Poem for you...

[Desdemona]

;D Hi guys it's been ages since anyone posted here hasn't it, OK so this a poem (obviously) but i don't know what to call it, the muse just struck me when i was walking home, i was absolutely freezing, i should try that more often eh?


So here it is

Had a dream last night, it was so real
Now I think I know, how you would feel
Saw your face so clear, your eyes bright too
It was just a dream, I could swear it was you


Thought I felt your skin, as you lay by my side
My hair brushed from my face, as you did so many nights
Felt my body get warm, melting closer to you
It was just a dream, I could swear it was true


Your voice was the same, as I’ve heard you talk to me
The words were soft and sincere, you made me believe
Heard a crack in your voice, as you spoke of me and you
It was just a dream, but I could swear it was you


Smelled the scent of you, as your cheek touched mine
Brought my heart to skip a beat, the feeling was divine
I fell back in love, I must tell you it’s true
It was just a dream, but I wish it was you…

Does you like, its kind of sad, its about after Albus's death and Min misses him

Now go cheer yourself up again ;D

[minervasong]

Oh, that was sad! Now what I am supposed to read to make it all better again?!

I really like the style; ending with the variations of 'It was just a dream, but I could swear it was you' was just so perfect...

I think your title should be 'A Wish' (because then that is revealed in the final line...) Or something... I really hate coming up with titles, so my sympathy lies with you.

~Minervasong

[goldencat]

Short and sad but I loved it. I also love the style. It fits perfectly.
You should really try it more often. As I can read it has a good result.
And as a title? Well, I'm also not that good in that.
'the wish' would fit quite well or something like 'dreaming of you'