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Post by Lady Lavendar on Aug 12, 2005 12:38:13 GMT -5
This was so sad! Some how I can see how he might have done this. Great job.
LL
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Post by snowcat on Aug 12, 2005 14:23:55 GMT -5
the thougt of him doing this to her makes me get goosebumps.
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Post by childminerva on Oct 27, 2005 20:16:43 GMT -5
That was really different. The idea of a Vessel is very creepy, but it was a great songfic.
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Post by angeldust on Oct 28, 2005 5:22:57 GMT -5
WOW! That was so dark I love it! I love how your fic just seem to flow into the song, and the thought that our Albus could indeed have done something like this. Bravo!
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Post by tanja on Oct 28, 2005 6:45:44 GMT -5
certainly a different kind of story.But a very good one
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Post by rita skeeter on Oct 28, 2005 8:54:01 GMT -5
I love how this is a totally different approach to Albus and Minerva's relationship. Oh dear.....you have me in tears! I also love that song too so really overall this story was great! Nice work  |
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Post by ismaco on Nov 18, 2005 0:04:18 GMT -5
OMG! I've never thought about them that way... Is very well written, but I can't picture him that way! I just can't! Though... I think that it pictures a reality in lots of couples. (sadly!  ) Your idea is VERY original (and very creepy!!  ), and I also love the song! |
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Post by QuillofMinerva on Nov 19, 2005 3:48:23 GMT -5
Gosh how dark and creepy, don't like the thought of Albus doing that to Minerva but you never know, I hope that was never the case though. Well written though despite giving me goosebumps |
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Post by chellec on Dec 12, 2005 3:41:51 GMT -5
Creepy, sad. The last line is a heartbreaker.
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Post by EloquentPhoenix on Jan 2, 2006 7:41:44 GMT -5
Heartbreaking. It keeps you on edge the whole time. Though I just can't see it, can't see Albus that way, or Minerva that way, it was still really good. Different.
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Post by Blue on Jan 8, 2006 17:03:26 GMT -5
That's one of the first fics I've ever read where Albus didn't love Minerva, but you made it seem possible. It's very sad though.
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Post by Nerweniel on Apr 23, 2006 9:04:27 GMT -5
Only just found this one, and I'm utterly fascinated. Of course I don't really want to believe Albus would be capable of this... but you wrote it like it could be possible. As a notorious angst-kid, I applaud  . |
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Post by chellec on May 26, 2006 23:22:39 GMT -5
Creepy, heartbreaking, and incredibly well written.
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Post by Admiral Sun Wentai on May 27, 2006 1:38:10 GMT -5
that story is so eerie, it makes me puke a bit
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Post by blackstar on Jun 1, 2006 15:30:41 GMT -5
Sorry, I couldn't finish reading it.
Albus would never do something like this!! That is complead out of character.
And he is my favorid character in the books, so I am very careful.
I don't like it at all... Sorry
But I think your writing stil is good...
blackstar
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Post by alison on Jun 11, 2006 12:08:43 GMT -5
Interesting twist....slightly disturbing, but I can see where it came from. Still a bit depressing, but well-written. Thanks for sharing!
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Post by EloquentPhoenix on Jun 18, 2006 15:45:22 GMT -5
This song gives me the chills every time I hear it now. So it's very memorable, if *shivers* impossible. Very intense, a lasting effect even after so long. So yeah, that's a good thing by the way.
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Post by misshoneychurch88 on Nov 7, 2006 17:05:46 GMT -5
wow...that was horrible. beautifully written, but horrific. I never thought of him doing anything like that, but somehow I can believe it here. It almost made me cry(for a reference the only time a movie, tv show or book has ever made me cry was the end of HBP, so almost is a big thing from me). Well done, and I'm with EloquentPhoenix, that song gives me the chills now
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Post by mmadfabulous on May 13, 2010 1:01:31 GMT -5
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