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Falling
Jan 6, 2006 18:04:22 GMT -5
Post by EloquentPhoenix on Jan 6, 2006 18:04:22 GMT -5
Falling A/N: eek, similar to Girl and Boy, it's off a blog again, what can I say? I need to stop writing fluff. There.
Disclaimer: JKR's not mine, idea from a blog thing which you can read at the bottom.“Minerva…” “Yes?” “Your hair, it’s coming down from its bun” “Damn, not again,” she replied putting her hands to her head trying to scrap her bun back together, this was the second time today; these pins would have to go. “Don’t…” he said, staring at her, “Your hair is so very beautiful. You’re beautiful Minerva” She stared at him for a second, searching his eyes, afraid of what she might see; afraid of how she would react. She mumbled that she had to go and rushed towards the office door. She’d seen his eyes, but she couldn’t risk it, she couldn’t bear to be heartbroken again. He stopped her at the door with just a hand on her shoulder, turning her around. She drowned in his eyes, moaned softly into his mouth as he kissed her, allowed her body to be crushed to his, wrapped her arms around him. Wrenching herself away she blushed furiously and tried to run. He stopped her again. “We can’t do this.” “Why can’t we? Do you not feel the way I do?” “I do, it’s just…” “Just what?” “I don’t want to fall again” “It’s different this time,” he said, knowing how she’d been hurt so many times before. “Why is it?” “Because this time I’ll catch you” Finite
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Falling
Jan 6, 2006 23:14:49 GMT -5
Post by ginger newts on Jan 6, 2006 23:14:49 GMT -5
Aww, I love that last line. So syrupy sweet it makes my teeth hurt.
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Post by tanja on Jan 7, 2006 5:04:03 GMT -5
OMG !!! That was soooo...wow..sweet, moving, perfect, just wow... ;D
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Post by angeldust on Jan 7, 2006 8:05:36 GMT -5
The last line is brilliant. And no you do NOT need to stop writing fluff this is a perfect way to wake up in the morning!
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Falling
Jan 8, 2006 13:47:46 GMT -5
Post by TheGryffindorSeeker on Jan 8, 2006 13:47:46 GMT -5
awww loved it
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Falling
Jan 8, 2006 14:10:40 GMT -5
Post by gingerkitten on Jan 8, 2006 14:10:40 GMT -5
This is just so cute!
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Falling
Jan 8, 2006 14:43:13 GMT -5
Post by ismaco on Jan 8, 2006 14:43:13 GMT -5
I need to stop writing fluff. WHAT?!?!. Are you out of your mind?!? No... you CAN't stop writing fluff... that was SO good! AWWW!! I loved it!!! ;D Isabel
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Falling
Jan 8, 2006 21:52:48 GMT -5
Post by Jessabelle on Jan 8, 2006 21:52:48 GMT -5
This was very good. Short and sweet .. Just what I needed!
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Falling
Nov 22, 2006 23:43:30 GMT -5
Post by nicolerose on Nov 22, 2006 23:43:30 GMT -5
CUTE! i love it very vyer much
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Falling
Nov 23, 2006 21:15:35 GMT -5
Post by ιady ταвz on Nov 23, 2006 21:15:35 GMT -5
it is...
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Falling
Nov 24, 2006 4:09:59 GMT -5
Post by StormAngel on Nov 24, 2006 4:09:59 GMT -5
woots~~ love it!!
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oliviasnape
First-year Student
I just love this one!!! Who wouldn't want to cut him off?? I sure would!!!
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Falling
Mar 31, 2007 18:51:05 GMT -5
Post by oliviasnape on Mar 31, 2007 18:51:05 GMT -5
Yeah that was so awesome. I absoluty love AD/MM stories. But yours I think is so cool.
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Falling
Mar 31, 2007 21:21:15 GMT -5
Post by McGonagallsGirl on Mar 31, 2007 21:21:15 GMT -5
Gaw!!
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Falling
Apr 1, 2007 13:07:48 GMT -5
Post by osusprinks on Apr 1, 2007 13:07:48 GMT -5
I loved this Elo. So fantastic. It's amazing what a simple blog can lead to!
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Falling
Aug 13, 2007 3:41:49 GMT -5
Post by hehacla on Aug 13, 2007 3:41:49 GMT -5
Aww very cute. And don´t you dare stop writing fluff! Every fluff peace a human can get (spesially from ADMM...) is needed! My stupid filosofy, my apologises.
hehacla
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Falling
Aug 13, 2007 16:54:53 GMT -5
Post by TheGryffindorSeeker on Aug 13, 2007 16:54:53 GMT -5
loved that!!! =] last line fluffness =]
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Clocher.
First-year Student
"J'étais sans toi."
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Falling
Jul 25, 2011 17:22:44 GMT -5
Post by Clocher. on Jul 25, 2011 17:22:44 GMT -5
This was so cute!
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Falling
Dec 7, 2015 1:41:16 GMT -5
via mobile
Post by Mandy McGonagall-Dumbledore on Dec 7, 2015 1:41:16 GMT -5
Awww that was cute!! *~*
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