Post by MinnieQuill on Sept 5, 2008 2:58:02 GMT -5
Hey guys,
I'm after someone to take a look at a story of mine. Some of you may have read it - it's called 'An Unexpected Alliance' and is posted at fanfiction.net. There's no real pairing, thought there are obvious hints as to a past relationship between Sirius and Minerva but that relationship is finished.
Anyway, I digress. The point is that I've written a new version (or part of a new version) because I decided that Minerva was out-of-character for the first few chapters of the original version not to mention that I had complete writer's block and couldn't think of how to move the story forward without re-writing it from start-to-finish.
It's a bit more 'realistic' (I say that with a huge amount of salt) and probably not as laugh-out-loud funny as the original version as the style is fairly different.
I just need some opinions on what I've done, what I can do further, maybe bat some ideas around etc.
Please tell me if you're interested.
I'm after someone to take a look at a story of mine. Some of you may have read it - it's called 'An Unexpected Alliance' and is posted at fanfiction.net. There's no real pairing, thought there are obvious hints as to a past relationship between Sirius and Minerva but that relationship is finished.
Anyway, I digress. The point is that I've written a new version (or part of a new version) because I decided that Minerva was out-of-character for the first few chapters of the original version not to mention that I had complete writer's block and couldn't think of how to move the story forward without re-writing it from start-to-finish.
It's a bit more 'realistic' (I say that with a huge amount of salt) and probably not as laugh-out-loud funny as the original version as the style is fairly different.
I just need some opinions on what I've done, what I can do further, maybe bat some ideas around etc.
Please tell me if you're interested.
