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Post by silvertabby on Nov 8, 2007 5:57:03 GMT -5
It was a dark cold night. The wind was blowing and it was raining. 5 nails, cluched in a cat like fashion were grasping Dumbledore's forearm. The woman was muttering under her breath, in something that sounded like Galic. He didn't get a word, but one thing was sure, it wasn't something too kind. 'Here!' barked Mad Eye Moody. He and Porf. McGonagall were acompanying Dumbledore on a very important mission. The mission had gone wrong and they were now somewhere in the Irish countryside, in the middle of a thunder storm. 'What?' 'Here' said Moody pointing at an old truck.' I't abbandoned.' The other too changed disgusted looks. 'Oh, what a joy!' exclaimed Prof. McGonagall climbing in the truck. 'There you go, come on, Albus!' said Moody, as if inviting the man to his cousy house. Dumbledore got into the truck. It was better, though not what one could call cowsy. 'Turn arownd. I wanna change' 'Wat?!' 'Yes, I'm not catching a cold, even if it means changing infront of you too' 'I asure you, Minerva, we don't have anything against it.' said Moody grinning. 'Oh, shut up!' The esteamed Albus Dumbledore, the greatest wizard of all times was pearing at his deputy, a hightly respectable lady. She was sexy. He couldn't believe he was thinking that. Moody nudged him in the ribs. TBC
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Post by TheGryffindorSeeker on Nov 8, 2007 18:32:39 GMT -5
lol oooo very interesting, more please =]
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Post by silvertabby on Nov 11, 2007 15:21:46 GMT -5
'Albus, she's hot, but that's quite enough, you're foaming at the mouth. If she knew where your eyes are glued she'd hex you' whispered moody. Dumbledore composed himself. Yes, that was not proper, not proper at all. But he couldn't resist it. Just another little glance... 'Headmaster?! What were you doing?' asked an angry and flushed McGonagall, clothes on. 'What did he look like doing to you, professor?' asked Moody grinning. TBC
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Post by mmadforever on Nov 24, 2007 15:04:49 GMT -5
i love it please post soon
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Post by Blue on Nov 24, 2007 18:30:25 GMT -5
I love it. The idea of Albus foaming at the mouth really made me giggle
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Post by McGonagallsGirl on Jun 29, 2008 6:44:15 GMT -5
Cute! A few grammatical errors here and there, perhaps if you had someone proof read it for you? But otherwise, very good.
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Post by tabbyphoenix on Sept 25, 2008 10:41:16 GMT -5
Want an update! True about the grammar but I'm more curious about the plot! Cheers!
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Post by minerva92 on Dec 6, 2008 11:33:08 GMT -5
this is just such an good beginning... love to read more about it...
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