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Post by Orion's Guard on Aug 15, 2007 15:07:33 GMT -5
Quite gut wrenching for a romance story, but in a good, caring about the characters kind of way.
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Post by beMMADfabulous on Aug 15, 2007 16:42:59 GMT -5
Dedication: This fic is written for beMMADfabulous, for always reviewing and for writing such wonderful stories. Aww, thank you so much! *blushes* You're so sweet.  Orion's Guard is right- this is such a gut-wrenching story, but I really like it, and I can't wait to see where you're going with it. Congrats on it being your first chapter fic, because I know how hard that step is (especially considering I haven't taken it yet!  ). It's so sad to think that their relationship wasn't working out, but I do hope they'll find a way to get it back together. ;D |
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Post by maritelske on Aug 15, 2007 17:48:53 GMT -5
You write so beautifully EloquentPhoenix. I especially loved the line 'That night she curled up around his pillow, though it no longer smelled of him.' I thought that was just perfect - it explained so very much in so little words, and I felt truly emotional for the not-so-happy duo.
I hope they can find a way to push through it!
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Post by tabbycat on Aug 15, 2007 17:53:13 GMT -5
*happy sighing*
I really felt it. Eagerly awaiting more ;D
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Post by childminerva on Aug 16, 2007 11:13:24 GMT -5
Great start...I can't wait to see what happens next!
*sits staring at inbox waiting for second chapter*
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Annie Laurie
First-year Student
Too bad she didn't read the fanfic at the MMAD boards!
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Post by Annie Laurie on Aug 16, 2007 13:53:43 GMT -5
Oh dear, that was, for lack of a better word, eloquent. I can't wait for an update.
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). It's so sad to think that their relationship wasn't working out, but I do hope they'll find a way to get it back together. ;D 
