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Post by beMMADfabulous on Oct 19, 2007 20:26:51 GMT -5
A/N:: No, it's not yet New Year's, but this is a New Year’s fic (obviously, if you’ll read the challenge prompt word...), so it occurs at the 10 second countdown to the New Year.
FanFic 100 Challenge #:: 095- New YearCountdown to Love TENThey catch each other’s eye. Unspoken words and passions waft in the air between them. NINEHe smiles at her as his heart pounds so hard it feels as if it will burst out of his chest. EIGHTShe smiles back at him, her emerald eyes shining with the reflections of swirls of fireworks from the sky. SEVENMinerva takes a step towards him, and his soft lemon scent gently caresses her nose. SIXAlbus, longing desperately for the nearness of her, brushes Minerva’s hair with his fingertips. FIVEShe slips her hand into his. The tender warmth rushes through her body like a summer breeze through a lush valley. FOURThey are locked in the moment; nothing else, no one else matters. THREEDid their hearts just skip a beat? TWONeither can breathe. In an instant they feel as if they are melting into each other. Yes, this must be what they mean by falling in love. ONETheir lips become one in a moment of burning intensity. The world around them disappears into nothingness. There is no concept of time; there is only eternity. “I love you, Albus.” “And I you, Minerva.” THE END
A/N:: Sappy, yes? Ah, but for that purpose, I have free toothbrushes for all who read and review. lol *pats my muse, Tempest, on the head for coming back to me*
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Post by hehacla on Oct 20, 2007 5:32:05 GMT -5
Oh, it was good. A bit sappy yes, but I liked it that way. Thank you for an other wonderful fic!
hehacla
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Post by lemondrop on Oct 20, 2007 7:09:42 GMT -5
reviewed it on ff.net but now I'm doing it again: I loved it! Sooo cute and sooo much fluffiness "The tender warmth rushes through her body like a summer breeze through a lush valley." -> Don't know why but I love this sentence! Really good work! lemondrop
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Post by jrs on Oct 20, 2007 9:19:49 GMT -5
sappy-licious!! yay! Nice fic to start off my saturday. Thanks! There should be a "countdown" to halloween... hm.
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Post by kankulex on Oct 20, 2007 10:06:45 GMT -5
Thanks a lot for the story... and the toothbrush! Nice fic indeed!
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Post by osusprinks on Oct 20, 2007 12:08:16 GMT -5
I loved the sappiness. It was just what the doctor ordered after JKR's news.
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Post by TheGryffindorSeeker on Oct 20, 2007 17:40:59 GMT -5
awwwwwww swish fic, loved it ! =]
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Post by admmityourlove on Oct 20, 2007 18:38:37 GMT -5
This had more sugar than my grandmother's triple chocolate brownie sundaes. After another ADMM ship catastrophe today, the sweet stuff hits the spot. Cavaties galore!
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Post by Mandy McGonagall-Dumbledore on Feb 1, 2016 11:45:11 GMT -5
Awwww that was so cute!!!
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