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Post by crystalpheonixeyes on Mar 6, 2007 23:32:51 GMT -5
A/N: Written for the hideaway drabble contest. Let me know what you think. Should I contiune or not?? An image. That’s all she was seen as. A stern, not-to-cross, powerful witch with no emotions at all. Some of the notes that she had collected over the years were horrendous. Each one, like a match, had set a fire to her heart, and she could feel it burn with regret. Regrets of many things, not just pertaining to her appearance. The students assumed that her Professionalism carried into her personal life as well, but that was not the case. What would they say if the could see her now, hair flowing down her back, one shoe on, a tube of lipstick in her hand, and pantyhose halfway up her arse? They would not be able to say much that is for sure. However, it was not one of the students who happened to happen upon this sight, but the lucky headmaster who got an eye-full of his favorite witch. “Albus!” she shrieked, jumping towards her couch to cover herself with the tartan blanket that was laying there. “I was on my way to meet you, getting ready you see….Wait, just a second! How can you just walking in here like you own the place! Is knocking on my door not a necessity anymo……..”She was cut off however by a finger pressed to her lips. “Do you know how adorable you are when flustered?” he asked quietly. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ A/N: So Yes or no? Let me know please what you think.
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Post by osusprinks on Mar 7, 2007 2:04:06 GMT -5
The only thing I would say writing wise was that I think you meant tube not tub of lipstick and I don't know if I would use "image" in the first sentence. It didn't seem as strong as you would want.
Other than that I really liked it. I loved the image of Minerva trying to get ready and being so flustered. That was hilarious. The first part, about her students' thoughts of her was very sad. Thanks for sharing! Good luck in the contest!
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Post by childminerva on Mar 7, 2007 15:47:21 GMT -5
lol...this was great. Best of luck with the contest!
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Post by beMMADfabulous on Mar 7, 2007 16:40:29 GMT -5
Yay!! That was great. ;D Excellent job.
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Post by morethanacrush on Mar 7, 2007 17:16:56 GMT -5
I vote you continue it I loved it! Adorable! Love Cody*
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Post by Uhura on Mar 7, 2007 19:20:18 GMT -5
I LOVE this. Yes, continue it
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Post by ιady ταвz on Mar 7, 2007 22:53:40 GMT -5
yes please do, it was so good so far...please continue
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Post by DaBao on Mar 12, 2007 0:41:16 GMT -5
HOW CUTE!! Please continue it, don't leave it!
I wonder if they were already in a relationship when that happened. It would be so funny if they weren't and he just comes out of nowhere and does that.
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Post by Ivy_Wize on Mar 23, 2007 9:31:39 GMT -5
Wow... keep writing.
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Post by kissofdeath on Mar 25, 2007 12:33:13 GMT -5
LOL!
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Post by mmadlyinlove on Mar 25, 2007 12:47:51 GMT -5
LOL! Nice! Hahaha. ~mmadlyinlove~
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Post by twinkle on Apr 9, 2007 16:25:09 GMT -5
I'd like you to continue it... I would love to see him explain how he just "happened to be there". ;o)
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Post by McGonagallsGirl on Apr 9, 2007 16:29:08 GMT -5
Hee. A definite yes. Carry on, my fellow shipper. Carry on.
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