Hold on

[minervasong]

Title: Hold On
Rating: PG-13 (but that's because of one word: A n g s t. Get your minds out of the gutter!)
Pairing: I dare you to guess.
Author's Note: Hello, it is I, bringing to you lovely readers another poem of mine. Apart from the fact that this poem is not precisely recent either, I love it the most. And so, I present you...

Hold on

Hold on more tightly, my dear,
The goddess sent to me,
For even though you don’t think so,
I’m enveloped by your beauty.

Hold on more tightly, my flower,
I’ll be here when you wake
I’ll kiss you too when the sun rises
And again at every mistake.

Hold on more tightly, my darling,
You’re stronger than you know
My death is not the end
When it’s time for me to go

Hold on more tightly, my Tabby,
They will never see your tears
I will and I must admit
Your sobs add to my years

Hold on more tightly, my love,
I know that you will go far
For life is not worth living
Until you’ve touched every star

Hold on more tightly, my treasure,
Until you cannot hold anymore
For tomorrow is another day
With stars and sunshine galore.

Hold on more tightly, my shining emerald,
I beg to only please
For when troubled with life’s puzzles,
And shrank to shaking knees,
I’ll take you away
and carry you home
Where we’ve got forever to stay.

© 2008 October, Minervasong/Skrewtkeeper

[goldencat]

I loved it. It really touched me.

''For life is not worth living
Until you’ve touched every star''

It's my favorite line of your poem. Somehow it's the way I'm thinking at the moment and the reason why I've decided to live in another country for a couple of month.
Altogether: Well done

[phantomgirl]

Loved it, very angsty, very well written

Writing awesome poems is a talent...that is hard to master
I really respect poetry

[Sparrabether]

Wow, fantastic poem - very angsty.
"For when troubled with life’s puzzles,
And shrank to shaking knees,"
Loved it