to her character which is interesting. Keep it up.
Christy
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Post by littlemorgsi on Feb 10, 2006 20:10:41 GMT -5
Albus was very sweet in this chapter. There is hope for Minerva's confidence with him around.
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Post by nemi on Feb 11, 2006 6:44:03 GMT -5
AWWW!!! That was sooo cute!!! Poor Min, but Albus was soo sweet! Update soon, this story gets even better with each chapter you write!!!
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Post by Jessabelle on Feb 11, 2006 21:14:40 GMT -5
Good update!
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Post by Alesia on Feb 12, 2006 0:27:05 GMT -5
Woo hoo, a red swim suit!
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Post by Gemmie Lou on Feb 12, 2006 6:57:58 GMT -5
hey guys i might not be updating for a while i have a virus which means im only up for like half an hour at a time i should be rid of it by monday but just to give you a heads up xxxxxxx cheers for the reviews xxxxxxxxx
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Post by ismaco on Feb 12, 2006 23:51:22 GMT -5
I hope you can get rid of it soon... I love your story and I'm looking forward to read more. Good luck with your virus  Isabel |
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Post by nemi on Feb 13, 2006 12:05:14 GMT -5
Hope you get rid of it soon!! This story is amazing; it's worth the wait!
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Post by EloquentPhoenix on Feb 13, 2006 13:21:40 GMT -5
I really hope you're back on soon, I really really want to read the next chapter!
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Post by lullabymoon on Feb 13, 2006 13:28:06 GMT -5
BOING!
love this story and i cant wait for them to kiss as well
woohoo!
love jenni
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Post by mcgonagallrules on Feb 14, 2006 17:21:15 GMT -5
Still loving this story! Hope your feeling much better soon!
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Post by Gemmie Lou on Feb 14, 2006 18:11:47 GMT -5
Hey guys am over d virus now and I'm at home doing family stuff so updates will still be slower!!
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Minerva couldn't believe she was sat on a plane next to Albus and she was an hour away from Spain. The last three days had gone so quickly. Her and Albus had slowly been growing closer every night her and Albus had shared a chaste kiss on the mouth and a warm hug. She had decided to tell Albus that she loved him on the last day of their holiday, she had decided that she would wear the black dress and finally tell her best friend that she had been truly madly deeply in love with him for over 50 years that was one conversation that she was not looking forward to.
Albus was sat next to Minerva with a huge grin on his face. He was sat on a plane holding Minerva's hand he had taken hold of it when they had hit some turbulence but he was quite happy that she had kept it there. They were about an hour away from Spain they then had an hours bus ride to the villa then he had a week to spoil Minerva rotten and convince that she was perfect and hopefully get her to fall in love with him so that on the last night of the holiday he could tell her that he had been in love with her since she was 16 years old.
Minerva had fallen asleep and Albus thought she looked so lovely that he couldn't help but lean over and slowly kiss her on the cheek, but Minerva was awake and just as he leaned back she opened her eyes and kissed him on the mouth. Albus was so surprised he had really thought she was asleep but he was quite happy that she wasn't seeing as he had just gotten a kiss out of it. He decided to use his gryffindor courage and put his arm round her, Minerva quite happily snuggled into Albus' beard and they both drifted off together dreaming of doing just this every night for the rest of their lives neither daring to believe that the other could be thinking something similar.
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Sorry its short but i haven't been home in months so I'm getting the VIP treatment.
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Post by EloquentPhoenix on Feb 15, 2006 8:15:23 GMT -5
Short, but perfect  |
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Post by ismaco on Feb 15, 2006 11:50:41 GMT -5
I agree w/Amy.... short but perfect: )
I loved the kiss.
Isabel
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Post by nemi on Feb 15, 2006 12:03:30 GMT -5
Je conviens! Short yes, but absolutely adorable. Glad you're feeling better! This chapter was really cute; update soon- I'm sure the next one will be just as fab ^^
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Post by Jessabelle on Feb 15, 2006 19:30:43 GMT -5
Very cute!
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Post by blackstar on Feb 17, 2006 16:01:23 GMT -5
Oh I love your fic. So cute. I hope they become a coupel soon!
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Post by Gemmie Lou on Feb 20, 2006 12:19:15 GMT -5
Hey guys sorry its been ages since i posted but home was really hectic sorry will post tonight i promise xxxxxxxxxxx
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Post by EloquentPhoenix on Feb 20, 2006 12:50:13 GMT -5
Yey |
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Post by tanja on Feb 20, 2006 13:08:52 GMT -5
omg,i missed the update...unbelivable...sooooo cute
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Post by zilah on Feb 20, 2006 14:38:41 GMT -5
This is so adorable story!
I really hope they admit their feelings for each other. Please, update soon,
zilah
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Post by nemi on Feb 20, 2006 14:58:51 GMT -5
Oooh yay! Update tonight!!! Post it soon  This story is unbelievably cute, and it'll get cuter when they reveal their feelings; can't wait til they admit their feelings! |
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Post by Gemmie Lou on Feb 21, 2006 6:29:22 GMT -5
 hey guys sorry i dint post last night i fell asleep before i had a chance  Gets a bit lemony so be warned, tell me if i need to move this into the lemon section!  [glow=red,2,300]*********************************************[/glow] Minerva couldn't believe that she was walking round the villa that would be hers and Albus' for a week, it was gorgeous the bedrooms were lovely and the bathroom had a huge bath and a shower that was big enough for about 3 people, she hoped that her and Albus would get to use that together. She had been so happy to be cuddled in his arms on the flight and she had stayed like that until they arrived at the villa. She walked outside to see the pool and the lovely views and she found Albus doing the same. "Hello my dear do you like the villa?" "Oh yes Albus it is lovely, what do you want to do for the rest of the day?" "Well i was going to take a shower and have a short nap and then maybe we could go get our dinner in town?" "That sounds great, I'll take my nap while you shower and then you can your nap while i shower then well go get something to eat and take a look around." "Well ill go jump in the shower, have a nice nap dear." Minerva knew she had no intention of napping yes she was going to go to bed but the thought of Albus in that shower had sent her heart racing and she was going to do something about it. She walked into her bedroom and unpacked and then climbed into bed. Her hands followed a path well traveled by her as she thought of Albus in the shower. She hated to admit it but at seventy-five she was still a virgin, she had been in love with Albus since she was 16 so she had never wanted to see anyone else and had resigned herself to the fact that the only action she would get would be from her own hands. She steadily stroked her clit with one hand and inserted two fingers from the other hand all the while dreaming of Albus in the shower with the water running all over him and she climaxed with a smile on her face. She was just drifting down from her climax when she heard Albus call her name. "Minerva, my dear the shower is empty now." She waited till she heard his bedroom door close and then she wrapped a towel round herself and walked into the bathroom. The shower smelled of Albus and she decided that she wanted to smell like him to so she decided to use his shower gel instead of her own that way her bed would smell like Albus even if he wasn't there. She was just putting the shower gel on her body when she heard a knock at the door. "I'm really sorry Minerva but i left my comb in the bathroom and if i leave my hair any longer i will never get the tangles out. Could you possibly pass it me through the door." Minerva couldn't see through the shower door so she decided that he wouldn't be able to see in either. "Albus the door is unlocked just come in and get your comb." "But you are in the shower my dear." "Yes but you cannot see a thing through the door so it will not matter." Albus decided that he wasn't going to be asked again and slowly opened the door. Minerva was right you couldn't really see anything but he could see her outline and the way she was rubbing shower gel on her arms. That was when he realised that the smell was of his shower gel not her own. "Minerva are you using my shower gel my dear, i don't mind but i didn't think it was your sort of smell." Minerva blushed in the shower glad that Albus could not see it. "Sorry Albus but i couldn't find my own and i didn't think you would mind." Albus could quite clearly see Minerva's shower gel on the floor near the bath but he was glad that she liked the way it smelt, maybe she even liked the way it smelt on him. "Of course not dear ill leave you to your shower, i have my comb now." Just as Albus turned to leave the room he saw Minerva rubbing shower gel into her breasts and he couldn't help but wish he was in there with her, with that thought his arousal grew and he decided not to take a nap but to do something different instead. Minerva heard the door shut and let out a breath that she didn't realise she had been holding in out. She had so wanted to open the door and invite him in, now she knew that he wasn't repulsed by her scars and that he liked seeing her in fitted clothes and holding her close, she was less scared about revealing her feelings to him. She decided to wear the dress that he had bought her to dinner tonight and maybe she would get another kiss like the one she had had on the plane. Albus got into bed and slowly started stroking his penis, he was dreaming of Minerva smelling like him not because she had used his shower gel but because she had spent all night in his bed wrapped around him. This thought was easier now that she seemed to maybe like him too with the kisses that they had been sharing and the kiss that they had shared on the plane. His strokes got faster and finally he came dreaming of a time when he could do this inside his one truer love and not on his own. [glow=red,2,300]*********************************************[/glow] Hope this makes up for my lack of updating xxxx
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Post by nemi on Feb 21, 2006 8:59:23 GMT -5
Ooooh yay an update! I don't actually read lemons but I like this story so much I had to skim the lemony parts anyway... Loved the line "he decided not to take a nap but to do something different instead", it had me in stitches. The shower gel part was soo cute! Great update, post the next part soon!
PS- don't think you need to move it into the lemon section as not all of it's lemon, just say when it's going to be a lemony part.
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Post by Gemmie Lou on Feb 21, 2006 14:33:31 GMT -5
wahey gemmey your stories grrrrrrrrrrrrrreat! elliexx
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Post by Gemmie Lou on Feb 21, 2006 14:38:28 GMT -5
this is not gemma
more sex please!xx
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Post by tanja on Feb 21, 2006 16:29:01 GMT -5
read it, liked it, want more please soon |
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Post by ismaco on Feb 21, 2006 21:46:29 GMT -5
I can't wait to read more. I think that the lemon warning is enough... I believe you don't need to move it, but who am I to tell you that? I need to confess that Minerva, the 75 Year Old Virgin, freaks me out a bit. Certainly, I hope Albus changes that soon *mischievous grin* Please, update soon. Love, Isabel |
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Post by blackstar on Feb 23, 2006 15:57:21 GMT -5
I like it very much. And i love to read lemons. Can we have one? Pleas update soon. But I have one problem: Minerva a virgine?! I don't think that can be real. i mean she is 75!! This is much to old to be a virgin. And I think she hast tryed to get over Albus. With another man. Or she meet someone she like very much. blackstar |
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Post by how8175 on Feb 23, 2006 17:11:52 GMT -5
well done gemmie brilliant fic absolutely fabulous will keep reading so keep updating !!!!
x x x stephy x x x
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This story is unbelievably cute, and it'll get cuter when they reveal their feelings; can't wait til they admit their feelings!
hey guys sorry i dint post last night i fell asleep before i had a chance 
