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Post by revolutionaryetude on Jul 26, 2007 8:40:59 GMT -5
I've been reading this on FF.net and I have enjoyed it. I think you have tackled the student teacher relationship without making Dumbledore seem a perverted man. Good Job
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Post by Apocalypticat on Jul 26, 2007 11:36:38 GMT -5
Incredible! Stunning writing—I particularly love your descriptions of their eyes—and a great portrayal of a carefully developed relationship.  I will be waiting for updates!  |
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Post by kankulex on Jul 26, 2007 11:57:13 GMT -5
Very interesting and enjoyable indeed! I love the way you described their relationship... It seems really realistic to me.
Great job!
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Post by Drake on Jul 26, 2007 14:31:41 GMT -5
Oh, darn. *sideways snappy thing* Thwarted again. I liked it, though. Especially her fourth year. Was sweet.  And a welcome deviation from the standard "Minnie is a fox and gets every man she wants" or "Minnie is a fox and has a bad self esteem so she dates losers and gets emotionally scarred." |
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Post by laundry basket on Jul 27, 2007 8:33:53 GMT -5
I was following this on ff.net and was delighted to find it here! I love the way you write, it's so descriptive and vivid. A wonderful portrayal of their relationship as well. I'll be waiting anxiously for the next chapter! |
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Post by Leaves of Green on Jul 27, 2007 9:05:38 GMT -5
I just love the relationship and how you wrote both Min and Albus. I particularly liked chapter five.
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Post by tabbykittenkat on Sept 1, 2007 12:47:29 GMT -5
ahh!! that was fantabulous I love the tango they are playing!!!! and goes through each year, however one question, are you leaving it like that??? or are you writing more, anyways, I also loved the last line, anyways, great fantastic job!!!
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Post by Rachel on Sept 2, 2007 16:14:08 GMT -5
I just read the whole thing and it's brilliant.I hope there's more to come!
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Post by laundry basket on Sept 2, 2007 20:37:36 GMT -5
Loving it still! I love how you write both of them. Minerva is teh awesome  Can't wait for an update! |
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Post by revolutionaryetude on Sept 2, 2007 22:08:26 GMT -5
I have been reading this on ff.net and I just love it to death. I can't wait until your next update.
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Post by mmadcrazyfan on Sept 13, 2007 15:30:29 GMT -5
ahhh i love this. so so so so so much. MOREE please <!3
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Post by augustine86 on Sept 28, 2007 20:21:50 GMT -5
It is quite good. Just read it all in a row and you can really see the progression.
Please more!
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Post by zaza on Aug 10, 2009 15:19:49 GMT -5
Aww this story is great! Please keep on updating it, it's a really good one, and I'm curious about the next |
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Post by Jessabelle on Aug 12, 2009 11:15:01 GMT -5
I am so glad that you updated this story. Please do not fall of the face of the earth again and leave this story behind for too long because it is simply delightful to read. I look forward to seeing more of it. - Jess |
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Post by demonessraven on Aug 25, 2009 18:58:34 GMT -5
I love this story!!!!
Minerva is wonderful!!!! I liked very much her reactions towards Albus, specially when she slamed her hands on his desk and when she kissed him.
¨The first was that normalcy between Albus Dumbledore and Minerva McGonagall was unattainable. The second was that she hadn’t forgiven him. The third was that he hadn’t forgiven himself. And the fifth was that he found her very, very, absurdly, improbably, and maybe even dangerously attractive.¨
I think you forgot writing a reason there cause you put ¨And the fifth...¨ and it should be the fourth.
Please update soon!!!
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Post by mrsdumbledores on Oct 2, 2009 6:46:17 GMT -5
:DI'm happy now.... I do love your story, dear...
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Post by horcruxhorror on Oct 21, 2009 18:48:47 GMT -5
plz update soon and some1 pm me when this is i will never remember to check
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Post by albus1sttabby on Feb 17, 2011 14:04:50 GMT -5
I do love your story!! Please continue as soon as possible. ;D
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Post by mmadfanatic on Aug 25, 2012 8:27:04 GMT -5
Eh mah gooo!!!
The story's so cool!
Please update!!!
And PM me so I can watch over the story!!
Do you stick to canon?
Hope not, 'cause I rather like the idea of them having a kid or something...
But overall its good!!!
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Post by Mandy McGonagall-Dumbledore on Oct 20, 2015 13:12:27 GMT -5
Nooo!!! You can't leave us like this!!! o.O Please end this story!!! I love it!!!
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Post by tedioussphinx on Dec 21, 2020 21:08:15 GMT -5
A/N: Uh! I'm new! Le gasp! But I don't bite, most of the time, and... la-di-da. That's pretty much it. I hope I'm doing this right. Also, here is the story on fanfiction, so... I would do anything for anybody who reviewed there as well/instead. This is rated for all ages at the time being, and... summary: Albus is a Professor, and Minerva is a student. The problem is, they're having trouble remembering it. [/i]
Chapter 1: Lemon Drops (Minerva's first year)Late, late, late! Minerva mentally screamed as she tucked her books under her arm and shot down the hallway, a one-person wrecking crew tearing through clusters of students with no reservations whatsoever. Her green eyes were narrowed with determination, her narrow arms pumped as if she were about to take flight, and soon Minerva found herself turning the knob of the door to an empty room-- she sighed heavily with relief. She had feared for a moment that she was going to be late for being early to her first class of the school year. Looking at the peculiarly aslant clock hanging on the wall parallel to her, she smiled thinly with satisfaction; ten minutes before any other students arrived at least. It would give her plenty of time to familiarize herself with the classroom, and potentially the Transfiguration Professor. Tucking a tendril of black hair that had fallen from her bun behind her ear, the eleven year old walked with a certain amount of purpose further into the classroom, scanning the area for any sign of her new teacher. She needn't have worried about locating him. Albus Dumbledore sat cross-legged in the front of the room, and his vibrant violet robes were dotted with eccentric celestial patterns that sparkled brightly whenever he breathed and rustled the fabric. No, he wasn't hard to spot at all. His auburn hair was long and neat, coming just below his shoulders, although Minerva got the feeling he did not plan on cutting it any time soon. His beard was just beginning to grow, it seemed, and the frizzy ginger tresses softened his sharp features considerably. His eyes flicked open as if she had addressed him, and Professor Dumbledore stared at her with a queer smile on his thin lips, his blue eyes twinkling merrily behind half-moon spectacles. She liked him immediately. "Would you like a lemon drop, Miss McGonagall?" He asked her calmly, waving his hand airily and summoning a small box from his desk. He lurched forwards with a swiftness she had not anticipated and held the container out to her, his eyebrows raised curiously. Dumbledore's eyes seemed to probe her of their own accord though they never left her face; she had the oddest sensation that he was looking more through than at her. "Excuse me, sir... a what?" Dumbledore chuckled and peeled the lid away, revealing a mass of several yellow candies. He nodded encouragingly and Minerva smiled tentatively, reaching her hand in and taking one out. She examined it for a split second before popping it into her mouth-- a notion which she immediately regretted. Her lips puckered with the sourness of the treat, and she knew she must have looked rather strange; her features were severe to begin with, but as she sucked in her cheeks in a cursory reaction, all of the skin on her young face was pulled tight like the strings of a violin. Her face turned red as she swallowed the lemon drop and Dumbledore laughed once more. Nodding her head respectfully she turned away and sat down on one of the silver chairs waiting, and spent the rest of the ten minutes rearranging her books, feeling utterly mortified and wondering whether or not she should revoke the thought of liking the Professor. Minerva watched her new classmates arrive through the corners of her eyes, and noticed with some sort of pride that Dumbledore did not offer any of them a lemon drop. [/quote] |
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I will be waiting for updates! 
