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Post by osusprinks on Mar 24, 2007 16:57:07 GMT -5
A/N: Written for the Hideaway. It's a 200 word drabble using "Calm and cool" as the first line. Thanks for reading!
Disclaimer: Not mine. Calm and cool.He steepled his fingers, resting his brow against his thumbs. He would conquer this. After all, she was just a girl, a young woman starting her life. She had been his student, yet her beautiful, dark eyes had seen more horrors than was fair at any age, maturing her beyond her twenty-one years. Coming home to find her parents murdered in their bed had been just the beginning; she had fought at his side during the war and he could not have shielded her from the atrocities she had witnessed, even if she had wished it. During battle and their many games of chess, she proved herself to be his equal, not just in strategy or skill, but in everyway. He loved her, but he could not and would not allow himself to show her. Calm...She entered his room at headquarters softly, but he recognized her footsteps. His heart raced as she moved closer and he raised his head. ...and cool.A heated blush spread over his cheeks as he took in her long, silky nightgown and loose hair. Calm and cool, he thought even as she knelt before him and without a word, kissed him, filling him with heat and passion.
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Post by laundry basket on Mar 24, 2007 17:09:54 GMT -5
Oh, that was excellent. The stuff Min's lived through.... but this was a great drabble. Good job!
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Post by mmadlyinlove on Mar 24, 2007 17:34:28 GMT -5
Nice. I liked it a lot. ~mmadlyinlove~
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Post by crystalpheonixeyes on Mar 24, 2007 22:12:52 GMT -5
That was Excellent!
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Post by furandfeathers on Mar 25, 2007 10:11:31 GMT -5
I just adore your fluffy little stories! sooo cute!
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Post by McGonagallsGirl on Mar 25, 2007 21:49:10 GMT -5
too short, my friend. that's my only complaint. that it ended so soon
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Post by CrankyCauldron on Mar 30, 2007 18:01:31 GMT -5
Very nicely done! i'm all tingly.. mmm, tee hee hee ..
Bravo!
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Post by albus1sttabby on Mar 8, 2011 13:26:24 GMT -5
Nice!!!!!!!
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Post by Mandy McGonagall-Dumbledore on Jan 25, 2016 16:10:51 GMT -5
Lovely! *~*
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