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Post by Alexannah on Dec 10, 2010 14:25:09 GMT -5
I’m looking for a beta-reader(s) for a fairly long story.
It was my first proper fanfiction idea, and the plot has since changed and developed a lot. I have several chapters posted on FFnet. The story is called Phoenix Tears.
It’s a sixth AND seventh year fic, taking certain elements from HBP but with a lot added. The ships are Harry/Ginny, Albus/Minerva, and Sirius/Lily. Possibly some Ron/Hermione.
Plot: Sirius’ death has brought Harry and Albus closer, and while Horcruxes are a main topic of discussion, Harry’s noticed something missing in Albus’ relationship with Minerva and wants to do something about it. He’s started having visions of Voldemort again, only with a twist, and although Albus thinks taking up Occlumency again is a good idea, he’s wary of teaching Harry directly. Albus decides to share certain facts with Harry about his parents, but there never seems to be a good time …
I could write more but would end up spoiling for anyone reading the thread who then goes to read the fic themselves. Please reply or PM if interested.
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Post by Ashlynn Minerva Rose on Dec 10, 2010 16:34:37 GMT -5
This looks absolutely AWESOME! I would be more than happy to help. My specialty is definitely grammar, but I'm fairly good at editing in general (mainly because I like doing it). Let me know if you're still interested! Feel free to IM me, PM me or...whatever.
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Post by Alexannah on Dec 11, 2010 5:10:09 GMT -5
OK I will PM
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Post by McGonagallsGirl on Jan 7, 2011 17:09:09 GMT -5
Me too If you'd like another, I'm in as well. --MG
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