Cinderella With A Twist

mcgonagallrocks Professor of Transfiguration Screw 'em if they can't take a joke! Posts: 772	Cinderella With A Twist May 11, 2006 20:58:55 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by mcgonagallrocks on May 11, 2006 20:58:55 GMT -5 Must have more a very good start **Endora
	xXx I don't wanna talk About things we've gone through Though it's hurting me Now it's history I've played all my cards And that's what you've done too Nothing more to say No more ace to play

Hogwarts Duo
Professor of Transfiguration

Love alters not with his brief hours and weeks but bears it out even to the edge of doom. Sonnet 116

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Cinderella With A Twist May 11, 2006 21:22:27 GMT -5

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Post by Hogwarts Duo on May 11, 2006 21:22:27 GMT -5

Hey,

This is a great start and I'm looking forward to reading more of the story. I've always loved Cinderella (though I am more of a Belle and Ariel fan at heart

) I can't wait to see who the fairy godmother is and what happens next!

Update soon please!

Last Edit: May 11, 2006 21:22:44 GMT -5 by Hogwarts Duo

"When you smiled you had my undivided attention. When you laughed you had my urge to laugh with you. When you cried you had my urge to hold you. When you said you loved me, you had my heart forever.”

Herzele Professor of Transfiguration Posts: 629	Cinderella With A Twist May 12, 2006 8:46:06 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Herzele on May 12, 2006 8:46:06 GMT -5 Oh ... Great start ! I love Cinderella ! Can't wait to read more !!

zoeteproet Celebrating graduation at the Leaving Feast I hope Albus isn't jealous... Posts: 402	Cinderella With A Twist May 12, 2006 10:33:55 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by zoeteproet on May 12, 2006 10:33:55 GMT -5 Very lovely, I hope the story has an happy ending, just like the orginal Cinderella story.
	To be stupid, selfish, and have good health are three requirements for happiness, though if stupidity is lacking, all is lost.

angeldust Professor of Transfiguration 'Sucks' is that elfish for wonderful? Posts: 868	Cinderella With A Twist May 12, 2006 12:04:09 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by angeldust on May 12, 2006 12:04:09 GMT -5 Oh that was a great start can't wait for more

beMMADfabulous Professor of Transfiguration Lost & unsure, I opened my hand, & she held it like sinking sand. Posts: 1,611	Cinderella With A Twist May 13, 2006 11:53:42 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by beMMADfabulous on May 13, 2006 11:53:42 GMT -5 I loved this when I read the first bit when you PMed it to me earlier, and I love what you added to it! Great job. I can't wait for more!
	"But love is blind, and lovers cannot see the pretty follies that themselves commit." - William Shakespeare

ismaco Professor of Transfiguration "That potion... was no health drink..." Posts: 463	Cinderella With A Twist May 15, 2006 16:21:12 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by ismaco on May 15, 2006 16:21:12 GMT -5 I liked it a lot... Albus, as usual, a true chevalier. Please update soon Isabel
	"It was important, Dumbledore said, to fight, and fight again, and keep fighting, for only then could evil be kept at bay, though never quite eradicated..." HBP "But what ARE dementoids?" asked Uncle Vernon furiously... OotP "What do you think?" asked Dumbledore. He might have been asking Harry's opinion on whether it was a good site for a picnic. HBP

beMMADfabulous Professor of Transfiguration Lost & unsure, I opened my hand, & she held it like sinking sand. Posts: 1,611	Cinderella With A Twist May 16, 2006 7:34:19 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by beMMADfabulous on May 16, 2006 7:34:19 GMT -5 emeraldeyes said: This is part one, dedicated to beMMADfabulous because she rocks, lol I'm gonna cry! ;D
	"But love is blind, and lovers cannot see the pretty follies that themselves commit." - William Shakespeare

nemi Getting career advice from McGonagall Posts: 300	Cinderella With A Twist May 17, 2006 13:23:18 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by nemi on May 17, 2006 13:23:18 GMT -5 That was beautiful. It was really interesting, what seems like a great take on the story, and extremely well written. I can't wait to see what happens next. Don't hesitate with the next installment!
	'Professor Dumbledore is a very great wizard, Potter. He has many demands on his time.'

Hogwarts Duo Professor of Transfiguration Love alters not with his brief hours and weeks but bears it out even to the edge of doom. Sonnet 116 Posts: 1,104	Cinderella With A Twist May 31, 2006 18:55:54 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Hogwarts Duo on May 31, 2006 18:55:54 GMT -5 You described Minerva beautifully and I love that she didn't get the dress right on the first or second tries. I can't wait to see what happens next.
	"When you smiled you had my undivided attention. When you laughed you had my urge to laugh with you. When you cried you had my urge to hold you. When you said you loved me, you had my heart forever.”

Jessabelle Professor of Transfiguration Minerva McGonagall ~ A Fierce Lioness Posts: 670	Cinderella With A Twist May 31, 2006 19:39:09 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Jessabelle on May 31, 2006 19:39:09 GMT -5 You are making this story more intriguing then Disney himself could! Minerva sounds like she looks so beautiful!
	They used to call me Snow White, but then I drifted. - Mae West

Herzele Professor of Transfiguration Posts: 629	Cinderella With A Twist Jun 1, 2006 3:44:17 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Herzele on Jun 1, 2006 3:44:17 GMT -5 An update ! Yay ! The descriptions are great and the dress Min's now wearing sounds great ! Will definitely go and check out those pics ...

beMMADfabulous Professor of Transfiguration Lost & unsure, I opened my hand, & she held it like sinking sand. Posts: 1,611	Cinderella With A Twist Jun 1, 2006 7:48:50 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by beMMADfabulous on Jun 1, 2006 7:48:50 GMT -5 Well, I couldn't quite find the pics. No matter! Wonderful story! I really enjoy your writings. Good job for completing so much with the stress of school and everything else.
	"But love is blind, and lovers cannot see the pretty follies that themselves commit." - William Shakespeare

zoeteproet Celebrating graduation at the Leaving Feast I hope Albus isn't jealous... Posts: 402	Cinderella With A Twist Jun 1, 2006 10:31:04 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by zoeteproet on Jun 1, 2006 10:31:04 GMT -5 A very beautiful chapter, I hope Minerva will have fun at the ball, and I love the fairy godmother idea!
	To be stupid, selfish, and have good health are three requirements for happiness, though if stupidity is lacking, all is lost.

Leaves of Green Getting career advice from McGonagall We are Albus and Minerva's Secret Keepers Posts: 266	Cinderella With A Twist Jun 6, 2006 16:43:59 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Leaves of Green on Jun 6, 2006 16:43:59 GMT -5 Oh, update soon!!! I love the twist!!! Sincerly, Sophie Langdon
	We are Albus and Minerva's Secret Keepers

alison Prefect Posts: 104	Cinderella With A Twist Jun 7, 2006 13:35:14 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by alison on Jun 7, 2006 13:35:14 GMT -5 Oh, I love the description! And this is a very interesting view of the cinderella fairy-tale. Please continue!

alison Prefect Posts: 104	Cinderella With A Twist Jun 12, 2006 23:02:07 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by alison on Jun 12, 2006 23:02:07 GMT -5 What an unexpected twist! Love the description, as usual. The tone is also nice and light. Thanks for sharing!

beMMADfabulous Professor of Transfiguration Lost & unsure, I opened my hand, & she held it like sinking sand. Posts: 1,611	Cinderella With A Twist Jun 13, 2006 9:15:07 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by beMMADfabulous on Jun 13, 2006 9:15:07 GMT -5 pouts She lost one of her earrings! Really great job. I wish I could write as light and easy-going as you. ;D
	"But love is blind, and lovers cannot see the pretty follies that themselves commit." - William Shakespeare

Herzele Professor of Transfiguration Posts: 629	Cinderella With A Twist Jun 13, 2006 10:43:45 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Herzele on Jun 13, 2006 10:43:45 GMT -5 lol That's a great idea !!!!!!!! I love that update ! Can't wait to see how you continue it !
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Jessabelle Professor of Transfiguration Minerva McGonagall ~ A Fierce Lioness Posts: 670	Cinderella With A Twist Jun 13, 2006 15:23:02 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Jessabelle on Jun 13, 2006 15:23:02 GMT -5 Good update! I like that you had her lose her earring! Your original twist on this age old story is appreciated! Update again soon! - Jess
	They used to call me Snow White, but then I drifted. - Mae West

gmshed Member of Dumbledore's Army There's no point in being grown-up if you can't be childish sometimes Posts: 217	Cinderella With A Twist Jun 25, 2006 4:08:34 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by gmshed on Jun 25, 2006 4:08:34 GMT -5 Love the twist! Hoping for an update.

zoeteproet Celebrating graduation at the Leaving Feast I hope Albus isn't jealous... Posts: 402	Cinderella With A Twist Jun 25, 2006 12:59:38 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by zoeteproet on Jun 25, 2006 12:59:38 GMT -5 Aah, love this fic, hope things will be getting beter between Min and the King.
	To be stupid, selfish, and have good health are three requirements for happiness, though if stupidity is lacking, all is lost.

mcgonagallrocks Professor of Transfiguration Screw 'em if they can't take a joke! Posts: 772	Cinderella With A Twist Jun 28, 2006 12:51:24 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by mcgonagallrocks on Jun 28, 2006 12:51:24 GMT -5 I love this story despite the fact I haven't reviewed in a LONG time. I've been reading it all along and love it. **Endora
	xXx I don't wanna talk About things we've gone through Though it's hurting me Now it's history I've played all my cards And that's what you've done too Nothing more to say No more ace to play

bethj4013 Prefect Posts: 131	Cinderella With A Twist Feb 3, 2007 16:24:40 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by bethj4013 on Feb 3, 2007 16:24:40 GMT -5 darn it all those dumbledore men are nothing but trouble. Please post more soon

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Cinderella With A Twist Feb 9, 2007 19:47:45 GMT -5

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Post by Aurinko on Feb 9, 2007 19:47:45 GMT -5

A right royal mixup there. Love this. Never did like the Cinderella story much in general, but this is lovely. I liked the 'third time's the charm' with the dress! Fairy godmothers can be trouble. And their market meeting was great--as was Minerva's response. Hope you'll continue the story soon!

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-- Tim Liebe

elivania Prefect From The Far Side Of The Veil Posts: 126	Cinderella With A Twist Feb 13, 2007 19:06:13 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by elivania on Feb 13, 2007 19:06:13 GMT -5 You are leaving me hanging! Agh! What a great start. I can't wait for more! Eli
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harmonydumbledore Professor of Transfiguration JK is sorrly mistaken about my parents. We will be avenged! Muhaha! Posts: 818	Cinderella With A Twist Mar 11, 2008 21:53:25 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by harmonydumbledore on Mar 11, 2008 21:53:25 GMT -5 Please write more. I have to know what happens to our cinderalla. GThis is a great story though I love it!
	I totally love Albus and Minerva! If I was a witch and in their world, I would so be their daughter. <img style="visibility:hidden;width:0px;height:0px;" border=0 width=0 height=0 src="http://counters.gigya.com/wildfire/IMP/CXNID=2000002.0NXC/bTxJmxPTEyNTQzMzUzNjQ1OTImcHQ9MTI1NDMzNTM5NTg4NCZwPTM5Njk4MSZkPWhhcnJ5X3BvdHRlcl9xdWl6Jmc9MSZvPTFhNzJlZjRkOGFhNTQzNDA5NWU4MWRjNGY3YWU5MmEz.gif" /><font

catekat Guest	Cinderella With A Twist Aug 30, 2009 23:04:50 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by catekat on Aug 30, 2009 23:04:50 GMT -5 How sad.. I really hope this fic hasn't been abandoned. It's very good. Really great idea for a story.

sonataeternal At the Quidditch World Cup Posts: 90	Cinderella With A Twist Oct 23, 2010 14:07:20 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by sonataeternal on Oct 23, 2010 14:07:20 GMT -5 please don't abandon us yet! I just got here and I already love it
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