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Post by Trulyamused on Jul 29, 2006 13:07:21 GMT -5
Wow. Got love the changing toenail colors. The yellow from Rolanda is great.
A excellent story of moments in a long life.
Truly
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Post by Hogwarts Duo on Jul 29, 2006 14:26:55 GMT -5
Yay for original story ideas! This one caught my eye because you used something so simple as nail polish to reflect so many changes. That was truly inspired!
Loved it to bits!
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Post by crystalpheonixeyes on Jul 29, 2006 15:48:22 GMT -5
wow I loved it. I truly did. It was so sweet and perfect. <33333 it!
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Post by gmshed on Jul 30, 2006 5:04:12 GMT -5
That was so wonderful, I loved the idea of her toenail polish reflecting her mood and recent happenings.
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Post by prodigyviolin101 on Jul 30, 2006 10:11:16 GMT -5
That was masterfully written! I'm so glad you let her go peacefully!
prodigy
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Post by zoeteproet on Jul 30, 2006 10:27:29 GMT -5
Can you believe there are tears in my eyes? The endig was very sad but wonderfully written. I loved the whole story.
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Post by beMMADfabulous on Jul 30, 2006 15:33:53 GMT -5
Gah! That was so sad and so powerful! I really liked it!
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Post by ellieminerva on Jul 30, 2006 16:09:57 GMT -5
I love this story! I think that the changing of the [glow=red,2,300]toenails[/glow](which I love ;D)and of the fish is a great device to show the passing of time! I also love the change from friends to a married couple and her ring!
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Post by alison on Aug 1, 2006 17:05:44 GMT -5
That's an intriguing way to show the passage of time. And it's beautifully written and quite sad as well, but with a nice ending. Thanks for sharing!
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Post by mcgonagallrules on Aug 6, 2006 1:12:12 GMT -5
Ok I'm crying... this was sooo beautiful! My launchcast was playing a song called "Remember Munich" as I was reading this and I swear it was the most hauntingly perfect music for this brilliant story. Bravo!
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Post by furandfeathers on Aug 21, 2006 19:53:28 GMT -5
This is positively gorgeous. Wonderful job!
*Lizz
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