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Post by nemi on Apr 5, 2006 12:39:51 GMT -5
That was absolutely adorable! You wrote it extremely well. I loved the Fawkes/Hedwig at the end, it was really cute, and the "lovers' spat" was highly entertaining! Write more like this!
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Post by morgan72uk on Apr 5, 2006 12:57:23 GMT -5
I really liked the way she got angry with him. I also like the fight and the dancing, the image of them swirling around - literally and figuratively stuck with me.
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Post by Sensiblyquirky on Apr 5, 2006 15:09:37 GMT -5
I like that you took a different route with the overall plotline, and had Minerva get mad at him. Nice job, and I too enjoyed the dancing imagery.
Christy
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Post by avadagypsy on Apr 5, 2006 17:10:56 GMT -5
Really enjoyed this one! i love it when Min is angry - i think that it is a very realistic picture of her not to take any "crap" from anyone, especially Albus Dumbledore! Gypsy
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Post by Trulyamused on Apr 5, 2006 17:34:21 GMT -5
Great one. Loved Min getting angry and Albus turning her around.
Wonderful
Truly
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Post by ismaco on Apr 5, 2006 19:17:03 GMT -5
It's really cute. I also liked the "thestral crap" *laughes* Thanks a lot for sharing! Isabel
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Post by littlemorgsi on Apr 5, 2006 20:06:52 GMT -5
Could we maybe have a sequel? I can see Harry and Albus having a 'discussion' about why his phoenix impregnated his owl or something. I think it could be quite amusing.
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Post by zoeteproet on Apr 6, 2006 10:02:24 GMT -5
How sweet, the part with Fawkes/Hedwig was very cute, but as usual Albus and Minerva were "more cute" ;D Great story. Love, Sarah xx
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Post by angeldust on Apr 6, 2006 10:56:12 GMT -5
Brilliant fic Min's anger was just so realistic I love this fiesty side of Min!
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Post by Blue on May 10, 2006 14:58:15 GMT -5
I realise you posted this like a month ago, but everybody loves comments, no matter how over due they are :-P I seriously loved this fic, especially how Min spoke up about how she didn't want to be just another woman. 'but she found that she didn’t give a hippogriff’s ass.' you actually made me laugh out loud there, I'm glad there was no-one in the room with me; they'd have probably thought I was insane.
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Post by kate on May 14, 2006 6:44:04 GMT -5
Oh what a lovely story! I really really like it! Thanks a lot!
~Kate~
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Post by mcgonagallrocks on May 14, 2006 9:38:39 GMT -5
Really really sweet and sappy just like I like them.
**Endora
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Post by mrsdumbledores on Oct 5, 2009 13:42:13 GMT -5
sweet...just like honey.... thanks for sharing.... +**+ secret twins of min...
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Post by horcruxhorror on Oct 21, 2009 16:50:24 GMT -5
plz post more pm me when u do
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Post by greenlover2 on Dec 9, 2009 14:38:46 GMT -5
ooohh that was cute....loved the "lovers spat" part hehehe.....
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Post by mmadfabulous on May 21, 2010 2:02:19 GMT -5
cute and fluffy: ;D
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Post by albus1sttabby on Feb 16, 2011 11:21:26 GMT -5
A wonderful story!!I love it!!!Thank you for writing!!!
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Post by ~Aly~ on Feb 16, 2011 16:15:59 GMT -5
Oh it is so cute yet fiery at the same time I thoroughly enjoyed it Then dancing and arguing yay! Love how she purposely trod on his foot when they started dancing
~Aly~
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